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@erica-wordsmith That sounds like a blast!

@e-b-raulands Maybe they set out to kill him but have to settle for imprisonment because the Hunter from Snow White is onto their schemes and is allied with Mr. MacGregor? Or something like that…

*Goes off to listen to the Hobbit song*

@r-m-archer I’m glad it helped! I really only felt like there were minor things to comment on. The plot, characters, and worldbuilding are all so, so good. Yep, I’d be happy to give it another read-through!

Mine is here!!!! https://1drv.ms/w/s!AvW4C3toKDfAgXDZjicPAisSPxL7 Warning: it’s in Word, which is way less convenient for commenting than…[Read more]

@toklaham-veruzia Thanks for reading Candle and I’m glad you enjoyed it! I considered entering it, but the word limit for the contest is 5k and Candle is over 9k, so I’d have to cut out basically half the story. I didn’t think I could make that work very well.

The reason I had people call her “the evil woman” all the time was that they were too…[Read more]

@r-m-archer will do!

@r-m-archer and @edmund-lloyd-fletcher I read both your stories! They were super different but I enjoyed each a lot. Do you want a full beta read, or do you just want high-level, general feedback? Thanks for letting me read these!

And @edmund-lloyd-fletcher I “got it” when you told the name of the county. 😁

@r-m-archer Yup, I’d still love to! I probably won’t get a chance to read it until tomorrow evening though. Hopefully in a few days I’ll have mine ready for y’all to read. It needs your help XD

@edmund-lloyd-fletcher I volunteer to read yours too

@wordsmith Lol, I haven’t finished A Story of Heroes yet either, so I can’t give you a hard time. How’s the Flabbit Room been? Are there any other Flabbits here?

@evelyn and @trufflehunter Yep, PoYD is pretty great. I might have liked The Deeps of the Dragon King just a smidge better (the guilt! the redemption! the sea dragons!), but it’s a close…[Read more]

@r-m-archer Lol, I’m pretty excited about it too…the thing is I’ve been planning a lot but I haven’t drafted it yet, so I’m a bit nervous about it living up to all my expectations.

Awesome, I’ll look forward to it!

@r-m-archer

Not so long ago, the concept of centering a story around a theme wasn’t even on my radar, so needless to say I don’t have much experience there either. If you want, though, I’d be happy to read your story and give some feedback (especially if you’d be willing to give a second opinion on mine too 😉).

@eden-anderson

Yeah, “I need to…[Read more]

@evelyn Remember the “quote” at the beginning of chapter 5 of “The Places Beyond the Maps”? The “Bright Woe of Hadrell and Simi” bit? I wrote what I considered the backstory for it. If y’all want to read it I could start a thread for it, I don’t want to clog up this one 😉

I thought it was pretty awesome. I laughed the hardest at Sophelia Stupe…[Read more]

I’m also willing to jump in if you’re looking for new peeps!

@evelyn Doing pretty well and still writing! I’m approaching the publication of my second book and I wrote a Wingfeather-inspired short story. Plus I’m working on an entry for the SE short story contest.

Have you Wingfeather fans all read Wingfeather Tales? I read a borrowed copy and now I just bought my own 😁👍😁👍

@i-david go get em! We’ll be ready to help with revision!

@r-m-archer I’ve always had a really tough time with short stories too. Working on one for this contest has been awfully fun though! Did you enter the contest last year?

@evelyn 😂 Fancy meeting you here!

Sorry I didn’t reintroduce myself earlier…

Anyhoo, nice to see you again, Flabbits!

@kayla-skywriter I found SE through the Wingfeather forum too!

That sounds like an awesome book, I’ll have to look into it.

*Waves back to my fellow Knaplinger @kari-karast*

@samantha-pen Maybe instead of writing in full-fledged scenes you could do several short “snapshots”? I have a terrible time keeping anything short, so maybe I’m not the one to give advice, but there’s my idea. XD

Anyway, let us know when you write it! Sounds like a good story!