WHOA!! Has it really been THREE MONTHS since I posted in this thread?!  . . .

Okay, it has.

Tell me what you all think of this poem.

Rainbow in Waterdrops

Come down…[Read more]

This one is another very personal to me.  Critique and enjoy!

Twenty-One
Sometimes I don’t think I qualify
For twenty-one
Weighed down by the times I have to try
I’ve never…[Read more]

Okay, I guess I’ll post in this thread when I remeber too! LOL.

Here is my latest poem. Critique and enjoy!

True North

It seems that all the world has lost it’s…[Read more]

@nuetrobolt, that sounds like an ambitious goal! Good luck!

@erynne, thank you so much! I appreciate it. Also, excellent goal!

Sorry for not responding soon; I forgot to check my notifications on SE.

i plan on returning definitely!

ciool

and yea I do remember you! That’s great. I miss all of y’all there.

I do totally understand. Thanks for the advice!

Don’t really know what to say about this one. Any and all critiques welcome!

My Morning Song (What you will say to me)

The sunlight is dawning
And though I am still…[Read more]

Hope you all enjoy!

All of the Pieces
All of my pieces I’d scattered o’er
The cracks in the surface of my stone heart floor
All of my days were lost so empty
Then You came and…[Read more]

This one I have been trying to finish for over a year now. Critque and enjoy!

Resolutions

I wrote my list of resolutions
Not to create my own solutions
I want to live like my…[Read more]

Merry Christmas!!

My Christmas Prayer
All the lights are hung, twinkling
Like a million stars glittering all over the walls
By the window the tree is shining
Crowned with a…[Read more]

Oh, wow! I keep forgetting about this. I am a bad thread-up-keeper . . . if there is such a word. . .

Anyway, this week’s is rather short. Just something I started singing to…[Read more]

This one is another very personal one to me. As always, critique and enjoy!!

Rest in Him

I know where there is a hushed abode
If in my life the longings are heavy load
A…[Read more]

Here’s this week’s.

Along the lanes and the country road
Through these rugged hills the landscape comes alive
Such vivid hues of scarlet and wine

Blown on the wind of a stormy…[Read more]

Another more personal peom, but I hope that you all enjoy it! 🙂

Thank You for Forgiving Me

Once my life was wasted with lust, aslant in a downward slide
Once I lived like a…[Read more]

Oh, dear! Sorry I forgot about this!

This week’s is one that I wrote more recently.  It’s a little more personal to me than most of the other poems I have written.

As usual,…[Read more]

Here is another revision of one of my older poem/songs. Enjoy and critque! A

And if you have written any poetry you’d like to share, please feel free to post it here. 🙂

My…[Read more]

This week I have another revision of an older song. Enjoy and critique!

Bloom (Where you are)
Flower, you’re crowned with a jewel-like bud
But all you think about is that…[Read more]

Okay, so I know some of you (uhem, @parker) have encouraged me to publish my poems as a book. I have really appreciated the encouragement and critique you all have given…[Read more]

Sorry I’m a little behind! This week’s is a revison of one I wrote some time ago. As always, I hope you enjoy, and please…[Read more]

And this is the final piece of the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀

EPILOGUE:

The magnificent life of Chloe Juancarlos was a unique one.

When she accepted Eric Diego’s card-making business, along with her friends Chloe ventured across the realm. From Arizokaland towns to th…[Read more]

CHAPTER TWELVE:

A splinter of light pierced the utter dark.

Chloe bolted upright and glanced upon her cream-shaded bed. Pale walls decorated with vibrant flowers surrounded her. Dazzling, golden light descended through her window upon the multicolored floor. A wreath of…[Read more]

Two poems this week!

This one is another ‘spontaneous inspiration’ one. As always, enjoy, critique and, if you want to, post…[Read more]

This one took me months to write, but I finally finished it. Critique and enjoy!!

Watchmen (Sound it Loud)

Watchman,…[Read more]

Hope you all are doing well.  As always, critique and enjoy! 🙂

Torchlighters

Go! the torch must be carried on
All the…[Read more]

*takes in deep breath*

Alright, the final climax is written. Feel free to critique. If you think anything in this chapter is a little weird, unnecessary, or that you just disliked, and that might be because of Chloe’s odd POV, you may share your thoughts on them if…[Read more]

This one was also one was kinda spontaneous, but I still have simiular feelins at the time I wrote it. Feel free to comment,…[Read more]

YIKES!! Sorry guys, I forgot to post this past week.

This one came from a sorta random inspiration. I was sitting, thinking…[Read more]

Alright, next chapter out!

Read on and critique if you wish. However, if for some reason any of these scenes you happen to find a little dark or violent (which I hope aren’t), please share your thoughts on them. Thanks and enjoy!

CHAPTER TEN:

The maze was a…[Read more]

This a revision of song I wrote a while ago. Critique as hard as you want and enjoy!

The Surrendering

I’m down to my last…[Read more]

Okay, this one I just finished. I wanted to write this one ever since last fall but I just couldn’t get -get it! In the end,…[Read more]

Hi, I got to chapter 6? I hope my commenting didn’t seem too heavy, because I love the story already!

There were a few things I commented on that I wasn’t sure about, but word flow could be better.

Please remember: This isn’t a judge of your writing, I’m just trying to see if there’s a better way to put it.

I always feel bad when I…[Read more]

Just finished it! It’s awesome!! 😀 I kinda feel like I didn’t comment much, and so wasn’t really helpful lol but I commented on everything that popped out at me, besides nit-picky things like spelling/grammar.

I WANT TO READ MOOORRRREEEE :'(

I’m interested. May I?

*opens doc* Did you mean to let me have editing mode? I don’t mind lol but just making sure that’s purposeful.

Thank you so much! Maybe someday you will be able to sing it . . . if I ever become a good enough composer, because I’d love to set this one to music.

Okay . . . *holds breath a moment* This is one wrote a while ago, but I wanted it to make it my best work yet. But ev…[Read more]

Ok! Also, how would you like me to do comments? I can try to write them up on a piece of paper as I come across them and note beside them the page and paragraph?

*whistles* Wow. 122,000 words… *gets wishful look in eyes as I look at my own doc*

*coughs* Um. Yeah. Just ignore that. Let’s see… *reads over synopsis* Dragons!! Yay!! (I love dragons 😀 ) I should be able to beta-read it this week and make comments 🙂 Any particular deadline you…[Read more]

This is my very latest one! Critique heartlessly and enjoy!

Awaken the Dawn
Up the pale granite heights I climb.…[Read more]

Any of you guys up for a word war within the next hour or so before I go to bed?

I hope this story doesn’t take too much more time until it’s done. It’s getting to the end.

And it really doesn’t seem this long, but… I just realized I’ve been writing this story for about a year. I started it sometime in January, 2019. And now it is 2020 already! I’ll try not drag the story out too long. Time passes…[Read more]

I have finally done it!!!! I was free this evening, so I decided to do the drawings that I promised to do aaaaaggggggeeeeeeessssssss ago.

I was in a weird mood, so I decided to use a more comic-y kind of style that I’m trying to practice. I hope you like it, if it is less than what you wo…[Read more]

Okay, the next chapter is written! I hope the character aren’t too melodramatic…. Feel free to critique! Thanks everyone.

CHAPTER NINE:

The lush grass shimmered in sunlight. The gentle breeze tugged at her hair. From her window, she gazed upon the colorful…[Read more]