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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic WIP In Need of Critiques: The Clefs in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Hi!! Sorry, I haven’t been on here in a LONG TIME; and it’s because I have been so caught up in schoolwork the past few months that I don’t have any time to write. Like, zero. 🙁 It’s quite sad. But this is embarrassing… that doc you’re looking at is… *laughs softly with a bright blush* part of the story… at the time when…[Read more]
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic *Smiles shyly* Hi, want to be friends? in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 8 months ago
HI, @urwen-starial!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO GLAD you’re on SE! Welcome! (Love your username! And your profile pic! I see me! 🤣)
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer, @holly-anne, @abigail-rebekah, @evelyn, @kayla-skywriter, @the-fledgling-artist, @anyone-else-I-know-but-missed (😝) *welcomes everyone to topic* Friends, this is my outside-SE friend who I want you to…[Read more]
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years, 9 months ago
Me: Woah! So much action! Abner, you okay? And Judah, buddy, I don’t even know if you remember saying this but I’ll totally take care of your dog if you happened to die. In reference to that last question/post, too, dude totally let me – the most important person in your life – die. It’s better than everyone else you…[Read more]
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Decision Making…. UGH. in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
#3: Abortion: II
CHILD:
Mommy, Mommy, here inside,
Do you look on me with pride?
Do you love me, hope to see
The day when I first start to breathe?Mommy, Mommy, don’t you hope
For when I’ll see the world full scope?
Or do you think I’ll bane your life
And fill it with all kinds of strife?Mommy, Mommy, hear my cry:
Do I deserve infan…[Read more] -
Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Decision Making…. UGH. in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
#2: Faith
I wallowed in the dark,
Too black as night to see.
I searched for endless days
To find a place I’d be free.My eyes were just as useless
As a swimsuit in the snow.
My feet just kept on walking
Hardly knowing where to go.My hands were outstretched wide
So I wouldn’t stumble or fall,
But they guided me in vain
‘Til, one day, I heard…[Read more] -
Banana Peacock Warrior started the topic Decision Making…. UGH. in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
Okay, so I need help. (In a lot of areas but let’s just focus here, shall we? 🤨)
I am SO EXCITED for this poetry contest coming up! But I was DEVASTATED when I saw that we’re only allowed to enter one poem. SO, I narrowed it down to my favorite 3 and I cannot possibly decide between them! I also chopped them up so that they fit into the word…[Read more]
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Newest But Eventually Older Critique in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@w-o-holmes: I loved this poem! I’ll admit that this isn’t my own typical style I write in but I WILL say that it flowed super nicely. All the lines matched up really well and as an admiring poetry reader I was able to do so very easily. Plus, your word choice was beautiful! Nice work! 👍🏻
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic I HAVE A POETIC CHALLENGE! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@w-o-holmes: Thank you!
@anne_the_noob14: I really enjoyed the first poem. It was so sad but I think it was really well written.😌
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic WIP In Need of Critiques: The Clefs in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer: Maybe try this? It’s a new link…
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FFcyaYQnsEFikEhY5RxkydD6I9CPohinanXU0GKnTks/edit?usp=sharing
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic WIP In Need of Critiques: The Clefs in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer: Hm… I don’t know… sharing Google Docs stuff is new to me… I really just copied and pasted the link…
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic WIP In Need of Critiques: The Clefs in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@kayla-skywriter: That sounds good to me! Thanks!
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic I HAVE A POETIC CHALLENGE! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
Ooo, fun! I’ve never written a couplet before… 2 lines… I’m normally used to 12 stanzas… OH! Here’s a mutated version of the end of one of my poems… how’s this sound?
And though temptation seems so sweet,
God guards my heart from Satan’s schemes. -
Banana Peacock Warrior started the topic Help Me to Help You to Help Them in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
Hey! So, I’ve come across a problem. So… what do you do in this situation:
A friend emails you with their story asking for critiques because you’re writing buddies and that’s what you do. You look it over, but you really can’t stand to read too much more because you love fantasy and really only like to stick to fantasy and your friend is the…[Read more]
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic A Question of Timing and Hyphens in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@bigideaskc: What an interesting question! LOL I think you’ve already gotten all the answers you need on here… but I’m a HTTYD fan!!!!!!!!! *raises both hands* I love Hiccup so much and LOVE his character arc throughout the trilogy- especially in the 3rd movie. Stoic’s character arc is wonderful in the 1st movie, too. And Toothless is plain…[Read more]
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic WIP In Need of Critiques: The Clefs in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
Hi! (Sorry, I’ve been on vacation in Georgia for the past 2 weeks so I’ve been long gone seeing as the first week I was at a camp where no media was allowed and the next week was so busy [and my computer died so much] that I couldn’t get on SE. 🙁 )
I’d love it if you would post the critiques right on Google Docs so…[Read more]
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Kenzie Pimpo commented on the post, The Light Is Held 6 years, 9 months ago
This was beautiful! The flow of the poem was perfect and this subject in particular really hits close to my heart. Way to go! 👍🏻
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Kenzie Pimpo posted an update 6 years, 10 months ago
Made it to chapter #3 of Dragon Slayer and I’ve edited up until chapter #6 in The Clefs. Working my way there!
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Kenzie Pimpo's profile was updated 6 years, 10 months ago
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic WIP In Need of Critiques: The Clefs in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@kari-karast: s’all good. 😉
And BTW, if anyone else is interested, I’m going to put down the premise/plot here so that you don’t have to really open it up and skim the whole thing or anything to figure it out beforehand.
Also, The Clefs is a fantasy.
THE CLEFS:
Cadenza is the greatest dancer on Harmony Island, the most beautiful of all the…[Read more] -
Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 10 months ago
Hi, @bree-dawn! I’m Kenzie(Banana Peacock Warrior- trust me, the nickname’s a long story…) Welcome to Story Embers! Do you have any current WIP’s and are you considering joining a guild? 🙂
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