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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 9 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
Merry Christmas!!
My Christmas Prayer
All the lights are hung, twinkling
Like a million stars glittering all over the walls
By the window the tree is shining
Crowned with a…[Read more] -
Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 9 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
Oh, wow! I keep forgetting about this. I am a bad thread-up-keeper . . . if there is such a word. . .
Anyway, this week’s is rather short. Just something I started singing to…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
This one is another very personal one to me. As always, critique and enjoy!!
Rest in Him
I know where there is a hushed abode
If in my life the longings are heavy load
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Here’s this week’s.
Along the lanes and the country road
Through these rugged hills the landscape comes alive
Such vivid hues of scarlet and wineBlown on the wind of a stormy…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Another more personal peom, but I hope that you all enjoy it! 🙂
Thank You for Forgiving Me
Once my life was wasted with lust, aslant in a downward slide
Once I lived like a…[Read more] -
Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Oh, dear! Sorry I forgot about this!
This week’s is one that I wrote more recently. It’s a little more personal to me than most of the other poems I have written.
As usual,…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Here is another revision of one of my older poem/songs. Enjoy and critque! A
And if you have written any poetry you’d like to share, please feel free to post it here. 🙂
My…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
@andrew Thank you very much! I liked those lines too.
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
This week I have another revision of an older song. Enjoy and critique!
Bloom (Where you are)
Flower, you’re crowned with a jewel-like bud
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Okay, so I know some of you (uhem, @parker) have encouraged me to publish my poems as a book. I have really appreciated the encouragement and critique you all have given…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
Sorry I’m a little behind! This week’s is a revison of one I wrote some time ago. As always, I hope you enjoy, and please…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
Two poems this week!
This one is another ‘spontaneous inspiration’ one. As always, enjoy, critique and, if you want to, post…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@andrew Okay, just thought I’d ask. It’s okay. 🙂
@naiya-dyani Yeah, it is!! Thanks for pointing that out.
@eitan You’re welcome.
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@andrew Thank you! 🙂 Have you written any more poems lately?
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This one took me months to write, but I finally finished it. Critique and enjoy!!
Watchmen (Sound it Loud)
Watchman,…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Chloe and Zoe in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
Oh. My. Gosh.
This…
This…
Was not what I expected and so much more. Andrew, this is awesome! The ending… wow. Just wow. You absolutely killed ‘the prophecy’ trope. I don’t even like stories with unhappy endings, and this was amazing. Good job. Fabulously good job.
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
Hope you all are doing well. As always, critique and enjoy! 🙂
Torchlighters
Go! the torch must be carried on
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This one was also one was kinda spontaneous, but I still have simiular feelins at the time I wrote it. Feel free to comment,…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@andrew Thank you so much!
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
YIKES!! Sorry guys, I forgot to post this past week.
This one came from a sorta random inspiration. I was sitting, thinking…[Read more]
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