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@missfaeriekaiti, Its much better than my last attempt at something like that. OUCH. I shouldn’t have brought that up.

I thought it helped you learn quite a bit about the different characters.

@missfaeriekatie, I think its good.

@inkling-for-christ

I’ve read it and enjoyed it, but personally, there was a bit too much violence for me (especially in the last two books).

You all have very interesting stories.

@esjohnson

Actually, the story is not going to be very historically accurate. (Is this not clear? (If so, please tell me)), but everything after the pre-prologue is in the book that Edward is reading. Is that dumb? This is my first serious novel, and so I know I’m not very good at it yet.

Oh, I shouldn’t have posted so much, I…[Read more]

@josiah @daeus-lamb @anybody else who can fix this.

Why did my reply disappear? I don’t want to have to write it all out again. (Ok, it wasn’t that much, but it still is annoying.)

@esjohnson @princess-foo @elizabeth @aster @r-m-archer

Are these your whole first chapters? Most of them seem rather short. Not that my chapters are very long, or anything.

Here’s mine. These actually are the prologue and pre-prologue. My first chapter is still in work. The pre-prologue is not having much to do with the rest of the story, but I…[Read more]

Wow, those were all really good. I feel sad after reading all that. I felt like most of those were too morbid (but what do you expect in a death scene), but ours wasn’t, so that’s something I really appreciated about ours.

@wordsmith! You got on my guild!

@ncstokes, unfortanetaly I hardly ever can remember quotes at the right times.

@ncstokes, I like to try to remember quotes, just so that I can imitate Oskar N. Reteep’s hilarious way of speaking. He is the funniest character. If I were ever to get a tattoo it would read, ‘I Like Books’. Though I would be tempted to say, ‘I Love Books’!

@the-golden-light, you’re welcome.

@ncstokes, I LOVE your signature!

@cassie-hartfinh, I like We Are Stronger Than We Think We Are, Step By Step, and some others.

@andrew, I need to write more, but, with work and all…

@cassie-hartfinh, I love  Rich Mullin’s music! I didn’t know there was a movie about him!

@andrew, cool! For some reason I never thought of an animal like that (would you call him an animal) being the main character. But, its a good idea.

@gabriellepollack, thanks for the pickles!

I vote the garden idea I guess. I won’t be able to help write though. (How are we supposed to write this anyway?) I don’t know how to write Alzheimer’s, though I do think that sounds good.