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  • Beth replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago

    @anne_the_noob14

    OK here it is lol! Hope I did fine on Dharin!

     

    Jaylin smiled “Thanks. Hey, is that a sword?” he asked the man. Dharin smiled, “Yes. Want to look at it?”

    “Yes, please!” he said eagerly.

    Dharin unsheathed his sword and handed it to Jaylin, hilt first. Jaylin took the sword and swung it in a few experimental arcs. He had never been very good at swordsmanship but had always admired those who knew it well.

    “Are you pretty good?” he asked Dharin.

    Dharin nodded, “I suppose. I am captain of The Three Riders, and use a sword often.” he said.

    Jaylin handed the sword back and continued down the hall.

    Pretty soon they came to a door marked Privy Chamber.

    He smiled, “Here ya go!”

    Dharin laughed “Finally!” he opened the door and stepped in “I’ll be out in a second.” he called over his shoulder.

    Jaylin waited a few minutes, then Dharin appeared. “Much better!” he said. Jaylin laughed.

    They continued down the hall for a little bit. Not really sure where they were going.

    There were so many doors and Jaylin’s curiosity was rising with every new one.

    “Hey,” he said to Dharin, “you want to explore what’s behind some of these doors?”

     

     

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