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It’s really good! It makes me want to just keep reading and reading…

There were a few typos but still really good. (:

Then I have a question. When Tim came down the stairs, Throden was so calm after the realization that a child, from a(the) prophecy, from another world, had just appeared? Why? Then again, you might elaborate more over the meal…which is fine and one reason why someone like me might want to keep reading. 🙂

And another,.. What stories, or what have they (Jared, Karan) been told to where they believe that there’s another world so easily? Or do they just trust their dad that much? I mean, if my dad told me that he’d come from another world, I’d first think he was joking, then, on finding he was serious truly think it was a possibility. (He’s a really logical, satire humor type guy.) Just wondering. (:

It was really good. I can’t wait to read what happens next!