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@r-m-archer I’m glad it helped! I really only felt like there were minor things to comment on. The plot, characters, and worldbuilding are all so, so good. Yep, I’d be happy to give it another read-through!

Mine is here!!!! https://1drv.ms/w/s!AvW4C3toKDfAgXDZjicPAisSPxL7 Warning: it’s in Word, which is way less convenient for commenting than Google docs. I feel like it still needs a lot of work to become everything it should be, so any and all of you are welcome to be ruthless! @eden-anderson @edmund-lloyd-fletcher and @toklaham-veruzia, I’ll tag you guys too since you’ve been on this thread. I’d appreciate any feedback you can give, but don’t feel obligated!