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Lona replied to the topic Hello there in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 7 months ago
Will do. Though, it might be awhile before I see her with all the social distancing stuff haha.
Yes, they are all so lovable, and making that many lovable characters is not easy. So, Andrew Peterson, you have my respect.
And don’t worry about it! Long isn’t bad! As I was saying to Thwapling, rambling is one of my many *talents*,…[Read more]
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Lona replied to the topic Favorite Character in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 7 months ago
Your prediction is correct. I wouldn’t be able to decide a favorite of all the fictional characters out there, but maybe, I could one of my own. So, even though I do love all of my little characters, Offo is probably my favorite. Just a quiet, slightly eccentric and quirky, but caring and peace-seeking alchemist in need of some love.
Now my…[Read more]
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Lona replied to the topic Hi, everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 7 months ago
Hey, Kaytelyn! Welcome!
Your name is so pretty! I don’t think I’ve ever seen it spelled like that before.
Fantasy and poetry are my favorites too! Though, honestly I’m not that great at poetry, but I suppose no one can really be perfect at something, right?
That sounds exciting! Have you already decided on what you’ll name your…[Read more]
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Lona replied to the topic Hello there in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 7 months ago
She’d be mostly confused since she tends to take everything literally, no matter people’s tones. The best part of it though, is she thinks she knows what sarcasm is, so she’ll be what she calls “sarcastic” and then get annoyed when the rest of my family is just trying not to laugh.
Aw thank you! It’s a delight talking to…[Read more]
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Lona replied to the topic Hello Everyone 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 7 months ago
Welcome!
Fantasy is what I play with mostly, too. I’ve tried other types, but eh it just doesn’t go so well haha.
Do you have a favorite of those many bookshops you have found? If any of them are chain stores, can you recommend one? 🙂
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Lona replied to the topic Feedback 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 7 months ago
Thank you so much! Those were super helpful! I think I fixed all the grammar stuff.
And don’t worry about your critiquing sounding harsh.
“If you listen to constructive criticism, you will be at home among the wise. ” (Prov. 15:31)
And I do believe you mean constructive, not destructive criticisms. 🙂
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Lona replied to the topic Hello there in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 7 months ago
Well said.
Oh that’s terrible! I’m sorry for you. My sister doesn’t understand sarcasm so she doesn’t get half of what my brother and I joke about either.
Haha and your rambling thoughts have been very pleasant, thank you. 😀
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Lona replied to the topic *inhales the fresh air, and looks around* in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 7 months ago
No problem! And, yes, it is nice when feedback is consistent. 🙂
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Lona replied to the topic Hello there in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 7 months ago
Exactly! Sometimes the people have great ideas so I’m fine with what they do to my characters, but other times I’m just internally screaming, “But they would never do that! That’s so out of character!” Oh well haha.
Hey, what do you mean haha? Your jokes are great. Anyways jokes without tone and facial expression are hard,…[Read more]
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Lona replied to the topic Feedback 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 7 months ago
I’m gad you liked it! I look forward to seeing your comments, but no rush, take your time. 😀
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Lona replied to the topic Hello there in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 7 months ago
Oh yeah, I’ve had that problem in role-plays before. I see how collabs would have it to. Though, actually, most of the role-plays I’ve been in had the opposite problem. People would just make my characters do things without my permission and that drove me a little crazy.
Oh why thank you. 🙂 It’s kind of funny that you say…[Read more]
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Lona replied to the topic Hello there in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 7 months ago
Oh my, that does sound crazy! I’ve never done a collab story before, though I would like to at some point. How do you like collabs?
I completely agree. Life is rough, but it gets less rough as you learn. Something my mom always says, which I quote her on all the time is, “If it doesn’t kill you then it’s a story.” Which I…[Read more]
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Lona replied to the topic *inhales the fresh air, and looks around* in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 7 months ago
Hey, there! So, after reading your draft, I have a few things to note. First, I think these were just typos:
“I blink as I moving along scaffold…”
“Light streams from of the box.”.
Next, it seems to me you use ‘inhale’ too much. Perhaps, find a synonym or two? I know that inhale is the most concise way of saying ‘took a breath…[Read more]
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Lona started the topic Feedback 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 7 months ago
Hello again, lovely people!
So, I have here a continuation of the Life and Death section that I put in my last Feedback forum. (Though, this time I have it as a Google Doc instead of a too-long forum. Heh.)
As last time, if you want to read it, then great! Any feedback would be appreciated.
Have a nice day. 😀
Doc:…[Read more]
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Lona replied to the topic Hello there in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 7 months ago
I would say the same thing about piano haha. I’m still learning.
Oh cool! I’ve never heard of that song. I’ll have to look it up later.
Sounds good! Honestly, I can’t even juggle rubber balls so I’m impressed when anyone can juggle anything, be it metaphorically or literally.
Yeah I think I have to agree with you on the…[Read more]
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Lona replied to the topic Feedback? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 7 months ago
Thank you for your feedback!
A poetry forum sounds great, and I’d love to see some of your poetry. 😀
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Lona replied to the topic Hello there in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 7 months ago
Fantasy. I don’t branch out too much, though I have written a little in mysteries.
What genre do you like to write in?
Thanks for the welcome!
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Lona replied to the topic I'm Publishing a Book This Week! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 7 months ago
Will do! Unfortunately, we just started a new one, so it might be while, but I’ll convince them afterwords.
And eh, that’s fine. My philosophy is that books are essential to life, so you get them like you do fruits and veggies. If I have to buy my fruits and veggies sometimes instead of picking them from the local community garden…[Read more]
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Lona replied to the topic Feedback? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 7 months ago
Thank you!
And well, that makes me feel a little better about the length of it haha.
Ah, the commas strike again. Gracie mentioned I missed some other commas as well. Commas shall be the death of me. 😛
But I’m glad you liked it! Thanks again for the feedback!
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