JennytheFaun

Ok, here are my thoughts, since we’re not really getting a ton of feedback from the other
You both wrote equally wonderful, yet totally different stories. There are so many things I love about each of them and I think either one is a worthy entry.

@jennythefaun, do you WANT to enter your story? I don’t want you to feel pressured, so if you…[Read more]

@jennythefaun

So far, I’m seeing 1 for me by @McKinley (I’ll bet by tiny margins) any others?

@jennythefaun

I should rephrase that. I know you wanted to make some edits, and didn’t know if you had done what you wanted to do, or felt you needed to get it done (since yours is pretty good as is).

@maddiejay

If no one is able to make up their mind on which story, pick jennythefaun’s. I’ve already had my turn. 🙂

@maddiejay, @jennythefaun

Mine is ready if Jenny can’t get hers in on time. Jenny, are you ready?

@everyone

Do you guys have a favorite?

Hey guys? Where we at? Are we decided?

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@jennythefaun

That was amazing!!! Well done. You have beautiful prose and foreshadowing. And you used my disappearing woman! 🙂

The only thing I would do is give Noss a little more initiative. For the most part, I felt like he was merely watching and commenting on the events, instead of actively trying to find the truth out.

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If you guys haven’t already, check out both stories and offer any feedback you have. Our deadline for submission is this Monday morning

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@jennythefaun
I…I love that.
I’ve got a soft spot for Victorian London, so that grabbed me right away.
The details, the word building, the prose…very good. Excellent.
I’m reading this on my phone, so I’m not sure how over the word count we are, but I think there are little things that could be trimmed rather than big chunks. I think cutti…[Read more]

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@jennythefaun

Totally go ahead and wait. I’ll post it soon, but I just figured out I need to cut a ton of words.

That sounds like such a cool idea! I can’t wait to read yours!!!

@jennythefaun

What’s spec-fic? I’m not as familiar with writing terms as I ought to be. Regardless, I love your idea and can’t wait to see you run with it!

@jennythefaun, @mckinley

All this is excellent! I’m actually almost done with the first draft. Jenny, do you want me to post it now, or wait until your idea is further along so it doesn’t affect your thoughts?

Also, as a fair warning I’ve been shivering through writing this. It may be too dark to use, but it’s hard to tell from the writer’s…[Read more]

@mckinley, @jennythefaun

I honestly love these ideas!!! Jenny, don’t feel bad about taking the story if you want too. We could also both write it out and deside which one’s better afterwards. Up to you.

In terms of suspects, we need to have 3 suspects:

1. The “obvious suspect” that both the detective and the sidekick soon veer away from.

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@jennythefaun No problem. 🙂

@jennythefaun *nods* That’s very easy. I don’t remember how to do it, but I do remember it was pretty easy. I think the most difficult part would probably be finding where to switch it, but I don’t remember if that was difficult or not. (I should just go look it up and refresh my memory. XD)

EDIT: I’ve returned from looking it up. There’s a…[Read more]

@jennythefaun
That makes total sense. Those are all super cool ideas! I’ll pass that on. Thanks!

@jennythefaun

One of my favorites is definitely ”The Horse and His Boy”. The Sliver Chair was a good one… I might go give it another read. I have the entire Narnia book set on my phone, and I’m pretty sure I have them in book form somewhere as well. XD

Ok, I’m about to go look up The Blue Tower now. You got me intrigued. 😉