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Eitan replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
It’s excellent! Great job. The only problems that were left to fix:
1) If you want to include Jered’s dream, he should remember it. Don’t include details the POV doesn’t know.
2) The last line should end with a dot, I think. The exclamation mark looks… strange.
3) There were some problems with punctuating, I recommend you to go over…[Read more]
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Gracie started the topic Chean’s Story Chpt. 2 in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years ago
a time to be born, and a time to die; a time to plant, and a time to pluck up that which is planted
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Joab ben Elizer, of the tribe of Judah owned a large, one roomed home with a wide guests’ courtyard in Bethlehem. It was a small, though not unimportant town, two miles from Chena’s home. Joab had a wife, named Rachel, and one…[Read more]
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Eitan replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria 😉 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
Congrats!! 😉
We call the worlds we live in ”The World”. Why do the inhabitants of Ninjanaria don’t do the same?
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Kristianne Hassman replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria 😉 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
Yay, another chapter! I’ll come back soon and give you some thoughts on it 😉
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@arindown @anne_the_noob14 @kayla-skywriter @beth20  @naiya-dyani @writergirl101 @candide @mayajoelle @kimlikesart
I’m gonna answer a few random ones (hopefully that’s okay with you all?):
Answering for Jordan:
1. How tall are you?
I dunno, like 6’3″
2. What is keeping you from wanting to die?
(…) Emberynus answering to keep him from…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years ago
Teagen: ‘Uh…’ Heartbeat quickens. ‘I’m not going to marry at all. I don’t know any of my cousins, close or otherwise. I also have no ‘friends’ exactly.’
Lawrence: ‘My best friend is my professor, a male. So, that wouldn’t work, and please don’t argue with me on that. A distant cousin, since I have plenty girls in that category, of…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@arindown Sorry. (: *Sheepish grin, but truly sorry for causing confusion.*
For Lawrence:
1. ‘To be a known and revered scientist.’
2. ‘Cooking, oh, uh… Canned goods, and microwave dinners.’
3. ‘Labor day…Just because it’s a day people are encouraged to skip work. I don’t on that day, but I like the idea of being able to.’
For Teagen:
1.…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @anne_the_noob14 @kayla-skywriter @beth20 @naiya-dyani @writergirl101 @candide @mayajoelle
I’m going to do it for both Enan and Thane, if that’s okay (*checks with person who started thread*). She says it’s fine.😉
1. How do you do your hair?
Enan: Long-ish, in the style of Northwain (a little bit like a…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
For Lawrence:
1. ‘It is rational. Bigger, not upstanding looking guys…’
2. ‘Just lay on my bed and think.’
3. ‘Oooh. It’s a dark brown now… Red might be cool… But only for a little bit, my
professors, my mother might kill me.’For Teagen:
<p style=”text-align: left;”>1. ‘Hah! Okay, spiders. Literally. I freeze up and can’t think…[Read more] -
Kayla Skywriter replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @arindown @anne_the_noob14Â @beth20 @naiya-dyani @writergirl101 @candide @mayajoelle
Okay, answering as Rhoda
1. The biggest lie I tell myself is that I don’t belong anywhere.
2. My favorite quote is: Facts are stubborn things; and whatever may be our wishes, our inclinations, or the dictates of our passions, they…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria 😉 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
It’s really good! It makes me want to just keep reading and reading…
There were a few typos but still really good. (:
Then I have a question. When Tim came down the stairs, Throden was so calm after the realization that a child, from a(the) prophecy, from another world, had just appeared? Why? Then again, you might elaborate more over…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years ago
@eitan @beth20
<p style=”text-align: center;”>~a time to be born, and a time to die; a time to plant, and a time to pluck up that which is planted~</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>II</p>
Joab ben Elizer, of the tribe of Judah owned a large, one roomed home with a wide guests’ courtyard in Bethlehem. It was a small, though not unimportant t…[Read more] -
Gracie replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
For Lawrence:
1. ‘Um, with my sister. We’re uh, strained.’
2. ‘Games on my phone. I need to stop.’
3. ‘Microbiology.’
For Teagen:
1. He doesn’t really know any of them. Except Tryna, maybe. But not even her anymore. He knows of some of them however. He had nine siblings the last time he came in contact with someone in his ‘family’. If you…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
So do you think a search for a kitchen might happen? Or a search for escape?
(too bad Emory disappeared. She saw one didn’t she?)
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
For Lawrence:
1. Uh, *large swallow* I’d freak out, and might walk off a bridge.
2. Hunched over, trying to decipher lecture notes, or reading my textbooks.
3. No. And I don’t plan to.
For Teagen:
1. He’d be stunned. Might curse, and threaten the one who told him such, then storm off. He’d think about his life while powerwalking in circles,…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years ago
I think this is the one you already read. *embarrassed look* I haven’t edited yet. Sorry.
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Dakota replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years ago
It’s okay! 🙂 LOL
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Maya Joelle posted a new activity comment 6 years ago
@beth20 That’s strange! I got a notification for this one.
My favorite NDW is also the Ashtown Burials (Empire of Bones mainly). Have you seen that he’s printing the fourth one as a newspaper?
My favorite Sutcliff is Knight’s Fee and I haven’t read ’em all either. -
Maya Joelle posted a new activity comment 6 years ago
Hey @beth20 (: I don’t think I got a notification for this? But I happened to see it somehow. And I’m not sure how everything works on here yet.
But yes, I love both of those authors! What are your favorite books by each?
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@mayajoelle
That’s odd. If I tagged you it should have notified
you …
Yeah, my favorite books by N.D. Wilson would be the Ashtown Burials! I love those!
And my fav for Rosemary Sutcliff (not sure if I’m spelling her name right..) would be, Outcast and The Lantern Bearers! I haven’t read all of her stuff though.
How about you?
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Arindown replied to the topic The Carnivorous Duck in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
@beth20 Dearest Niece, I’m so sorry!😝 Don’t worry, I won’t forget you again.
@writergirl101 Thanks.😊 Yes, he tasted good. I think I was wickedly pleased.😉
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