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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Characters you feel like you understand coming across as flat in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 5 months ago
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Daeus Lamb started the topic Internal monologue in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 5 months ago
Well, I was going to cover r-m-archer and Ethryndal’s question today, but I think I should take a week more to think about it. In the meantime, we’re going to cover Kate’s question: how does one write powerful, non-tellish internal monologue?
This is actually one of my favorite topics, so you might get a long lesson.
When you really master…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic Tragedy, ahoy! in the forum Announcements 8 years, 5 months ago
Hey Saxon Scribes!
I hope your swords, er, pencils, are sharp because the next guild war is here!
This time we have two weeks so it won’t be so rushed and helter-skelter. 😉 I think we’ll do great.
The prompt? You’ll love it. We need to write the most emotive death scene we…[Read more]
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Mariposa Aristeo started the topic A long, long time ago on a forum far, far away… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
A year ago today, I joined the KP forum. A few days before that, I’d submitted a piece of my writing for the first time. I’d been writing for a few years already and acquired knowledge in the field, but I was completely unknown to the writing world. I hadn’t had a blog in years and I wasn’t on Instagram. I’d never tried to get anything published…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic What do you want to improve in with character development? in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 5 months ago
Hi Saxon Scribes!
It’s late, but it’s still Monday. We’re back to talking about character development.
What I want to do here is open up the floor for you to voice the struggles that you’ve been going through with character development. We’ll either gather round and help you with them here in this thread or I’ll create a future thread…[Read more]
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Mariposa Aristeo replied to the topic FIRST SE FICTION STORY: RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARC in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@cindy At least you’re not alone in being kidnapped. 😉 Don’t worry, General Raspberry won’t have you for long… 🙃
Thank you! But the real credit goes to Aberdeen. 😜🦖
That’s the first time anyone ever called me a sea turtle. I like it. 😃
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Mariposa Aristeo replied to the topic FIRST SE FICTION STORY: RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARC in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Aberdeen had some extra time the other day after working on his secret project, so he decided to delight y’all with RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARC PART 3!
For those of you missed the first part, go to page 1 of this topic. For part 2, go to page 4.
@josiah @daeus-lamb @hope-ann @gabriellepollack @brandon-miller @ethryndal @jessi-rae @cindy @graceliving…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic Longer chapters in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 5 months ago
Hey Saxon Scribes,
Today’s Monday, so we’re back to out yearly theme discussion of character development. I wanted to share something I’ve picked up recently that has been hugely impactful in my writing.
Longer chapters.
I used to write chapters that were about 2,000-2,500 words long on average. 800 was my lowest. 4,000 something was my…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic Bondage in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 5 months ago
This being Monday, it’s time for our annual theme discussion on character development.
I thought I’d touch on one of the best character development tools I’ve discovered: bondage.
Every character has faults, right? Their faults build our sympathy. Bondage goes farther. Bondage is something your character can’t get out of, can’t escape from, is…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic We're giving word wars a try in the forum Announcements 8 years, 5 months ago
Hi Saxon Scribes,
While we took a break from it last week, the guild wars are starting up again. This time, instead of competing to see who can write the best prompt, we’re competing to see which guild can be the most productive during the week.
Basically, anyone in our guild who writes over 1,000 words this week can submit their word count at…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Critique for Short Story in the forum Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
Hello Saxon Scribes!
I’ve been working on a short story for a competition that is coming up fairly soonish (not the SE one) and was hoping for some feedback. If any of you could just look at this doc and leave comments and suggestions, that would be amazing.
I’m mostly trying to deal with character development, preachiness, theme, and the…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic The First Guild War in the forum Announcements 8 years, 6 months ago
@mcnoggin @cindy @kate @ethryndal @elizabeth @girlsetfree @theresa-play @r-m-archer @literatureforthelight @livgiordano @lady-iliara @m_corinnemusic @j-parkhurst @j.a.penrose
Hey guys,
Just wanted to give you an update on the next guild war. We’re taking a break this week for the guildmasters to figure out how this guild war is going to be judge…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic The Assassin in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 6 months ago
Hey Saxon Scribes,
I barely made this post in time before Monday ended. *blushes*
Along the lines of our annual discussion of character development, I thought it would be worthwhile to camp out on the assassin stereotype for a week and take a deep look at him.
This character type has a definite aura built around them. There are a few different…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic The Accountability Thread in the forum Accountability & Achievements 8 years, 6 months ago
@mcnoggin @cindy @kate @ethryndal @elizabeth @girlsetfree @theresa-play @r-m-archer @literatureforthelight @livgiordano @lady-iliara @m_corinnemusic @j-parkhurst @j.a.penrose
Monday is here.
Last week, I almost completed my goals. I wrote a little over 5,000 words and I drafted my email but haven’t sent it yet.
My goals this week are to writ…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic The First Guild War in the forum Announcements 8 years, 6 months ago
Attention friends!
I’ve gone through and made a couple edits. I’ll be going through and finalizing them later today, but I wanted to give you a chance beforehand to take a look at them. You can let me know if there’s anything you disagree with and with some of the edits I’ve included explanations which I hope will be helpful to you as you go off…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic The First Guild War in the forum Announcements 8 years, 6 months ago
Great work, @mcnoggin — especially with your colors and metaphors.
I’ll get to making some edits to this tomorrow (hopefully others can add their improvements today), but I just wanted to go ahead and share a couple of my initial thoughts.
- I generally prefer opening a scene with the POV character as opposed to anything else that’s going on…
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McNoggin replied to the topic The First Guild War in the forum Announcements 8 years, 6 months ago
@cindy @kate @ethryndal @elizabeth @girlsetfree @theresa-play @r-m-archer @literatureforthelight @livgiordano @lady-iliara @m_corinnemusic @j-parkhurst @daeus-lamb
I hope I haven’t missed anyone.
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Rachel Rogers replied to the topic Post Poems Here —> in the forum Poetry Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
I wrote this poem several months ago, but it doesn’t feel finished to me. I’m not sure whether I need to add more to it or revise it or what. :/ I would appreciate any and all feedback, especially your impression of what it’s about and whether it feels like a whole thought to you.
I will glow
beyond this dreary ache.
I will shine
reflecting the…
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McNoggin replied to the topic The First Guild War in the forum Announcements 8 years, 6 months ago
@cindy @kate @ethryndal @elizabeth @girlsetfree @theresa-play @r-m-archer @literatureforthelight @livgiordano @lady-iliara @m_corinnemusic @j-parkhurst @daeus-lamb
I agree with @r-m-archer on this one. Having the character as a child doesn’t seem to fit with what I’d envisioned based on what the other Saxon Scribes have been saying. I especially…[Read more]
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McNoggin replied to the topic The First Guild War in the forum Announcements 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus-lamb I’m thinking a serious observer would be best, too. Sarcasm doesn’t seem like it would fit with the rest of the scene.
@cindy @kate @ethryndal @elizabeth @girlsetfree @theresa-play @r-m-archer @literatureforthelight @livgiordano @lady-iliara @m_corinnemusic @j-parkhurst
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