Cathy

@this-is-not-an-alien

Aw thanks! I love reading about Liorah she’s just so snarky!

Thank you! IKR!

How dare you describe my plotting method so accurately! (except I used like five notebooks and random scraps of paper and wrote in pen over my pencil notes and all that’s crammed in the drawer beside my computer which has like six or seven dif…

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That piece was good @this-is-not-an-alien !!!

@this-is-not-an-alien,

A dungeon. With a monster at the door. A window. An autistic girl. A strong man. Interesting predicament. 🙂

Are both the girl and the man in prison? Are they the ones that need escaping? Does the window have bars? Is the monster brains, brawn, or both (ooh, accidental alliteration, I love those!)?

A few random may or…[Read more]

Sorry! I forgot to tag you guys on the Chronicle. (:

@beth20 @joelle-stone @rusted-knight @this-is-not-an-alien @anne_the_noob14

Merry Christmas!!!

@beth20,

Basically, yeah! @this-is-not-an-alien stuck us all back together, and I wanted Lytt to go, so I figured that was the best way. 🙂 Nice post, BTW! And, hope I’m not being pesky, but which would you prefer to come in: Asor or Virtus? 😉

Jaylin’s eyes widened when he realized more mirrors were scattered on the walls, they widened further when he saw other people surrounding him.

What the heck is happening here!?

In front of him sat Nithel. He looked about as confused as Jaylin felt. At least I’m not the only one.

Nithel rubbed his back like he had had a hard landing. Nithel als…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Lol! He is cool; all of my beta readers really like him. 🙂

If you look at the top of your “reply” box, where the italics and bold buttons are, you’ll see a thing that looks kind of like a paper clip/figure eight to the direct left of the image picture. Click that and you should be able to insert a link. 🙂

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Very good (and enthralling)! Before I make any suggestions, tho, would you like me to edit for typos or anything, or just for clarity/inconsistencies and the like?

(Also, it’s a little hard to tell where paragraphs end and where they start with the format of SE. Maybe you could add a link to the PDF or something?)

Yeah, I…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

But Rosario did love Ehud, she did love him romantically, she just didn’t get those…feelings.

Oooh!! I just remembered about this! They’re adorable together! I love it!

Of all obstinate humans, Rosario thought it as if it were an oath. With a monstrous, whinnying laugh she scared off several of the beasts so Rosario dec…

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@this-is-not-an-alien

That should be fine.

Dear Nithel, so sweet. I have a feeling he is going to be astounded by almost everything. He’s had a rather sheltered existence, as far as the physical is concerned. Playing with a mirror…😐

Nithel hesitated, pausing. The man was just staring at him. Had Nithel done something wrong? He probably did. Gabrel always found something. Was it how he walked? He hadn’t said anything yet, so it couldn’t be that. Maybe he should’ve given back the greeting…

Then the man nodded to him.

Why did he do that! Nithel’s chest went on overload. The…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Um… YES!! *bashful/innocent smile* I mean, may I? 🙂

Lol, don’t you love it when names fit like that? It’s the best. *blissful sigh*

@rose-colored-fancy

Thank you! When I read my first battle scenes, I cringe. A lot. So that means I’ve improved, right? XD

Ha ha, you’re right! I don’t really want to go back and read all my old attempts at writing…. I’m afraid I’ll mentally scar myself 😛

And that character psychology is great! Not boring at all, and probably a lot more c…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Oh, and I love how Liorah is reacting to dragons 😛

@this-is-not-an-alien

Btw, I love how different Ehud’s and Rosario’s reactions are to an injured Sadiq!

@jasmine

Love your signature, btw!

@everyone

Thank you for complementing my fourth-wall breaking XD It was so fun!

@joelle-stone

You did a fantastic job of portraying Konyar!!!

@wingiby-iggiby

Well, it was an educated bet XD

@rose-colored-fancy

Aw, thank you!!! (Honestly, I can’t wait to find out more about them, lol! They’re pretty…[Read more]

Lol, not that it’s painful in character or anything 😛 (I just love working with him, I love it I love it, I just never know what he’s gonna do next). And it is so sad nobody takes him seriously but I guess everybody has that thing 🙁

Ikr! I do have a sketchy plot for them and once it starts rolling I’m hoping to publish it as a webto…[Read more]

Whoever sees this, it’s amazing. Please. Take the time to listen.

A Message of Hope from Shannon Scholten – YouTube

And, if you have time, would you share your thoughts?

@rusted-knight @this-is-not-an-alien @eitan @anyone <3

Nithel’s eyes narrowed on the wet man, just a bit. He bowed? Egad, what did he do that for? Nithel was no royalty...

What country bowed? The Twin States? Chesed? His mind couldn’t remember the other places that existed. He was so new to the world...

He almost raised his hand in greeting to the fellow, but didn’t, jumping inside as more and more…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Ooh, I repeat what literally everyone else is saying: Great story and character!! Eliakim… that’s a Bible name, right? Cool! Your book sounds very complex and I’m also very tempted to ask you to tell me what those spoilers were about, but I know how hard it is for a writer to resist that temptation, so I won’t tempt you.…[Read more]