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Hey!

I really liked it! I liked how you choose Latin to be the ‘secret’ language!

Just a few things I noticed, mostly like the first chapter.

I stuffed that in my bag and took of running. You obviously meant off lol!

5.23, 5.22. I wished the timer would shut off, but I knew it would be the only thing that would help me survive. I took off running, silently listening to the timer and carefully staying hidden in the shadows.

And then you said she took off running twice!

I was almost to the birch tree when the explosion nearly pushed me to my knees. I stumbled but kept running. It would be worst in a second if I wasn’t past the tree. With a sickening thought I realized it was seconds. My breath quickened. 0.03, 0.02, 0.01, 0.00. Then a thundering explosion sounded and threw me to the ground.

Just a little confusing that an explosion happened twice! haha

Those were the only things I caught! Good job!

-Beth

P.S. Did you ever find my story? lol