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				<title>Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 06 Sep 2023 19:54:06 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>Brian Stansell replied to the topic Audio Cinema in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 02 Mar 2022 01:39:11 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>Grace Benham replied to the topic Some MBTI and Enneagram types in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 10 Feb 2022 22:07:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a> that was great! Thank you so much!!</p>
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				<title>Brian Stansell replied to the topic Shakespeare, Anyone? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/99384/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 08 Feb 2022 20:24:28 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A very good observation, Bethany <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a>.</p>
<p>There are many biblical allusions made in Shakespeare&#8217;s works.  I believe this one in the quote references:</p>
<p>What is the price of two sparrows&#8211;one copper coin? But not a single sparrow can fall to the ground without your Father knowing it. And the very hairs on your head are all numbered. So don&#8217;t&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-99384"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/99384/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Shakespeare, Anyone? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 05 Feb 2022 21:18:34 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I really love this one, from the end of Julius Caesar:</p>
<p>His life was gentle, and the elements<br />
So mixed in him that Nature might stand up<br />
80And say to all the world, “This was a man.”</p>
<p>Why? partly because it&#8217;s a praise of Brutus, whom I liked, but mostly because I think it a very high compliment; not that he was ric&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-99327"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/99327/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brian Stansell replied to the topic Shakespeare, Anyone? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/99317/</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 05 Feb 2022 00:41:06 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Emily and Bethany,</p>
<p>What is your favorite Shakespeare quote and from what play?</p>
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				<title>Lavender Bleu replied to the topic Introductions in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 03 Feb 2022 14:04:37 -0400</pubDate>

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<blockquote><p>*starts laughing, only for it turn into sobs at the impossibility of ever reading the Goodreads TBR that I’ve been growing for six years*</p></blockquote>
<p>It&#8217;s like a race against time.</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a></p>
<blockquote><p>Hi there! I’m Bethany, and I am also a mythology and language fan, though I’m really only familiar with Greek/Roman mythology (since they’re pretty&hellip;</p></blockquote>
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				<title>Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Shakespeare, Anyone? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/99128/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 28 Jan 2022 17:58:06 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a> thanks for stopping in!</p>
<p>Oh, good! Another <em>Hamlet</em> lover! Do you have anything specific you can pinpoint as a reason why you like it so much? I would say for me it&#8217;s the man Hamlet (he&#8217;s such a great guy!) as well as the marvelous writing and compelling story-line.</p>
<p>Yes, the Lawrence Olivier version is good, though very much&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-99128"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/99128/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Rose replied to the topic Character Playlists in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 15 Dec 2021 09:55:53 -0400</pubDate>

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<blockquote><p>Man, it’s hard to pick favorites! I relate to “Oh, Sleeper” a lot (they actually wrote it as the Enneagram 9 song; although I’m a 5, I relate to some 9 things). “Blue Eyed Girl” is so sweet, as well as “The Ballad of Donnie Gene”, and “Hey Runner!” and “Fall: War” are really fun and catchy!</p></blockquote>
<p>Ooh, that&#8217;s awesome! I found Blue E&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-97795"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/97795/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Rose replied to the topic Character Playlists in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 12 Dec 2021 18:16:54 -0400</pubDate>

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<blockquote><p>Rose (rose-colored-fancy I named her after you hope that’s ok)</p></blockquote>
<p>Was that intentional or more like &#8220;Oh, they have the same name, oops XD&#8221;? Because that&#8217;s happened to me XD</p>
<p>Either way, that&#8217;s really cool! 🙂</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/noah-cochran/' rel="nofollow ugc">@noah-cochran</a></p>
<blockquote><p>*resists the urge to ask you for tips on making amazing villans*</p>
<p>But I shall return to this topic later. Be w&hellip;</p></blockquote>
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				<title>Erynne started the topic Creating relationship between reader and villain in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 12 Dec 2021 02:55:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m trying to develop my villain but I want that &#8220;love to hate&#8221; relationship between my reader and villain. So to help me out can you tell me who some of your favorite villains are and <em>why </em>you love to hate them? (Or just love them. Or just hate them. &#x1f44d;)</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t care if it&#8217;s movie, tv show, book or w&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-97619"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/97619/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace Benham replied to the topic Character Playlists in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 11 Dec 2021 04:38:15 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Yay I’m glad to find another person who likes that music!</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a> I’ll try to listen to yours too!  You could put your story playlist here as well!</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/emily-waldorf/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emily-waldorf</a> those are from The Hobbit right??? Heeeheeee</p>
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				<title>Erynne replied to the topic What are you looking forward to most? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 22 Nov 2021 03:13:03 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Those are all so amazing! I would lobe to experience that as well. I&#8217;m really enjoying what everyone has to say!</p>
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				<title>Erynne started the topic What are you looking forward to most? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 21 Nov 2021 16:01:24 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Finishing written work is an exciting thing. One wise person once said</p>
<p>&#8220;There&#8217;s nothing like holding your book in your hands and just be like THIS IS MINE I DID THIS&#8221;</p>
<p>or something like that.</p>
<p>Anyways, this is just a place for you to share what you&#8217;re most excited for once you are a published and known author. (Because if you truly work for that&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-96490"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/96490/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Rose replied to the topic Will you have me back? Pretty Please? in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 20 Nov 2021 17:43:06 -0400</pubDate>

