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welcome back @wordsmith! I’m relatively new to the guild, and haven’t had much time to participate in things, but I’m here! The name’s SilverDragon, pleased to make your acquaintance *shakes hand*

@scribbles

Ah! I return to find you gone… but I totally understand. 🙂 We’ll miss you greatly! Until nextime… adios.

So I turn to you Lumenites! I am back! After falling off the face of the earth… yes… it was cool… space is awesome… ya’ll should try going some day.

Anyway… I just needed a gigantic break from online stuff. And it…[Read more]

@kari-karast @nuetrobolt @everyone

Delton continued down the shadowed hall. Suddenly, a shard of glass swung down from the wall. He jumped back. Great hamsters!

@kari-karast @nuetrobolt @scarletimmortalized @introverted-elf @e_elain_soup5 @everyone

Okay, all you peoples on this thread… I’m going to be directing this to get it moving again. Just thought I’d let you know. See ya on the Google Doc for more plotting.

@parker  @evelyn @andrew   @libby  @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt  @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist   @katthewriter  @e-b-raulands  ( please tag some others who think might like this)

This week’s is posted a little early. My schedule got a little changed up. 🙂

As always, enjoy-share-and critique to your heart’s content!…[Read more]

@nuetrobolt  But in real life, kids and little children do die.  Its terrible I agree, but it happens and its real and people need to know how to deal with it.  Finding an alternative doesn’t help anyone in the long run.

@Brandon-miller @nuetrobolt

No, it was not completed. But it is all one story (just wasn’t tied together yet!). I went back and added more…. Read through and see if it makes more sense now?

Please help me out! I think y’all can get the gist from what is written, but I don’t have time to edit anymore. Will need some help fleshing out a few…[Read more]

@nuetrobolt: okay, thank you!

I try to make everything have a purpose (including the card game), but if you still happen to think its going too slowly, let me know. I’m planning to have Creation’s Day in Chapter Five. There are still some things I need written in the story before the big, big event of the famous holiday Creation’s Day!

Perhaps…[Read more]

Alright, so I’m a bit behind the ball on this one (so sorry, guys!). I’ve got two completely different versions going right now, neither of which are currently finished all the way, and neither of which do I feel are fantastic. BUT I’m going to go ahead and post the one I feel most confident about so that y’all can get reading and commenting. I…[Read more]

@e-b-raulands @kari-karast @nuetrobolt @everyone-else

Okay… so, if you guys don’t mind answering some of these questions, I’d be happy. 🙂 But you don’t have to answer every question if you’re not sure about what it is asking or you don’t know the answer

Questions:

1. Is there any specific scene, paragraph, etc. that you thought was wordy,…[Read more]

@kari-karast @nuetrobolt @scarletimmortalized

Delton strode forward. “Okay… take a right.” He hopped over, making his way into another route just when a spear came slashing out of the wall. “Oh my goodness. Is this like Indiana Jones or what?”

“I hope so.” Karim shifted nervously, glancing around warily. This place had way too many traps. He frowned, wondering how Deathrock, the guards, and the other residents of the castle got around without setting off the traps. Oh well. Maybe they just knew it well enough by now to know where all the traps were.

@scarletimmortalized @nuetrobolt @andrew

@kari-karast @nuetrobolt @anne-of-lothlorien @evelyn @scarletimmortalized @e-b-raulands @Dakota @the-fledgling-artist @ashira @selah-chelyah @eden-Anderson introverted-elf @everyone-I-don’t remember

CHAPTER THREE:

The sun was already sinking to the earth. Chloe, in her silk crimson dress, skippered across the street. Houses, of every kind,…[Read more]

Hey everyone! I’ve posted some thoughts on the doc. Let me know what y’all think!

I *might* be interested in writing this one? If no-one else has volunteered? I’ll know for sure by the 16th if I’ll have the time (which I should).

@Brandon-miller @nuetrobolt @happyholly_c

@parker  @evelyn @andrew   @libby  @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt  @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist   @katthewriter  @e-b-raulands  ( please tag some others who think might like this)

This one is a long one with long lines, but I couldn’t get the feel I wanted otherwise. If any of you has any critique one this one, PLEASE s…[Read more]

Delton took a step back.

Julius Armstrand went into a fighting motion at the swing of the axes. Gasps lit the air.

@kari-karast @nuetrobolt @introverted-elf @everyone

@nuetrobolt: yeah… my apologies!

I’ve been a bit busy lately.

Anyways, like you said, we do need to finish this. *doesn’t want to leave thread un-finished* *types madly on key board*