Caseybold

@imwritehere1920

Aw thanks 🙂

I use YWW (Young Writer’s Workshop). Are you part of it?

Ooh cool!

Yes, definitely…they did a really good job.

Aw thank you! The genre for my novella is historical-fiction (with a little clean romance in there too 😉 ).

This is the synopsis or premise:

World War II is sweeping across Europe, stealing the…[Read more]

@josiah @taylorclogston and @daeus-lamb

I’m so sorry for the late reply. I wrote a response that didn’t post, then have had an incredibly busy few weeks, and didn’t think to check to make sure it posted. ): But I do very much so appreciate that you have taken the time to help me out and give me advice.

To keep you updated, since I last posted,…[Read more]

@abigail-rebekah

It’s so nice to ‘meet’ you too!  Thanks so much!  I like your name too! 🙂

Which writing website do you use?

I can’t tell much, but my WIP is about a brother and sister who find a lost phoenix and have to return it home (it’s much more complex than that; this is just the gist).

And yes, I saw the Giver movie; the visuals and h…[Read more]

@imwritehere1920

Hey Lily,

Nice to “meet” you 😉

I love your name btw; it’s very pretty!

That’s all good…I’ve been mainly using another writing website recently so haven’t really done much on here.

Ooh cool genre! What is your WIP about, if you don’t mind me asking?

I loved the film for The Giver. Have you seen it? That genre is really…[Read more]

@abigail-rebekah

Hi there! *waves back*.  I’m Lily.  I know this is coming really late (I signed up for the forum, oh, about a month ago?  Idk, quarantine has messed up my ability to keep track of time XD).  Anyway, I haven’t really visited this forum much, because it didn’t look like a lot of people used it recently; but then I figured since I’m…[Read more]

@eitan

Good job! You excellently ”prepare a way” for the surprising arrival of the actual Messiah

You portray characters very well.

Thanks!

It’s way more likely that the teacher will be an older, charismatic man, who enraptures young, hot blooded people like Ruben.

I have an idea of how I can fix that. Thanks! (:

Don’t use brackets in a story…<…

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@daeus-lamb

Okay, that was super helpful. Thanks for the thoughts! I’ll check all that out…and if anyone else has thoughts, pitch in as well. 🙂

(The Mindset Course is under our Resources tab)

You know, @anne_the_noob14, yesterday I listened a sermon on Proverbs 31. The pastor said that trought that poem God himself was praising godly women. So we his children could/should imitate him on doing that. I think it’s something you did here (and, I belive, I may try too).

@kimlikesart

Good job! You excellently ”prepare a way” for the surprising arrival of the actual Messiah 🙂

You portray characters very well.

Hmm… A 16 years old boy teaching the crowds? It’s way more likely that the teacher will be an older, charismatic man, who enraptures young, hot blooded people like Ruben.

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Okay, also I have had several younger writers beta reading my book. Whether that’s good or not, there it is. XD I find it helpful on a small scale, personally, even if I don’t always like their ideas.

I also realize that my own opinion (that my book is awesome and I’m pretty good at editing it) may be highly biased, so be brutal if necessary. I…[Read more]

@candide She’s awesome 🙂

Thank you!

@sam-m

Thanks! And yes! I read a few poems like that recently which is kinda what inspired me to write this one 🙂

@eitan

Thank you! 😀

Beautiful! I can’t add anything beyond what have been already said 🙂

Great poem, Livi! I feel like it can be easy to ignore the challenges and integrity in other people’s lives and I think it’s really cool when people use a form of art (like poetry) to highlight the heroism in others.

What a incredible mother you have!

I enjoyed the descriptions. I could feel being tired too.