@beth20
Active 1 year, 7 months ago-
Beth replied to the topic Character Name Discussion in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 5 months ago
Good topic! I don’t have any characters I need naming but if I do I’ll let you know!
-
Beth replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 5 months ago
Hey!
I really liked it! I liked how you choose Latin to be the ‘secret’ language!
Just a few things I noticed, mostly like the first chapter.
I stuffed that in my bag and took of running. You obviously meant off lol!
5.23, 5.22. I wished the timer would shut off, but I knew it would be the only thing that would help me survive. I took off…[Read more]
-
Beth replied to the topic Trying to decide in the forum Writers of Children's/Middle Grade Books 6 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, I’m personally not bothered by swearing so I don’t really care if it’s in a book I read. But yes if that’s the standard and all then I shouldn’t put in there! 🙂
Thanks, everybody for your opinions!
-
Beth replied to the topic Beta readers for magical breakout room story? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
Oh okay! Do you have any idea when it wil be back up?
-
Beth replied to the topic Beta readers for magical breakout room story? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
Hey,
So both of my sisters have tried joining and the confirmation email was never sent to them. They were going to email you about it, but they need your email address. Could you please tell it to me?
-
Beth replied to the topic Younger sisters stories! in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Okay, I’m reading it right now!
-
Beth replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Aww, your dog’s cute! We have an English Mastiff! And my older sister just got a German shepherd-lab!
Yeah, I sometimes do that too! (the baby name book 😉
-
Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Yes! I love him! Totally how I pictured him!
-
Beth replied to the topic Younger sisters stories! in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Thanks, guys! I’d love to hear your story sometime @melodyjoy and @katja-r
-
Beth replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Yeah I kinda feel that too!
-
Beth Darlene changed their profile picture 6 years, 6 months ago
-
Beth Darlene changed their profile picture 6 years, 6 months ago
-
Beth replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Aww love your animals!
Do you guys spend forever looking through thousands of lists and name generators and websites when it comes to picking names for the characters in your story?
I normally don’t. I did for the last story I wrote but nor normally. Sometimes I just like flip through some songs on my MP3 and pick a name depending…[Read more]
-
Beth Darlene's profile was updated 6 years, 6 months ago
-
Beth replied to the topic The Four Rebels in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Your welcome!
-
Beth replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years, 6 months ago
Question: Would you rather have an intelligent partner or a good-looking partner? Â
Jaylin: “Well I already have an intelligent and good looking partner!” *winks at Marrill*
Marrill: “I would rather have an intelligent partner.” *mutters* “Then I wouldn’t have to look at Jaylin’s ugly face!” *shoots Jaylin a teasing look*
Tim: *clears throat a…[Read more]
-
Beth Darlene posted an update 6 years, 6 months ago
@lilouwrites
Hey! Welcome to SE! -
Beth replied to the topic Hey!! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Oh cool! I read it really liked it! Posted a comment.
-
Beth Darlene posted a new activity comment 6 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, weird! You should read @katja-r story! It’s really good! She posted it in the Fantasy Group!
-
Beth replied to the topic The Four Rebels in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
I really liked it! Especially love how the first sentence is dramatic and gets you hooked! Good job! I really liked paragraph four, beautifully written!
I have just a few critiques.
You said,
I reached the building and headed to the back door. Then, shakily reaching out my hand I punched in the code to the door.
You said the word, door, two…[Read more]
- Load More
