Emma Huckabee (Emma Starr)

@libby Yes!!! Thank you so much! Your support means a lot to me. <3 <3 <3 <3

If you start a blog, I’ll be your first follower. 😉

I’ll shoot you an email!

@w-o-holmes Overall, you have strong poetic lines and the rhyming is natural.

You asked for a critique…maybe go through and pick out any unnecessary adjectives. It seems pretty good to me. For some reason, I couldn’t really figure out what was going on–maybe just too much school on the brain though. Don’t take anything I say too seriously. ;P

@evelyn The youtuber I’ve found most helpful is Shayda Campbell. She has great watercolor tutorials. 🙂

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCcR1TUaD8Zn6P6O8hOA-xYA

@w-o-holmes Thanks!! I’m so glad you liked it–I can see that you understand the poem and thought behind it. 😀

@evelyn I’m glad you enjoyed it. ;P

@k-a-grey I LOVE IT. XD When I read the last line I was like, oh no…OH MY.

@libby I’m sorry it made you sad!!! I didn’t mean to make you cry!! lol I like your poem–it’s cute and sounds like a…[Read more]

@azeline-d I really liked your poems’ themes! Overall, you had vivid word choices which I appreciate. The second poem had great imagery–especially the first three lines.

In a few places, something that would help us as readers would be changing the word order or playing around with word choice. I’m the thinking of “Are a few of very many/That…[Read more]

@w-o-holmes That’s awesome. XD

@w-o-holmes I have discovered that I am *very* bad at writing couplets, so I will be back with some decent ones. 😀 They are my new improvement goal!

@w-o-holmes I usually have a burst of inspiration where something I hear/read/see becomes a line of poetry or general theme for a poem. My best ideas come right before I drift off to sleep and right before I wake up.

I let my mind wander as much as possible within the poem, then edit out whatever I don’t like. My philosophy is if it never got on…[Read more]

@k-a-grey I LOVE THAT!!!!

@w-o-holmes I’ve been pampered–my family has been making me so much good food that I can eat. <3 I’m on the mend!

Somehow I wasn’t loopy at all! My family said maybe the medicine made me normal because I’m always silly. ;P

@w-o-holmes Cool idea!!! I’m getting my wisdom teeth out tomorrow so I’ll do it and reply to your other comments as soon as I can!!!

@w-o-holmes That’s really cool!!

Yes! I have one poem that I submitted to Story Embers that they published in April, and I’m working on another big project poem to try to get published.  🙂 I also post my poems on my blog: https://sevenbillionsmiles.home.blog/. Do you post yours anywhere?

I really want to have a book of poetry–I have almost…[Read more]

@w-o-holmes What a great rough draft! (I wish all of my poems could come out like that in the beginning stages!)

I love the concept of “wrinkled rhyme” and the alliteration there is really cool too. 🙂

@nuetrobolt I do not believe so, but she has great themes and good messages in her stories. 🙂

@cindy I love seeing newborn poems in their freshest, rawest state–so rewarding. I think the magic is still tangible. <3 <3