Joelle Stone

YOU HAVE A ROBIN HOOD/CINDERELLA RETELLING?!!? THOSE ARE MY TWO FAVORITE FAIRY TALES GIRL I MUST READ THIS!!!!!

@devastate-lasting,

I feel ya. 😛

Writing’s going very well, you?

@crazywriter,

Swaggy!! Send it over whenever you’re ready. 🙂

@devastate-lasting,

Agh, I do that too. XD Peeps tag me, then I’m like, “OH! STORY EMBERS! I FORGOT ABOUT THAT!” XD

@crazywriter,

Ok, let’s get this puppy finished up!

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Abner wiped sweat off his brow, and examined the horizon. The detail had been riding for much of the day, and Abner suspected the fort to be somewhere nearby. Dusk approached, and darkness was settling over the land. The men strained their eyes to see anything so much as a light or torch,…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting,

JOIN THE CONVO

@rebekah-doose,

My writing’s going good! I’m reading through K. M. Weiland’s Outlining Your Novel book (and get to plot through my current story premise as soon as I’m done with it), I’m working on a fantasy novella/novelette thing which is a lot of fun, and since YWW’s Sprint Competition just started that means that (theoretically) I get to use…

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@crazywriter,

Here we go again! I’ve set aside Tuesdays for editing/critiquing, so I should be able to get through your chapters a lot faster than before. 🙂

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Hours later, Abner was riding southeast, Breanon’s hooves pounding the cobbled road. A group of ten cavalry officers rode behind him, all seasoned veterans with grim faces. Cold air b…[Read more]

@obrian-of-the-surface-world,

Aha, thanks! Unfortunately, I’m on a Chromebook, so I don’t think it’s going to work on mine. Nuts. XD Maybe I’ll try and find something else.

@obrian-of-the-surface-world,

Heh, thanks! I’ll try and find Audacity and maybe play around with it a little.

SERIOUSLY?!?! THAT’S SO COOL YOU COULD SELL THAT WHEN YOU PUBLISH!!!!!!!!!!!

@erynne,

GIRL.

I. LOVE. IT.

I MUST READ MORE

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

Wow. Remind me what app you use to record this!?!?

One thing I did notice was that the “its” in this sentence should be “her”

bride extending its fingers

You seem to enjoy descriptions (all of which are gorgeous, BTW!!!!!!!), but remember that descriptions can take out…[Read more]

@crazywriter,

Heh, me too!! It’s really nice to have other eyes to catch those. 😛

Chapter 3

@crazywriter,

Same format as always!

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Abner entered the private stables reserved for royalty, urgency in his every step. Bedecked in battle gear, the moon glinted (the moon is bedecked in battle gear? XD) through the narrow windows of the stables, glimmering off the cool metal armor. Having said his goodbyes the previous evening,…[Read more]

*blinks* Uh… I don’t remember. XD @obrian-of-the-surface-world HELP! XD

@erynne,

This is what I’m seeing. Maybe check the link and make sure there isn’t a typo?