Gabrielle Pollack

@sleepwalkingMK Bravo! I really like the contrast. 🙂

@Supermonkey42 Whoa, I liked how you explained where his excitement came from, or else we probably would have thought he was sadistic or something. And I also liked how in the end, you had him open his eyes to what was really going on around him. 🙂 There was a bit of telling in there that I…[Read more]

@overcomer Yes, this was pretty recent.

I should probably tag the rest of the guild…

@toklaham-veruzia @martina @epicaddie2 @sam-kowal @supermonkey42 @gabrielle  @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson @dekreel @bonnie @melissa-g @kiraelizabeth @aislinn-mollisong @dragongeek @haviloki @sleepwalkingmk @dekreel

I really don’t know much about WordPress, though I do use it.  I use .com.

Idk much/anything about hosting, I fear. :/

I’ve got the premium plan. If you’re talking about space for media, I upload a fair amount of photos, but still have plenty of space.

It works fine on mobile, but I generally work on my computer. I don’t have the…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 *grins* Anytime.

@sam-kowel That’s fine! I only added a word count so it wouldn’t turn into a book ;). I liked that you picked the emotion joy, but didn’t name it to avoid emotional telling. And I love the first line. XD Good job!

I had a suggestion but then realized that it kinda goes against the instructions I gave you. XD

What I…[Read more]

Bravo, Avensers! 😀 I know I’ve said it before, but I’m so proud of you all! 😀 You’ve represented your guild well. 🙂

*jumps up and down with excitement* I’m not sure if many of you have heard yet, but Avensbeck won the first official guild war! 😀 I’m so proud of you all. 😀 *Rewards your hard work with snacks and cake*

Here’s the official announcement if you’d like to read it:…[Read more]

@jenWriter17 Awesome! 😀 I like how you pointed out how the bark felt to Gwen. I also liked that you used thoughts to show how she felt about the “miserable lot of tiny humans.” XD That’s fantastic.

One way you might be able to sharpen the piece is to point out a few details in Gwen’s surroundings that only she would see. She’s in a certain mood,…[Read more]

@Sam-kowel Good luck to you! 😀

@toklaham-veruzia I hope you can figure it out! I’ve had trouble with my climax before. It’s not fun. :/

@toklaham-veruzia @overcomer @martina @epicaddie2 @sam-kowal @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @morreafirebird @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson @dekreel @bonnie @melissa-g @kiraelizabeth @aislinn-mollisong @dragongeek @haviloki @sleepwalkingmk @dekreel

@jenwriter17 I fear I don’t know enough about self-publishing to be helpful, but it looks like you’ve got some answers already. 🙂

@morreafirebird  They probably were. That “No resurrections this time” line was a bit much, though. Marvel, we get it. Loki died. Don’t rub it in our faces. XD But it <span style=”background-color: #f6d5d9;”>did </span>prepare us. It showed readers what the tone of the movie was going to be from the very first scene.

Yes! I love how they m…[Read more]

@snapper I advise Pinterest as well. 😛

But I do have some ideas. Maybe you could write a story about two brothers. The younger one accidentally stole the elder brother’s dangerous portal gun and sold it to an alien warlord who’s bent on destroying the human race. Now they have to get it back.

Perhaps write about a Grand Canyon tour guide giving…[Read more]

@snapper I advise Pinterest as well. 😛

But I do have some ideas. Maybe you could write a story about two brothers. The younger one accidentally stole the elder brother’s dangerous portal gun and sold it to an alien warlord who’s bent on destroying the human race. Now they have to get it back.

Perhaps write about a Grand Canyon tour guide giving…[Read more]

Awesome everyone! I’ll get that to the other guild masters :).

@overcomer Yup! 🙂

@jenwriter17 @overcomer @everyone I’ll take care of formatting and turning it in 🙂

@elisabeth I’m not getting anything done, so I’m going to head out. I hope outlining goes well! 🙂