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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
Oof, sry for not critiquing! Life has been just about as hectic as it gets. XD And Bekah, I’m SO SO sorry (especially since your story is awesome), but IDT I’ll have the time/mental energy to critique, and since I told Skylarynn I’d critique hers first, I’m gonna go ahead and stick with her. I’m still reading yours though…[Read more]
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Arindown (Gracie) replied to the topic Orphan Names in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 5 years ago
I think most of my countries would do it in a similar manner…an adoptive family, orphanage worker, or other care-taker would name them, and that’s what they would go by. Some may never have surnames, and some would just take the ones of the people they were in the care of.
Unfortunately, in some cultures, they probably don’t take…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Orphan Names in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 5 years ago
Ooh, I actually thought about this! Very interesting question, btw!
As you know, the people in my WIP are divided into seven tribes. Orphans (Particularly foundlings) fall outside this categorization, so they often end up tribeless, which isn’t a good place to be.
They might be adopted by someone if they’re lucky, but if not, they’ll…[Read more]
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Arindown (Gracie) replied to the topic Orphan Names in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 5 years ago
Such a good question! All of a sudden I’m like, “Wait, how do they…”
I’m gonna have to think about it and get back.😁
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Rose replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
I found a picture of Karayan.
I shouldn’t have laughed so hard at that XD I don’t know what picture I expected, but it wasn’t that XD
Karayan has taken something of a liking to Chantara (albeit mostly because Chantara has not been rude to him and his other teammates have).
Hmm, wonder what Chantara will think of this!
Karayan’s r…
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Fitz replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Thanks you 🙂 and fun confusion is the best confusion, especially as she is only half wrong XD
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One moment there was nothing, another, she simply appeared in a strange pose and with a confused expression. There was no flash or display, no backlash or collateral side-affects from the capricious nature of magic. The lack of any…[Read more]
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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Thx! And yes, I get the busy thing. It’s hard for me to remember to jump onto SE anymore.
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Rose replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
*So I seriously spent five minutes trying to figure out whether I cross my arms with my left over my right and came to the conclusion it depended on how you looked at it; in the mirror I put my right arm over but for me I put my left arm over and you have completely ruined me with this!!!*
LOL, same! I do actually put right…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic Explain your plot badly! (Just for fun XD) in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
That’s really cool! That does explain your plot well XD
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
I’m so so so so so sorry. That is ridiculous, and I will pay more attention.
And I’m pretty good. There was a lot of stress about a week ago but that was figured out and things got busy, so I’m doing good.
That’s good it got figured out. And good you are good.
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Erynne replied to the topic Explain your plot badly! (Just for fun XD) in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
Hahaha, that’s hilarious!! Would you mind explaining though? Now I am incredibly curious XD
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Cathy replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
@rose-colored-fancy
I just about died reading Chantara talking to the goose LOL!*So I seriously spent five minutes trying to figure out whether I cross my arms with my left over my right and came to the conclusion it depended on how you looked at it; in the mirror I put my right arm over but for me I put my left arm over and you have…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
“Brendan is not dead.” Nithel whispered, his chest aching so much, but he let Alessio scoot back.
“I will stay with you, even if I am cursed. A life lived in safety is selfish.” Nithel’s eyes were serious, showing the ache inside him. “I am not saying safety should not be desired. Rest is good. But if your safety costs the safety of others… It…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
I nursed my bleeding hand, trying to figure out what to do now. I had clearly dropped my cover, and someone was sure to have noticed. My cheeks were still glowing from anger at myself. If one of them killed me I’d deserve it. I deserved anything that happened to me after that. I should have known better.
“Don’t pretend we didn’t see you as you a…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
“Gavin Thunderfoot. Halt.”
The mankind hesitated, as if considering obedience, then continued his rapid flight. Malvat temporarily lost sight of him as he wove around corners, but the sound of his thoughts let Malvat track him down.
Cursing the size of his dragon-form, Malvat paused his movement and cautiously tested the sturdiness of a wal…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
I’m not what you think. Alessio whispered, and Nithel breathed a moment.
What does he believe I see? Nithel squeezed Alessio a bit tighter, holding him as he pondered. Then Nithel lifted his chin, and looked at Alessio. Sadness in his eyes, but also firmness, “Eaziziun Wahid,” very softly, “even if you had murdered someone, I would not leave y…[Read more]
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Fitz replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
I would be down to join and try out a character castle. Never done one before, and yeah, the others were kinda overwhelming, lol.
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP ? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
@skylarynn Hey?
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
“St-stop stop,” Alessio stuttered. Squeezing himself in a tighter ball.
Nithel felt tears tracing down his cheeks. “My friend.” How he wanted to embrace the youth. To cry on him. To tell him he was loved and why. But Nithel didn’t want to get burned.
“Thus says the Lord who created…” He ghosted the words “who created you…”
Nith…[Read more]
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