-
Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Newest But Eventually Older Critique in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@w-o-holmes: I loved this poem! I’ll admit that this isn’t my own typical style I write in but I WILL say that it flowed super nicely. All the lines matched up really well and as an admiring poetry reader I was able to do so very easily. Plus, your word choice was beautiful! Nice work! 👍🏻












