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  • Coralie replied to the topic Story Blurb in the forum Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago

    @missfaeriekaiti Oh no! I hope you’re feeling better!!

    @quinn-ofallon Ooh, Lynn makes a good point with that last line. I personally loved it cause it was exciting and drew me in, but perhaps you might consider something more open-ended that still has the same strong sway? Maybe like “But when everyone you trust is a liar, how can you find the truth anymore?” “Can you still find the truth?” is still a yes or no, but…*shrug* I’m just throwin thoughts out…”Can you still untangle the lies from the truth?” “How can you decipher/discern truth from lies?” I dunno XD I’m terrible at this!

     

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