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Candide replied to the topic I Made a Writing Rank Quiz! in the forum Writing Level & Journey Plans Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
I took the test too. Got the same (Journeyman Writer). The questions made me think more about my writting itself than my routines as a writter. Kind of more usefull to me.
I’ve read Fancine Prose’s book. Some questions remembered me her book.
😉
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Candide replied to the topic Let's talk about representation! in the forum Characters 6 years ago
I don’t like this topic so much. I think writers should care about theme and let their personal ability to choose the character that fits better to it. Writers should feel free to portray who and what they intend to (or are able to).
But I would apreciate some stories of a priest where he can do his job in peace, like if it could be a normal part…[Read more]
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Candide replied to the topic Anyone want to chat since the world is basically ending in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
I’m not writting at all too. I spent all the week at home (but monday) engaged with cooking, cleaning and organizing things.
What’s happening changed peoples perspective of live. We are dealing with things that few of us could imagine. And so fast. I guess I needed some time to rest these ideas. I fell that what I’m about to write will be…[Read more]
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Candide replied to the topic Have You Noticed the Book on the Home Page is "Lord of the Rings?" in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
Congrats!
I’ve started reading “Lord of the Ring” a month ago for the first time too.
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Candide replied to the topic Damsel in Distress… or Damsel of Destruction in the forum Characters 6 years, 2 months ago
I’ve been thinking on that and my guess is this niilism around us that causes D.O.D being popular. In a world with no hope, no good for free and no strength above human strength, the heroine must held it the best possible. That’s why we woman have been portrait “as strong as man”; that’s the best woman this world can give birth.
So, an possible…[Read more]
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Candide replied to the topic Damsel in Distress… or Damsel of Destruction in the forum Characters 6 years, 2 months ago
I would like to remember Miss Marple, from Aghata Cristie’ books, as an inspiration. Her “strength” does not come from physical abilities neither and she’s old and single. She doens’t have beauty and youth, the most commom “powers” a female characater may have.
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Candide replied to the topic Yuri Snippet 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
I chose “Late night thoughts and nightmare”. Later, she can “revange herself in true life”, living things that meant the oposite of her thoughts and nigthmares.
Oh, If I could, I would invite her to go to some beach and just forget this smalminded school people!
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Candide replied to the topic Fresh Poems! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
Hello! This one is a english-spanish poem. Written a couple weeks ago.
Does it works? Enjoy and critique.
Salmo
I’ll be weak beforme my God
The one whose praise is worth
I’ll be weak before my God
The one who made me of His own
I may live in a huge desert
One He personally knows
Oh, God!
Help this pouring soul!Yo lo sé.
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Candide replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
How lovelly! How sweet!
Sometimes I feel exactly like this.
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Candide started the topic word-war-viii in the forum Announcements 6 years, 4 months ago
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Candide replied to the topic I'm really stuck, can I get some help? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
Well, when it happens to me, it’s time to bake or to ride a bike.
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Candide replied to the topic I HAVE A POETIC CHALLENGE! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
Here about Lydia Davis: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/lydia-davis
Sorry for taking so long to answer (*shame*)
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Candide posted a new activity comment 6 years, 4 months ago
@w-o-holmes!
Lydia Davis: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/lydia-davis
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Candide replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
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Candide replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 5 months ago
Thanks, @dakota
I like small poetry. In fact, my goal is 15/18 lines. So, if it is not enough, let’s rewrite! (I intended to portray loneliness.)
Now, your turn, guys.
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Candide replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 5 months ago
Well, I have this one:
No hope
I keep my eyes open untill night
I keep myself asleep
Listening silent stars.
(I just forget they are above, really above)
I read.
I play cards alone.
I wash one cup.
(Stars are completely above).
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Candide replied to the topic Siblings in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 5 months ago
@kayla-skywriter, very lovely idea! I’ve already written poems to my family too. Once my father came to tears.
How old is your younger sister? How does she shows afection toward her mom?
Maybe you should invite her to prepare somenthing of her own that could be added to book project . Just ask her what could be (she may want to contribut with…[Read more]
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Candide replied to the topic Short story in need of critics in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions 6 years, 5 months ago
Thanks, @quinn-ofallon!
About L., I’m not sure if anyone would go on asking the way he does (in the middle of the text, in fatc).
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Candide replied to the topic Short story in need of critics in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
Feel free to say what doesn’t work. 🙂
(I’m not sure about L. behavior in the end. If it is convincing.)
It’s a english version of a short story written in Portuguese.
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Candide started the topic Short story in need of critics in the forum 6 years, 6 months ago
<p style=”text-align: center;”>Pink Maristela</p>
She had upon her a pair of blue eyes. Shoulders. Hands. Smile. He had fallen.But Maristela was in panic. Shy and talkative, she went on telling her ideas to change the world (at least, sharing some succesful experiences on smaller tasks).
– Why do you close your eyes while you talk? He asked.…[Read more]
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