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CarolineTheWriter replied to the topic Critique on my first chapter of my newest project, Crystal Thieves? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
@writergirl101 (me hoping this tag thing works)
Thanks so much, Ella! I’ll turn on suggestions on the file for you- here is an updated link, but you should be able to just refresh the original one as well https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CLGkxJoN4xpEgEAIID49i2UcKjIgBQRFy6gojpNcfQg/edit?usp=sharing
I’m so glad you liked it!
1. Ah, yeah, I…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
Okayyy…maybe there could be like a universal council, and each “world” gets like a certain amount of representatives (sorta like states in the US), so the warriors have to battle to see which kingdoms in each world get to send representatives?
If we used that idea, then the villain could be bigger…the take-over-the-universe…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
Hey Ella. Sign me up. This sounds fun!
Just an idea…but we could do like a warrior competition (in like an arena or something) between kingdoms, and the winners would get special privileges (Hunger Games-ish idea. I’ve never actually read the books, or watched the movie, but…😊). We could make it so that you just have to defeat…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@kayla-skywriter @anne_the_noob14 @writergirl101 @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @kimlikesart@
For Enan:
1. Do you have good teeth?
Probably. Their society is generally healthier than nowadays.😉
2. Are you an average person in your society?/ Do people you’re in contact with think you’re average for your place of residence?
Not in his mind. He is…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@writergirl101
I like these questions lol!!Mmm answering for Ethan…my villain lol!!
- Ethan’s greatest role model would be, Aclabar!
- He would go to the future. Not very far, just far enough to see if him and Aclabar would win the war against the Ninjas!
- No one. Aclabar would only be annoyed that he would have to get a new general. But…
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@arindown @writergirl101 @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter (Sorry if I missed someone)
For Lawrence:
1. ‘Leeuwenhoek, for he opened the door to my profession.’
2. ‘Oooh. The past would be so amazing! All the people I could meet! Then again, if I lived in the past, focusing on all my idols, how would I ever become an idol…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@kayla-skywriter @writergirl101 @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @kimlikesart @beth20
@anne_the_noob14 Good questions.
@naiya-dyani Ikr? Every time I do this, I want to do it for Enan…but I should be doing characters from my WIP.😉
For Amerlee:
1) What book would they read over and over again?
She probably reads a lot of historical b…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@arindown @writergirl101 @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @kimlikesart @kayla-skywriter
1. Oh goodness. . . Kiet is just such a good kid. XD Probably one of his best qualities is his determination to not let his painful past make him bitter or angry. He’s working to become a healer largely for that reason–he wants to heal rather than hurt, and he…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@arindown @writergirl101 @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter
1. Cold, generally. But he can deal with hot, though he might complain.
Future, the cold. He still can deal with hot, and might complain.
2. Riches? Yes, he’d love to be rich.
In the future? Riches aren’t the main focus of his life. Helping free his people from…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@kayla-skywriter Welcome. Don’t worry about the questions. I feel like the good ones should be repeated, so everyone gets a shot at them.😄
@anne_the_noob14 *waves at you and Dharin*
@writergirl101 @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @kimlikesart @beth20
This is for Enan:
1. Can you sing?
Yes, he can sing. His mother is actually a singer and his…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@writergirl101 @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @kimlikesart @anne_the_noob14 @beth20
(I’m just copying Gracie’s tag list and replacing my tag with hers :P)
1. A small, round stone cottage with a thatch roof; lives there with Enna Sora (a healer and basically his adoptive mom) and Tai (essentially his brother at this point).
2. Soup. . . lots of…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@writergirl101 @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @anne_the_noob14 @beth20
(Okay, yeah, tagging is a bit hard now.)
1. No, currently it would cause a complete blow-up, whether cursing or fists depending on what the stress is about. His mind will stall, and he might stutter or ramble.
In the future he will be nervous, but he will be in…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@writergirl101 @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @anne_the_noob14
For Teagen:
1. Becoming like his mother, or worse, becoming his father.
2. It depends what it was. If it was a pencil in grade school he wouldn’t have cared much about the pencil, but he would have wanted to fight. He likely would have bloodied up a boy’s nose and got…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@writergirl101 @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani
For Thane:
1. He looks early-thirties, but he’s actually in his sixties.
2. Terrible hygiene, probably. He’s not worried about being clean.
3. I did it this morning and he got ISTP-T. Not sure if it totally fits though…😄
New Questions:
1) Do you have a sweet tooth or like spicy f…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@arindown @writergirl101 @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani
For Teagen:
1. Neither. Reading takes to much thought, and TV takes to little. He wants to always be moving, always doing something; anything but nothing!
2. Both or either. Though he doesn’t like the sassiness of felines, so he might be more partial to dogs…
3. Type? Like…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@arindown @writergirl101 @kimlikesart @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
1. When was the last time you cried?
Probably the last time he had a PTSD panic attack. . .
2. Why did you cry?/What makes you cry?
Well, the cause is pretty self-explanatory, so I’ll go with the second. 😉 Usually terrifying memories are the cause–tears typically come most at…[Read more]
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Elven replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years ago
Wow, that sounds so cool! I read your synopsis and I can’t wait to read more! You left me wanting to know what happens!! Please do tag me when you put out the first chapter!
My book is a fantasy/mystery sort of thing about a girl named Daris in a world where people are half-bird half-human. (I really have to write a synopsis!) I h…[Read more]
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imwritehere1920 replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years ago
It’s about these young boys who compete against each other to become the stand-in for a missing prince (kinda against their will. It does get a bit intense as the series progresses, if you like that kind of stuff. I love the author’s foreshadowing).
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
For Teagen: (So far I’ve been doing his personality and who he is right now. Now I’m going to work on who he is halfway to where he’ll end up as well.)
1. Two answers. When growing up, his mother and siblings contributed to downward growth in the extreme. Though it was his choice to become what he is.
A man he at…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
For Enan:
1) He’s like his author (me) in many ways. He’s kinda stubborn, competitive, observant, assertive, and always striving to be a leader, and to honour the Master.
Btw, I’m a INFP.😄 And Enan is a ISTP-A.
2) Enan’s story starts with him as stubborn, proud, reckless, and a kid…at the end, he’s a man who…[Read more]
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