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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
After Nithel had the patch, about the size of an adult’s hand, torn, he moved toward her on his knees, about to dip it in the water and hand it to her. But as his eyes touched her, she looked like she was going to burst. Questions spilling and jumping inside her more than the water.
She leaned forward, hoping, yet timid. Excited, but wary and…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
Mayra followed Nithel to the stream and cupped her hands in it, feeling the coolness of it. She drank thirstily, the dryness of her throat slowly recovering.
She heard a ripping sound and turned to see Nithel ripping his shirt. Her mouth fell open as he tore a large piece of it away. What was he-?
She felt the blood drip down her nose and her…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
After Nithel spoke, he could see questions roiling in her mind. It was fine. Some of the seriousness left him, and his shoulders relaxed. Intrigue of his own coming as he watched her finger a pendent. A charm about the neck, like Alessio had before he gave the leather strap to Nithel. Perhaps they were from the same world?Ā Both with strange…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
I am Nithel, son of Father.Ā Those words bounced back and forth in Mayra’s head, over and over again. She shook her head, confused. What was he on about? Who was this father of his? And why did he not refer to him by his proper name?
Unless – unless that was his name.
The gears in her brain pushed themselves into motion as she stared at this…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
āYou ā should not ā care,ā Mayra’s voice was tight, her body tensing to where her hands fisted. āWho ā are you? Why ā do this?ā
He breathed in and out, thinking. He didn’t look from her face, face serious, but still not unkind.
I was created for the protection of mankind. I love you; how could I go against my purpose? He straightens, tu…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
Mayra stared at him silently, her jaw tight. Her eyes were stinging as if she was holding back a wave of tears. This boy was either brave or stupid, to treat her with such courtesy. He wanted her to eat with them, even after everything that had happened. Her chest tightened at the sight of his soft eyes.
āYou – should not – care,ā Mayra ans…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
When she paled and took a step back, Nithel straightened, eyes concerned.
āAre you ā not afraid? This ā makes others ā afraid. I hurt ā with this.ā As the heat flicked over her palms, his chest skipped beats. In all honesty, he was terrified. He had no doubt that it made others afraid, or that she had the ability to hurt with those hands.
But…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
“Come,” the boy said to her softly, offering fruit to her.
This boy was testing her limits. And he was looking at her with an emotion that she had not seen in a long time. Was that truly-?
Mayra paled and took a step back. She didn’t want this. She didn’t deserve this kindness, this – compassion. Why? Why was he so good to her? Why was he…[Read more]
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Your profile banner is beautiful Neasa!
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@kimlikesart
Hi Kimmi! Thank you so much, I love red roses so it’s kind of my theme now š I love your banner too, I like the nature theme. I’m doing okay, thanks for asking though honestly the past few weeks have been hard for me tbh. How are you doing today? -
Allo! You’re welcome, they’re lovely.
What do you like about red roses?
And thank you.I’m sorry. Is there anything I can pray for you about? Or just pray?
I’m doing pretty good. We just got back from vacation early this morning, and now I’m getting some school stuff ready for next week. -
Hello @kimlikesart š
Thanks for asking! Its quite complicated haha but I like red roses because they played a big part in strengthening my relationship with God. You could call it a mystical experience š but ya I love the colour red and red roses are now my favourite.
And your very welcome š that sounds lovely, where did you go on your…[Read more] -
Red roses are beautiful.
We went to Disney World, and did stuff there. And we went to a beach! That was really fun. (:
My little sister and I built a sandcastle, and walls and trenches… Finding shells and swimming was fun too.How was the retreat?
What are you studying in college?
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That’s so cool! Sounds like you had a lot of fun. I have never been to Disneyland (or world) myself. We went to Paris a few years ago and I begged my family to let us go to Disneyland but they said no haha. I was so upset XD. I love beaches too, they’re so much fun.
