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Erynne replied to the topic A Random Conversation about my Romance in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Ugh! I always forget to tag people! *facepalm*
My posts would probably get more recognition if I actually remembered to tag a few people every once in awhile XD
So here I go… @zee @arindown @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @writergirl101
Well that’s everyone I know on this group, but it’s a start. Hope that works
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Kimmi replied to the topic Silent in the forum Poets 5 years, 6 months ago
Thank you Ms. @sam-m . <3
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Erynne started the topic A Random Conversation about my Romance in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Hi everyone! I’m Erynne (Erin) I joined about a month or so ago, and it didn’t even dawn on me to talk about my romance in this group.
I haven’t actually started yet, but I have very carefully plotted it out (not finished yet though!) The romance part isn’t necessarily the main point of the story but it is a large part, and it’s always nice to…[Read more]
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Kylie Wingfeather replied to the topic The Throne Warden in the forum Poets 5 years, 7 months ago
Oops, forgot that I had written a poem for my book and posted it on my profile. Sorry!
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Kylie Wingfeather replied to the topic The Throne Warden in the forum Poets 5 years, 7 months ago
Hi! I’m glad that you like my poem! This is the first piece of poetry that I’ve written and posted (not including the one for a collaborative story I did) on here. And I’m really glad that my poem made you want to read The Wingfeather Saga even more, as it is my absolute fav book series (as you can probably tell from my username and q…[Read more]
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Sam M replied to the topic Silent in the forum Poets 5 years, 7 months ago
Your poem felt powerful. Also, tragic, important, and well-written. I especially found the repetition of the word silent to be strong and impactful.
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Kimmi started the topic Silent in the forum Poets 5 years, 7 months ago
Silent
Silent, as the country crumbles.
Silent, to the pain all ‘round.
Silent. For one doesn’t know what to do.
Silent, to the fathers’ cry.
Silent, to the burning of right.
Silent, to the death of liberty.
Silent. For one doesn’t want to fight.
Silent, as hearts are hardened.
Silent, as tongues fly.
Silent, as the souls a…[Read more]
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Sam M replied to the topic The Throne Warden in the forum Poets 5 years, 7 months ago
I like your poem. 🙂 I’ve heard of the Wingfeather Saga, but haven’t read the books yet. Your poem makes me want to read them even more!
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Kylie Wingfeather replied to the topic Does anyone want to read this slightly depressing poem? in the forum Poets 5 years, 7 months ago
That…
Was…
Beautiful.
Thank you for putting that up. Definitely made my day. Thank you!
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Kylie Wingfeather started the topic The Throne Warden in the forum Poets 5 years, 7 months ago
A Wingfeather Saga poem about Throne Wardens. Not that great at poetry, but I’m working on it.
The Throne Warden.
Courageous, loyal, true,
Protector of his siblings’ life and freedom,
Learner of the Word,
Keeper of not just pen, but also sword,
Hearer of the sea dragons song,
Warrior against Gnag’s wrong,
Artham with his wings,
Janner…[Read more]
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Kylie S. Pierce joined the group Poets 5 years, 7 months ago
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MyClipboardIsMyViolin replied to the topic The Party Tree in the forum Poets 5 years, 8 months ago
@jennythefaun Couldn’t tell the LoTR reference from reading it, and it would be fine anyway. I published a poem that was even more directly inspired by The Handmaid’s Tale a couple years back.
I really like the title, and great concept. My advice is to drop the rhymes. As one of my creative writing professors once said, the best poems don’t r…[Read more]
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Thanks for your advice, @myclipboardismyviolin!
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MyClipboardIsMyViolin joined the group Poets 5 years, 8 months ago
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Cathy joined the group Poets 5 years, 8 months ago
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Rebekah.Elizabeth replied to the topic Writing Romances With Lots of Standards in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate the time you two have put into responding.
Okay, so there is a little bit to unbox here.
I hope this post doesn’t get confusing, ha.
So, in the first book of my series, Kimberly lives in a different country with her best friend Hannah (also a main character, I have 2 p…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic Writing Romances With Lots of Standards in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
I am really impressed with your convictions to write Godly romance. I’m also a teenage girl who’s never been on a date…so I don’t really know anything about this, but I do have some ideas.😄
Like Zee said, making Kimberly really insecure in other areas of life will make her reluctance to start a relationship with Carter more…[Read more]
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Zee replied to the topic Writing Romances With Lots of Standards in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Sounds like you’ve put a lot of thought into this @rebekah-elizabeth, but I have to wonder, since the story isn’t a romance, and thus the relationship between Kimberly and Carter is, at most, a side plot, I wonder if there might be a different way to show Kimberly’s lack of trust and fear of being hurt if she commits to a relationship? You might…[Read more]
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Rebekah.Elizabeth started the topic Writing Romances With Lots of Standards in the forum Romance Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Hello, fellow writers!
My current WIP is not technically a romance, so I am sure that I seem a little out of place here, but I need some advice.
I am trying to create a romance in my story, but am having a really hard time with it. My main character, who I will name “Kimberly” for this post, struggles with feeling like she cannot commit to a…[Read more]
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