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omi started the topic Lonely Sonnet in the forum Poets 5 years, 2 months ago
Hello! I’ve been writing some poems and it’s my first time to share some of them. Here’s one that I’d love to share. This is my first time and attempt to write a sonnet and I hope I can learn and improve in the future. 🙂
Lonely Sonnet
The moonlight brushed up across his pale face
As his trembling soul could not recover
He dreamt about…[Read more]
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omi joined the group Poets 5 years, 2 months ago
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Laurel Luehmann joined the group Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 2 months ago
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sparrowhawke replied to the topic Poetry Critique Wanted in the forum Poets 5 years, 2 months ago
Thank you @Dakota!
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Dakota replied to the topic Poetry Critique Wanted in the forum Poets 5 years, 2 months ago
@sparrowhawke I really enjoyed reading them all! Hope you win the contest. 🙂
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sparrowhawke started the topic Poetry Critique Wanted in the forum Poets 5 years, 2 months ago
Hi guys,
I just finished a mini collection of five poems inspired by The Scarlet Letter. I am submitting it to a young authors contest for my homeschool group, but the contest isn’t that intense or anything (as far as I know, only a few other people have signed up). Still, I would like to get some feedback on it. I mainly want to know if the…[Read more]
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Catholic Creed joined the group Poets 5 years, 3 months ago
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Kylie S. Pierce replied to the topic The Party Tree in the forum Poets 5 years, 3 months ago
That was really good! I enjoyed it a lot, and I say that you have a knack for writing poetry. The fact that it was based on something on LotR helped too. 🙂
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Thank you, Kylie! That means a lot! I actually got it published on Kingdom Pen last month: https://kingdompen.org/the-party-tree-a-poem/
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Katherine Baker joined the group Poets 5 years, 3 months ago
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Cassandra Blenkin started the topic Hello there! in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Greetings everyone!
I’m endeavoring to rewrite my spy novel into something bearable. You know during the early 2000’s when everyone was writing spy novels? My 14 year old self was right there with them! However, the story and the characters are very near and dear to my heart, so I figure I owe them a second chance. I feel like interacting with…[Read more]
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Cassandra Blenkin joined the group Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
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Kimmi replied to the topic Silent in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Thank you Ms. @sam-m . <3
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Kylie Wingfeather replied to the topic The Throne Warden in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Oops, forgot that I had written a poem for my book and posted it on my profile. Sorry!
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Kylie Wingfeather replied to the topic The Throne Warden in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Hi! I’m glad that you like my poem! This is the first piece of poetry that I’ve written and posted (not including the one for a collaborative story I did) on here. And I’m really glad that my poem made you want to read The Wingfeather Saga even more, as it is my absolute fav book series (as you can probably tell from my username and q…[Read more]
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Emma Walker joined the group Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 4 months ago
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Sam M replied to the topic Silent in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Your poem felt powerful. Also, tragic, important, and well-written. I especially found the repetition of the word silent to be strong and impactful.
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Kimmi started the topic Silent in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Silent
Silent, as the country crumbles.
Silent, to the pain all ‘round.
Silent. For one doesn’t know what to do.
Silent, to the fathers’ cry.
Silent, to the burning of right.
Silent, to the death of liberty.
Silent. For one doesn’t want to fight.
Silent, as hearts are hardened.
Silent, as tongues fly.
Silent, as the souls a…[Read more]
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Sam M replied to the topic The Throne Warden in the forum Poets 5 years, 5 months ago
I like your poem. 🙂 I’ve heard of the Wingfeather Saga, but haven’t read the books yet. Your poem makes me want to read them even more!
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Kylie Wingfeather replied to the topic Does anyone want to read this slightly depressing poem? in the forum Poets 5 years, 5 months ago
That…
Was…
Beautiful.
Thank you for putting that up. Definitely made my day. Thank you!
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Kylie Wingfeather started the topic The Throne Warden in the forum Poets 5 years, 5 months ago
A Wingfeather Saga poem about Throne Wardens. Not that great at poetry, but I’m working on it.
The Throne Warden.
Courageous, loyal, true,
Protector of his siblings’ life and freedom,
Learner of the Word,
Keeper of not just pen, but also sword,
Hearer of the sea dragons song,
Warrior against Gnag’s wrong,
Artham with his wings,
Janner…[Read more]
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