Lynn Renard

@missfaeriekaiti The dabnors are a really cool concept! Hope you get evacuated safely.

I have two story worlds right now, so I guess I’ll do the one Moonwatcher is set in. (I don’t know if you remember, but Moonwatcher is the story I posted a blurb about for critique a little while ago.) I didn’t spend a ton of time on worldbuilding elements that…[Read more]

@corkybookworm @missfaeriekaiti @nuetrobolt @happyholly_c @brandon-miller @rillumen

So based on everyone’s favorites so far, here is an idea:

What if we posted a thread where everyone who wanted to participate posted their “writing plan” for the week (like 30 minutes on Monday, and hour on Tuesday, break on Wednesday…etc.) and we had a mini…[Read more]

@missfaeriekaiti @corkybookworm Thanks so much for the feedback! I knew that last line wasn’t quite hitting the right note, but I couldn’t figure out why. By the way, if either of you want to read the first chapter, I posted it this morning on my blog here. 🙂

@missfaeriekaiti Oh no! I hope you’re feeling better!!

@quinn-ofallon Ooh, Lynn makes a good point with that last line. I personally loved it cause it was exciting and drew me in, but perhaps you might consider something more open-ended that still has the same strong sway? Maybe like “But when everyone you trust is a liar, how can you find the…[Read more]

@missfaeriekaiti @graceabounds2129 and @happyholly_c Thanks for the congrats, guys! XD MY SISTER AND I GOT OUR BRIDESMAIDS DRESSES THIS WEEK! They came like a whole month early! So that’s super awesome!

Haha, I was supposed to post in the critique folder and totally forgot! I’ll see if I can scrounge something up this weekend! But, please, y’all…[Read more]

@quinn-ofallon Great suggestions! I kind of rotate between the sub-verb; clause, sub-verb; sub-verb, clause. Your suggested beginnings are all great! I use a lot of those, too. Thanks so much for sharing them!

@missfaeriekaiti Wow! What great examples! I struggle with the deep first/third perspectives, so these really help!! Starting sentences…[Read more]

@corkybookworm Congratulations to your brother!! Also, that is a lot of students! What grade(s) are you teaching?

@missfaeriekaiti @happyholly_c @nuetrobolt

How about this: we all think through our favorite parts of Rillumen and what we are each most likely to participate in. It might end up being a host of things, but if we find a way to kind…[Read more]

Tagging some people…

@corkybookworm @missfaeriekaiti @wordsmith @everyone whose tags I forgot :p

@graceabounds2129 Congrats to your sister! I actually totally understand. My brother is getting married in October and his sweet fiance asked my sister and I to be bridesmaids. She’s doing the planning, but it’s still been crazy on our end. I can’t imagine what all she’s doing!!

@missfaeriekaiti Oh, cool! I’ll look them up here in a minute and…[Read more]

@nuetrobolt @corkybookworm @missfaeriekaiti

Yay, people! I miss Rillumen being as active as it was before, but I also understand that everyone is busy… I’m one of those too 😉 I, too, finished up my summer job this week. My sister is getting married in a couple of months, so we’ve gone into full wedding planning mode around here. And I’m…[Read more]

@missfaeriekaiti

Ooh, I haven’t heard of those. I’ll have to check them out. Good reading is time well spent! Hah, “monster-length” sounds right up my alley! XD

Boop. Anyone here? I miss y’all. I even made new Rillumen logos cause I missed y’all so much! What have y’all been up to?

@rolena-hatfield, @brandon-miller, @nuetrobolt, @graceabounds2129, @missfaeriekaiti, @pookiemonster, @happyholly_c, and @kayla-joy

Draft 3 is posted! I still feel like it needs work (which is good because we still have 4 days). Anyone care to chime in with some new comments/suggestions?

Also, I may not be able to work on this much after Thursday as I have a busy weekend ahead.

@nuetrobolt @Brandon-miller @corkybookworm @bill-of-the-hill @missfaeriekaiti @E_elaine_soup5

We need more people to help out! Come on and critique the story @graceabounds2129 wrote.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/18KxRINR2GZzW-dxt13ZhBRzAR6WiCDCmuM8XBul0XUk/edit?usp=sharing

“Illuminate the…[Read more]

(Oh hey, look who forgot to tag everybody)

@missfaeriekaiti
@happyholly_c
@corkybookworm
@quinn-ofallon
@kayla-joy
@nuetrobolt
@pookiemonster
@inkling-for-christ
@sir-leeds
@rolena-hatfield
@grace-tolkienista
@graceabounds2129
@wordsmith
@brie-donning
@cassidy
@bill-of-the-hill
@silverdragon
@therealameliahoch
@e_elaine_soup5
@emma-starr

Name:…[Read more]

@missfaeriekaiti Agreed! Marketing kind of terrifies me a little bit.