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claire replied to the topic Hello from Israel! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago
I’m answering your post from the poetry thread here too, cause I’m not a member of the poet group either. 🙂 -I enjoyed reading through your poem, by the way! I can relate to what you’re going through.
I wanted to say thank you so much for praying! Being dedicated in praying for others is definitely a way I can always grow more, and I’ll…[Read more]
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Olivia Catherine replied to the topic Ever Read About a Fish Murderer…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
@eitan Oh, it’s totally fine. No pressure! 🙂 I just posted this for fun and I meant for people to enjoy it whenever they had time. So you don’t have any obligation to read this!
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Kimmi replied to the topic Hi from Texas! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago
Here’s a pre-prologue. (I’ll change that) (:
Six year old Chena Batjehoshaphat laughed as she and her two brothers chased a plump frog.
“Hurry! Hurry! Before he reaches the stream!” Nine-year-old Malachi rushed ahead, shoving his little sister aside.
Far behind them Levi, his chin only reaching a finger over the tall grass began to cry…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Hi from Texas! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago
Oh, and it starts in 8 bc.
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Kimmi replied to the topic Hi from Texas! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago
Thank you so much! I will ponder, and change things. Thank you for taking so much time and thought!
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Arindown (Gracie) replied to the topic The Carnivorous Duck in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
@bama-rose @eitan Thanks guys.😄 Glad you liked it. It still makes me grin just thinking about it.
@rusted-knight No kidding. Chickens don’t die easy. My cousin was once chased by a run-away chicken with no head. You learn these things when you grow up farming.😆
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Kimmi replied to the topic Hi from Texas! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago
When, and if you have time…
I read your critique of Beth’s chapter one. Honest indeed, but not quite brutal.
What I really need is honesty about my book. (i.e. My grandma, mother, and a family friend are probably purposefully not mentioning where it needs work, or they’re just blind to it because they don’t want to offend me.)
(It’s g…[Read more]
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Mel started the topic My Story (without a title) Chapter 1 first half in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
@beth20 @devastate-lasting @arindown @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @eden-anderson @emma-starr @wolverinerm @chalice @claire-h @olivia @eitan @vic
Hey guys!
Yeah I know. I tagged like a billion people. LOL. But I want all of ya to read it! 🙂
If I didn’t tag you FEEL FREE to read and comment! (In fact, please do 🙂 )
(for all you who I told I w…[Read more]
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Arindown (Gracie) replied to the topic Hello from Israel! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago
I couldn’t reply on your poem thread (I’m not in the Poetry group) so I’m replying here.
Thank you for praying for me. I’m so thankful that you have been striving to be like Christ, even through the hard times you’ve been having.
Actually, you’ve been an inspiration to me. I have grown up in a Christian family (with siblings who are also…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Hi from Texas! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago
Hello, how are you doing?
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Olivia Catherine started the topic Ever Read About a Fish Murderer…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
Some people have asked what I write about, so I decided to post one of my short stories on here for y’all to read. @kimlikesart @eitan @beth20 @claire-h @kristianne-hassman I write about funny little things that have happened in my life, and I (of course) dramatize them immensely to make them interesting to read, and to bring out the laughter…[Read more]
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Ooh, wow, sad, and interesting. Did you all ever tell Lydia’s mother?
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Ya, we did. I think she knew after we went into the room and found the fish “dead” the first time. Yes, it is a little sad, but I realized it makes it a little more interesting to add humour. Then you see the funny side of it… Lol
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Also, you realize that you can just go onto the Forum category at the top, click Recent Activity, and then all the recent posts will come up? That’s what everyone usually does, so if you do that, you can see what everyone else said and such.
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
Thank you for your input and welcome to the thread! 🙂
Yeah, some of my rhymes in this one weren’t perfect. And, to be honest, most of the time I write without an “proper meter” (i.e iambic, Trochaic, Dactylic, etc.) in mind. Maybe I should do that more often. . .
I sure hope and pray it does! Thank you for posting that verse too! 🙂
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Beth replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Wow, that’s very well thought out! That would be a good system! Thanks for responding.
You should, if that’s what you want to do! 🙂
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Hello from Israel! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago
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Evelyn replied to the topic Translated poem in the forum Poets 5 years, 10 months ago
@eitan How beautiful. I only wish I could do it the justice of being about to read and comprehend it in it’s original language. 🙂
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Hello from Israel! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago
That’s great! That’s the kind of book we need more of. I’ll pray for your friends as well!
It’s going pretty well. I have been reading my Bible a lot more lately and understanding things better. Thank you so much for praying for me! That means a lot to me 🙂
Happy Shavuot/Pentecost to you too 🙂 !!
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Translated poem in the forum Poets 5 years, 10 months ago
Beautiful!!! I love it. This makes me wish even more that I could read Hebrew.
This is such a beautiful and meaningful piece. Thank you for posting it. It’s something we could all pray in our daily lives.
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Hello from Israel! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago
You’re welcome! Keep writing!! 🙂
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WolverineRM replied to the topic Alpha Readers for YA novel…?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
Thanks y’all!! 👏🏻 🎉
Okay, so my form has decided to be finicky, so @elisha-starquill I got your email where you commented—@claire-h, if you could comment on the post…? Thanks so much for wanting to read it!
@eitan, no worries, I totally get that, and thanks!!
@eden-anderson I hope it is ☺️
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Translated poem in the forum Poets 5 years, 10 months ago
A very good poem! Even if I can’t translate it back to Hebrew and enjoy its meter/rhyme then, I love it with this more of a free-verse feel 😀
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