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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Here is another revision of one of my older poem/songs. Enjoy and critque! A
And if you have written any poetry you’d like to share, please feel free to post it here. 🙂
My…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character memes in the forum Characters 5 years, 11 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 @esmeralda-gramilton @dakota @urwen-starial
How my guy characters drink their Respect Women Juice:
Kedori: in small sips so it doesn’t spill
Kiet: with a straw
Dari: drinks whole thing but intermittently because he has to keep stopping to chase his toddler sister
Tai: blows bubbles in his before draining the glass
Gerik:…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 12 months ago
@naiya-dyani Great job on the posts with Gerik and Kiet!
This alright? @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @mayacat @urwen-starial @kayla-skywriter @esmeralda-gramilton
A soft tapping made her look up. The youth was patting his leg, eyes widened and fixed on the dog.
The dog turned his head. Instantly, the youth’s hands threw out a rapid command. Don’t…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 12 months ago
Not sure why those tags didn’t all work :/
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 12 months ago
@esmeralda-gramilton @urwen-starial @mayacat @kayla-skywriter @dakota @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Okay!!! This has taken me ALTOGETHER too long! I’m so sorry for holding people up for so long. At long last, here are my three characters’ parts!
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Cold. Hard. Oh, that hurts. . .
Kiet’s eyes fluttered open as a breath of dank, musty air fille…[Read more]
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Kayla Skywriter replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 12 months ago
@dakota @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @esmeralda-gramilton @mayacat @urwen-starial
Thanks Dakota, for bringing this back to attention.
I have not forgotten this for a moment, however I accidentally got all my characters stuck at red lights. I have a part prepared, but I can’t post anything at this point in the story unless I try to do a flashback…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@esmeralda-gramilton @urwen-starial @mayacat @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter @dakota @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
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I’m soooooooo sorry. . . aggggggh doing my next parts has been on my to-do list for a while now. That’s it. I’m scheduling it. I’m going to aim to have them done by tomorrow afternoon. *intense nod*
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
This week I have another revision of an older song. Enjoy and critique!
Bloom (Where you are)
Flower, you’re crowned with a jewel-like bud
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Dakota replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@esmeralda-gramilton @urwen-starial @mayacat @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter
*scrambles atop the Tower and calls out through bullhorn*
Hello everyone!
It’s been a long time since there has been any action in here. I know we are all busy and don’t always have time for things like this, which is fine. But I have been asked by @emberynus-the-dragonsl…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years ago
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Okay, so I know some of you (uhem, @parker) have encouraged me to publish my poems as a book. I have really appreciated the encouragement and critique you all have given…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
Sorry I’m a little behind! This week’s is a revison of one I wrote some time ago. As always, I hope you enjoy, and please…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@dakota @esmeralda-gramilton @urwen-starial @mayacat @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter
And introducing my new character Llewellyn:
A light rain fell on the dirty street making soft pattering sounds as each small drop hit and shattered in a hundred different directions. A harsh wind howled gloomily in the narrow alleys picking up pieces of garbage…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@dakota @esmeralda-gramilton @urwen-starial @mayacat @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter
And the last part about Rhioe:
Once Logan had left, Leona turned to Rhioe with a kind smile,
“Let’s take care of you, shall we?”
As the widow began getting things ready, Rhioe’s thoughts traveled to Jin.
He had always been very kind to her, always willing…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@dakota @esmeralda-gramilton @urwen-starial @mayacat @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter
Logan and Jin
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When Jin opened the door, he didn’t know what to expect. Rhioe never knocked, because she had been giving express permission. And he didn’t know any other people who would.
So when he opened the door, and an officer was standing there, he sta…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@dakota @esmeralda-gramilton @urwen-starial @mayacat @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter
Okay this is going to be a long post. I’m gonna post some of the parts Urwen and I have written together over the past who knows how long and haven’t posted yet.
First Cade and Kirat
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Kirat sank to his knees, one hand still on the wall for support. “Please, s…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Character memes in the forum Characters 6 years, 1 month ago
@naiya-dyani Me: *hugs Kiet back* “Thanks and sorry about all the torture you must endure.”
Tai, YOU _ ARE _ A_ MESS!!! LOL! 🙂
@urwen-starial @devastate-lasting LOL!
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character memes in the forum Characters 6 years, 1 month ago
@urwen-starial my gosh XD
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
Here’s the second one.
Freedom at Last
Spangled bars and glistening stars
Stitched in crimson, white and blue
Blood-stained graves of the soldiers true
Haunt the heart of their comrades coming home with scars.They say freedom isn’t truly free
With them I’d have to agree
Some hearts realize there’s more to this
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
Two poems this week!
This one is another ‘spontaneous inspiration’ one. As always, enjoy, critique and, if you want to, post…[Read more]
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