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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Dear Diary in the forum Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago
I really liked it! I would totally write more backstory if I were you. I know that would be hard, because it already states that the reason that she starts this diary is because of the grandfathers death, and that in turn is the reason the book is written.
I really would like to see this as a full-blown book, too.
Sincerely,
Sylvie












