@beth20
Active 1 year, 7 months ago-
Beth Darlene joined the group Writers of Children’s/Middle-Grade Books 6 years, 6 months ago
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Beth replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
Okay, thank you!!
Do you want to do multiple or just one?? I have one girl (Marrill), three boys (Jaylin, Jered, and Tim,) and a villain!
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Beth replied to the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Yeah! I told @josiah about it, so maybe he can bring my comment back haha!
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Beth replied to the topic Cartoon Art in the forum Art Critique 6 years, 6 months ago
I’ve heard that Taggerung was really good, but I’ve never read it though lol! My favorites were Mossflower and The Long Patrol!
Was the Flying Dutchman good?
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Beth replied to the topic Having trouble getting my post to show up in the forum Guidelines & FAQ 6 years, 6 months ago
Hey,
This happened to me! I commented on Vivian Grant’s post for beta reading and it deleted it!
I posted the same comment twice and both times it deleted it, they were pretty long comments and I don’t want to have to keep typing it over and over again lol!
Would you please help me?
Thanks -Beth
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Beth replied to the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
So sorry it seems I haven’t read your story yet! I did and I really liked it! You did a great job! I haven’t read any vampire stories so I’m no expert lol, but it was really good!
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Beth replied to the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
I don’t know what the heck is wrong! I have written a LONG comment TWO times and they are not here!!!!! Why???????????
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Beth replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@everbody
Hey, so does anybody want to draw some of my characters??
My sister said she’d draw my towns and stuff but I need characters lol!
If so tell me and I’ll post some descriptions!
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Beth replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years, 6 months ago
Would your character rather have their favorite song stuck on loop in their heads for a year, or not be able to listen to music for two years?
Jered: Have my favorite song stuck on loop for a whole year?!? No way!
Marrill: I would rather have my fav song stuck in my head on loop than not listen to any songs at all!
Jaylin: I don’t…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Two: Magic? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
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Beth replied to the topic Does anyone need ideas? in the forum Writing Level & Journey Plans Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
That is a great idea! I don’t, however, need ideas for my actual book. But I love getting ideas for like short stories! Not sure if that really counts!
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Beth replied to the topic I Made a Writing Rank Quiz! in the forum Writing Level & Journey Plans Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
I ranked Apprentice Writer lol! A lot of the questions were kinda hard though bc not all the answers applied to me!
But yeah, I’m not a very good writer I guess, there are definitely things I need to improve.
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Two: Magic? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Thank you! Yeah well, the man in the police car wasn’t really important lol. I had originally planned on him being more but….. you know, how stories change! haha
Okay yeah, the POV thing makes sense! Though I change from character to character in my later chapters bc there are more characters lol! I think a normal chapter changes POV 4…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Thanks! Yeah, I wasn’t sure how he would reply so I guess I did it correctly lol!
Okay! Can’t wait to see what he says!
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Beth replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
OK here it is lol! Hope I did fine on Dharin!
Jaylin smiled “Thanks. Hey, is that a sword?” he asked the man. Dharin smiled, “Yes. Want to look at it?”
“Yes, please!” he said eagerly.
Dharin unsheathed his sword and handed it to Jaylin, hilt first. Jaylin took the sword and swung it in a few experimental arcs. He had neve…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Is Dharin cocky?? Cuz I know he’s flirtatious but….? lol
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Two: Magic? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Oh and one thing, did the dream he had make sense?
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Beth replied to the topic Cartoon Art in the forum Art Critique 6 years, 6 months ago
Thank you! Um, I think I just used normal Crayola colored pencils lol!
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Two: Magic? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Thanks!
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Beth replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Oki thanks!
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