The retreat was so good, I really enjoyed myself. It was way out in…[Read more]
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Ooh, France. What are some of your favourite things you remember from there?
The retreat sounds lovely. The mountains, and cnountryside. <3 And meeting lovely people.How long have you been interested in films?
And thank you!
I will be learning how to be an entrepreneur, and how to write quality novels on deadline.…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
Nithel glanced up as the girl touches his hands, her touch gentle, hesitant. She shook her head, as if afraid. Not wanting to impose. āYou ā eat,ā She let go of him, and pointed at herself. āMe ā fine.ā
His brows lifted the smallest bit. He hadn’t expected her to refuse food. He breathed in and out, eyes looking at her face, the blood. His…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Malvat burst through the hole after the others, showering dirt and rock down into the collapsing room. The ground beneath him held – miraculously. He attributed it to the overall strangeness of this place.
Raising his head to they sky, Malvat shook the rubble off his gleaming ebony body and sniffed the air. Clear, but somehow scented with…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
The boy was offering her fruit. He looked at her hesitantly, then looked away. She wondered what he made of her. She had hurt his friend after all. Yet he was still offering her food. What was left of it anyway.
She stared at him carefully, then pushed his hands away, shaking her head. “You – eat,” she answered. Then she pointed at herself. “Me -…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Nithel stares a bit at them, then glances to the food, intending to hand it out.
He goes first to Brendin, offering him a loaf of mushed bread. If the man doesn’t take it, Nithel will lay it on the ground before him. His manor is like that of a servant, when facing Brendin.
He then moves to Jericho, manor more relaxed, but still formal as he…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Oh my goodness gosh darned snickerdoodles! Iāve completely missed your post @millennium this entire time!! *also me; has been hovering around in utter anticipation for an update and didnāt even noticed your update XDXDXD!*
āAny questions?ā She finished which was probably not the best way to word that because any questions was an invitat…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
The blood flow from Brendin’s nose halted at a touch from Jericho.
āLetās just all take a momentā¦to calm downā¦and divide our rations, and save our strength for the next disaster.āĀ
“Yes, that would seem wise,” Jericho said, somewhat wryly.Ā She sat down on the grass and watched quietly as Alessio and the wolf-girl – Lupa? – began conversing.…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
āHello?ā Alessio nearly jumped back to avoid stumbling into her, instinctively glancing up.
āIām sorry,ā He said reflexively, backing out of her personal space. The pain in his head was beginning to subside but the images it conjured were still sharply clear andā¦Alessio shook off the thought, and the questions that could wait. What had she said he…[Read more] -
Joelle Stone replied to the topic “Escape from Ackerley” a collaborative story in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Thwapling told me what’s happening, so I thought I’d come over here and tag some RP peeps. š
@this-is-not-an-alien @rose-colored-fancy @irishcelticredflowercrown @rusted-knight @kylie-wingfeather @arindown @skylarynn @kimlikesart @millennium
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
*goes through everyoneās names ok Emilyās @millennium and @skylarynn was here for a while so Peter isā¦@CRAZYWRITER I THOUGHT YOU WERE A GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Before he could think straight Alessio felt himself yanked forward, dizzy with the noise, images, memories, present all jumbled. There was something heā¦couldnāt remembāHe nearly lost his balance shoved through the hole and darted up disoriented, prepared to fend off a blow.
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Nithel grabbed the bag with one hand, clutching underneath one of Alessio’s arms with the other. Dragging him toward where everyone else was going. More dust. It was like the castle was coughing, or growling at them in rage…
Nithel shoved Alessio through the hole, and barreled out behind him. The light was so bright Nithel was almost blinded.…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Nithel came beside Alessio, and began to work at the wall. Then he watched Alessio, struggling… “Alessio,” He whispered, rather loudly, because the ceiling’s noise was loud. “It is not about the power, but your feelings. Do you want the flame to come? Why. Is it because you love us, and want to be saved? Is it because you are angry at this…[Read more]
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