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Erynne replied to the topic Need a visual of characters, scenery, or…. anything? Click right here! in the forum Art Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Ok, great! I will definitely be on a castle search today. If you want, I can send you some reference photos so you can pick one, unless you are really trusting and you’re allowing ME to choose one. 😂
Also, after painting these sceneries and reading what all you’ve said in other groups, I am so wanting to read your story!! π
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Erynne replied to the topic Need a visual of characters, scenery, or…. anything? Click right here! in the forum Art Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Hey, I was just double checking, do you want the castle to be that specific design with the towers and all, or do you have a different idea in mind? I’m good with anything!
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic New book blurb – thoughts? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
@claire-h @arindown @hannahrenner @writergirl101 @erynne @imwritehere1920 @morreafirebird
Thank you, one and all!
Since the new one personally geeks my little heart the most and since the consensus is slightly more behind that one, I chose that as my base but I tried to integrate more substantial descriptions of the internal conflicts and…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic Need a visual of characters, scenery, or…. anything? Click right here! in the forum Art Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Ok, that will work perfectly! I’m excited to do it! Thanks for all of these ideas π I never know what to paint. I just normally do Bob Ross tutorials XD
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Erynne replied to the topic Need a visual of characters, scenery, or…. anything? Click right here! in the forum Art Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
I’d love to! I probably won’t be able to get to it for a few days, but as soon as I get a chance I’ll do it! I do want to warn you that I have very little experience with buildings, so it will not look exactly the same XD. I am kind of confused about the last part though. What do you mean by sky blue and whites golds? (I know that…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic Need a visual of characters, scenery, or…. anything? Click right here! in the forum Art Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Good! I’m glad you like it π You are very welcome. I enjoyed doing it! I use oil paints. I’ve been doing it for about a year. If you have anything else you want done you know where to go! 😉
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Erynne replied to the topic Need a visual of characters, scenery, or…. anything? Click right here! in the forum Art Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
I hope you like it!! If there is anything you’d like me to change just let me know π
Sorry, the flowers did not turn out how I had planned π
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Book Description Feedback in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Thank you. I will leave a link to the story below for you whenever you have the time.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/tsimipvyfeix7qf/The%20Smilers%20of%20Carmadyne.docx?dl=0
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Erynne replied to the topic Need a visual of characters, scenery, or…. anything? Click right here! in the forum Art Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
I got new brushes today! I’ll hopefully have that painting for you really soon! And if there’s any other thing you want painted are drawn, just let me know! :))(The text above was supposed to be for you as well, I just forgot to tag you. Sorry about that!)
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Book Description Feedback in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Here is the revised version.
Every night, from dusk to dawn, Carmadyne town is invaded by mysterious humanoids. In fear of the creatures, no person ventures from their homes until the sunrise. Nine-year-old Wren complies with the curfew without questioning the reason behind itβ until one night, when she decides to ask her n…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic Fresh Perspectives Appreciated π in the forum Characters 5 years, 3 months ago
@writergirl101 Thanks for the tag.😄
@claire-h Wow, this is really intriguing. I’m just going to throw out a few ideas that might help.
1. What ifΒ Dr. Arrowood is trying to protect someone? That could be motivation. What if, lets say, his son did something bad, for one of his father’s “projects” and now he’s going crazy because of the memory. So…[Read more]
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Kristianne replied to the topic Fresh Perspectives Appreciated π in the forum Characters 5 years, 3 months ago
@writergirl101 Thanks for tagging me! I don’t know how much help I can be, but I shall try! π
Your story sounds really interesting! And I really like your villain. I’ve noticed a serious lack of good villains in fiction! π
For the first question, I think giving him a bad memory he wants to get rid of is a good motivation. Maybe he…[Read more]
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imwritehere1920 replied to the topic Fresh Perspectives Appreciated π in the forum Characters 5 years, 3 months ago
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imwritehere1920 replied to the topic Fresh Perspectives Appreciated π in the forum Characters 5 years, 3 months ago
Hi Ella!Β Thanks for tagging me!Β I liked your suggestions, especially the one where Dr. Arrowood has some sort of attachment to Rubi (hello complications!)Β How have you been?
Hi Claire!Β I’m Lily.Β You have a really interesting plot situation; is your story MG or YA?Β (Sometimes, when I’m working on a proje…[Read more]
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claire replied to the topic Fresh Perspectives Appreciated π in the forum Characters 5 years, 3 months ago
Thanks so much for taking the time to share your thoughts!! They were very helpful. π
I had actually thought about him having some sort of physical scar too. I like the idea of it triggering his memory. But I keep coming up against the fact that this is futuristic! Surely there are ways to fix scars… Yes, replacing memories…[Read more]
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Book Description Feedback in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Thank you both for responding. I will be sure to consider your feedback and advice.
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Erynne replied to the topic Need a visual of characters, scenery, or…. anything? Click right here! in the forum Art Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
I would be more than willing to try this! I’m wanting to get some different brushes before I paint again. Is that alright? Hopefully it will be pretty soon (Mine are all messed up. I didn’t take care of them very well when I started painting and haven’t replaced them yet.) Thanks for this opportunity (and for the compliment😜)
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Claire replied to the topic Concept Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@joelle-stone Thanks for the feedback! No I didn’t have time to attend the webinar… π I just saw this idea in his newsletter.
@zee Very true… I’ve been really digging into my characters’ motives, fears, and flaws lately so hopefully I will be able to post those for feedback soon! There are so many layers to developing a concept,…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Concept Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
Keeper of the Lost Cities? I’ve heard glowing reports of that book, but I’ve never actually read it. π Maybe I should… thx for the idea! BTW, I love your signature. π
@zee,
Thank you for your feedback! I have a few idea as to the motives for the villain:
- He knows that other worlds exist and is trying to keep everyone else…
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