Kenzie Pimpo

@banana-peacock-warrior

Very nice! Very true! I love it a lot. 😀

LOL! Yeah, there is a bit of a pattern, but I love the HTTYD series too! *high-fives you*

Perfect, thank you, @banana-peacock-warrior! 😀

No, but we just bought the first book a few days ago and I plan on reading it soon! 😀

I think you’d totally rock it! 😀

Makes sense, thanks SO much, @kayla-skywriter! 😊

@banana-peacock-warrior

hey. When I go in there it says I need permission to access the doc. I requested permission. It says I will receive an email when my request is approved

@banana-peacock-warrior

Aww! it’s alright! I’ll definitely read it and post my critiques

@banana-peacock-warrior

Hey, I’d love to help, but I’ve never critiqued anything before. So I’m just going to read it, and if I see anything that sticks out to me I’ll make a comment. Okay?

@banana-peacock-warrior, hola!

I actually really like this question… because it brings into play an interesting dynamic that I don’t get to experience often. So… keep in mind that I come in from a different place with different circumstances, but hope my thoughts offer some help.

I get that we don’t want to hurt people’s writing. That’s key.…[Read more]

@banana-peacock-warrior

While I haven’t ever been in this situation myself (I tend to stick to critiquing genres I enjoy myself, because it is easier), but I can see two ways to handle this.

#1, like you mentioned, is to let her know that you’re not the best person to critique it because it’s not a genre or a style you’re familiar with/you…[Read more]

@dakota

Abner: *looks over at Megyn and his face brightens* *smiles* (whispers back) thank you. . . it’s okay

Would you rather die slowly of an incurable disease or be ripped apart by a savage beast?

Abner: *stares blankly for a moment* (in a strange hollow voice) I’d really rather not talk about death.

Adair: Just go ahead and say you’d…[Read more]

@banana-peacock-warrior

*Stares in open-mouthed shock* I CAN’T BELIEVE I didn’t see this till now!

I’ll definitely read it for you. What kind of critiquing are you looking for and where should I post my critiques?

Would your character rather be the oldest or youngest sibling?

Abner: *sets his jaw* oldest. . . I-*voice chokes off* I want to be the oldest again. *tears fill his eyes*

Adair: I-I *bites her lip* I don’t care!! I like being- I mean I LIKED being-UGH I don’t care, *bursts into tears* *covers her face with her hands*

Abner: Adair- Adair are you…[Read more]

@banana-peacock-warrior

It’s ok! I;m just glad you found time to get on! i glad you no care!

Abner: *shakes your hand and smiles* Nice to meet you too. Yeah. I know Judah and Hector. Judah’s a great guy. *Looks nervously at Adair*

Adair: *stands right where she is and looks at your hand without shaking it* Hi. Yes I know them and I wish I…[Read more]

@banana-peacock-warrior Yeah I’d bet it was! Sounds like a real adventure!

Would you rather your beloved die or yourself for them?

Francis: Um. I-I couldn’t just let them die! I-I’ll die for them.

Phoenix: I can’t- I couldn’t bear dying! I don’t know!!

Skye: I don’t have a beloved.

Judah: Die for them.

Hector: *nods in agreement with Judah*

@kari-karast  @w-o-holmes @sam-m  @kayla-skywriter @abigail-rebekah  @dakota…[Read more]

@banana-peacock-warrior sounds cool. You know I’m not a guy, but I think Kayla’s idea was a very good one.

Hello, @azeline-d. I am new here and write poetry as a starter. So I will firstly be critiquing and complimenting your work. (Not like I’m not, ’cause I’m on here.)

On the whole, your first poem was very well done and I definitely liked it. One note though would be your last three lines; to some people, they may seem somewhat difficult to read -…[Read more]

@eden-anderson Yep! Without him much of what I have would not be known.

Hahaha I guess so. 😉

I haven’t! I haven’t even gone as far to drawing anything of that sort – even if it was super small. I guess I’ve always just kept who’s-who in my head or scratched down somewhere in some notes. *shrugs*

@banana-peacock-warrior Wow, that’s crazy!

@banana-peacock-warrior WOW! You found more emojis than I did! *whispers* is it ok with you if I add another new character to this mix?

@banana-peacock-warrior 🙂 Thanks!

@banana-peacock-warrior

So cool! WoW! You go girl! 😯

@banana-peacock-warrior Awesome topic bro 😎

LOVE IT