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  • #111202
    Beth Darlene
    @beth20

    Hey everybody!

    My younger sister wants me to let her post something. So here she is! haha

     

    My name is Abbie, I am 8 years old. And I want to show you my stories, they are about animals. One is in medieval times. It is about two brothers. I’ll post that one later.

    Hope you like them tell me what you think!

    The Cat and the Mouse. 

    There once was a cat, she loved mice so she would eat them for dessert.

    The cat saw the mouse, “I’m the best,” said the mouse.

    “Oh really? I’m the best because I can catch little mice like you!”

    “Well, we have to see about that!” the mouse said.

    The cat said, “Go on the floor, and I will count when you run.”

    So the mouse went on the floor, but before the Cat said anything, the cat pounced on the mouse.

    That’s why you do not trust cats!

     

    The Old Hedgehog 

    Once upon a time, there lived a hedgehog.

    She lived in a tine hole, she was friends with Peter Rabbit. She loved to pick flowers, so she did so every morning!

    She was old but nice, she was tidy, and she died so.

    She was a friend and a legend. Everybody liked her.

    You used to be able to walk up a hill, and there was a door. But there is no living thing anymore, there is no hedgehog, nothing but an empty room.

     

    The Lost Kitten 

    Peter Rabbit was walking, he heard something in the grass. Peter looked in the grass, in the grass was a kitten. Peter ran back home and got his mother.

    Perter’s mother grabbed the kitten and got home. When the kitten was old enough to walk, he thought he was a rabbit. Unfortunately, he was not a rabbit but was simply a kitten. But e jumped like one and he acted like one, so he was part the fam!

    Jominkreesa! For the weirdos who know what it means! 😉 I love you guys!

    #111221
    Kristianne
    @kristianne-hassman

    Aww, sweet! I like the animal theme going on here. That’s great that you’re writing so young, Abbie! Keep it up! 😉

    Courage, dear heart.

    #111228
    Livi Ryddle
    @anne_the_noob14

    @beth20

    That’s wonderful, Abbie! I like stories about animals 🙂 I have a story about an owl that I’m writing. When I’m finished, I’ll have to send it to Beth so she can let you read it!

    “Enough! Be quiet! I can’t hear myself think! I can’t hear my teeth chatter!"

    #111244
    Beth Darlene
    @beth20

    @kristianne-hassman and @anne_the_noob14

    Thanks guys for responding! I’ll make sure to let her know you responded!

    Jominkreesa! For the weirdos who know what it means! 😉 I love you guys!

    #111275
    Beth Darlene
    @beth20

    @kristianne-hassman and @anne_the_noob14

    She said thank you and she’d love to hear the owl story!

    Jominkreesa! For the weirdos who know what it means! 😉 I love you guys!

    #111863
    Katja R
    @katja-r

    @beth20

    Awww!! Tell your sister that she did a really good job! Her stories were so cute! 😀

    -Katja

    If you think you are too small to make a difference, try living with a mosquito.

    #111870
    Mel
    @melodyjoy

    @beth20

    Abbie, those stories are so great! When you are older, you are going to be a great writer. One of my stories that I’ve always wanted to write is from an animal’s perspective. I’m in the middle of a different story right now, but maybe if I end up writing it, I can post it on Story Embers and you can read it!

    Thanks for sharing these!

    -Melody

    Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

    #111893
    Beth Darlene
    @beth20

    Thanks, guys! I’d love to hear your story sometime @melodyjoy  and @katja-r

    Jominkreesa! For the weirdos who know what it means! 😉 I love you guys!

    #111896
    Katja R
    @katja-r

    @beth20

    I posted my second chapter of The Four Rebels. Look in the forum, I made a new topic named “The Four Rebels chapter 2”

    Let me know what you think!

    -Katja

    If you think you are too small to make a difference, try living with a mosquito.

    #111905
    Beth Darlene
    @beth20

    @Katja-r

    Okay, I’m reading it right now!

    Jominkreesa! For the weirdos who know what it means! 😉 I love you guys!

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