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<blockquote><p>A marriage to the Duke of Saxony would create a valuable alliance, but if you Flemish want to make peace with the French, a marriage with the Count of Champagne would be an auspicious decision.</p>
<p>I feel like I might be in the wrong time period…</p></blockquote>
<p>Now, that is a very valid point. I <em>might</em> consider the Count of Champagne and the Duke of&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-96436"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/96436/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Cathy replied to the topic I&#039;VE STARTED A NEWSLETTER! PROBABLY!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 20 Nov 2021 01:34:34 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/rose-colored-fancy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rose-colored-fancy</a><br />
YAY THANKS FOR ALL THE SUPPORT!!!!!!</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a></p>
<p>*bowls over with a hug*  Heeeey, how&#8217;s going?</p>
<p>Duly noted and poohy must research that aspect of marketing XD. Why does everyone assume it&#8217;s a book? *Also me; on a forum for writers who write books and read books to write books and give book advice&#8230;* heheh&#8230;it is a&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-96417"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/96417/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Authentic Poetry (not a poem) in the forum Poets</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 19 Nov 2021 15:35:49 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I loved that poem very much! It does need some polishing up, as all our work does, but it also resounded with me deeply. I have a fear of people not liking me, so I oftentimes don&#8217;t say what I want to say because I&#8217;m worried something will go wrong and I&#8217;ll spoil a friendship. I&#8217;m always telling myself &#8216;one day I&#8217;ll be bold, one&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-96395"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/96395/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Rose replied to the topic Will you have me back? Pretty Please? in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 19 Nov 2021 08:02:45 -0400</pubDate>

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<blockquote><p>I got pressured. It’s a word. It means my life was being threatened because of you.</p>
<p>I was on my phone at my grandma’s yesterday and my cousin/one of my best friends wanted to know what I was doing:</p></blockquote>
<p>Mood. It feels like my family is constantly trying to marry me off. XD</p>
<blockquote><p>I laughed at that so hard</p></blockquote>
<p>I try XD</p>
<blockquote><p>I would drive to Germany for che&hellip;</p></blockquote>
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				<title>Erynne replied to the topic Will you have me back? Pretty Please? in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 19 Nov 2021 02:09:28 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Oh yes! I do remember you. I may or may not have been searching for you recently because I wanted your opinion on something, but you changed your username so I thought you had disappeared or was kidnapped by aliens.</p>
<p>I love how everyone is just stalking our <em>private</em> conversation (lol jk) XD</p>
<p>Oh good I am thrilled to hear your not an&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-96368"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/96368/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Cathy started the topic I&#039;VE STARTED A NEWSLETTER! PROBABLY!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 19 Nov 2021 01:42:30 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HI GUYS!!!!<br />
After finally pulling out Ehud and Rosario from the Character Castle 2.0, my co-author <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/rusted-knight/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rusted-knight</a> and I agreed to start hosting a newsletter for anybody interested in seeing more of the characters and, well, their actual story…<br />
The newsletter will be featuring a Prohibition-era steampunk webtoon with two main characters on o&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-96363"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/96363/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Sir Leeds replied to the topic Authentic Poetry (not a poem) in the forum Poets</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 09 Nov 2021 12:41:41 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/anne-of-lothlorien/' rel="nofollow ugc">@anne-of-lothlorien</a> thanks for joining the conversation here! And I totally agree with you on a personal level because free verse has become my preferred poetry writing style for some of the same reasons as you shared. Free verse offers a lot of freedom of expression, and when it&#8217;s handled artfully, it can express a LOT in a very poetic way.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-95940"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/95940/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Sir Leeds replied to the topic Authentic Poetry (not a poem) in the forum Poets</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 02 Nov 2021 02:37:26 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/dakota/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dakota</a> and <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a> , again, thanks for continuing the conversation here.</p>
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<p>Dakota, I think you&#8217;re onto something there. By no means do we want to condone or encourage the kinds of dark things in our lives or the lives of our characters. But at the same time, what will the light be triumphant over if we glaze over the darkness or&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-95800"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/95800/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Sir Leeds replied to the topic Authentic Poetry (not a poem) in the forum Poets</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 30 Oct 2021 21:19:55 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a> , thanks for keeping this conversation going. I&#8217;d rather hear from an amateur (someone who does something for the love of it) than a professional any day of the week. One of my favorite contemporary poets is an amateur. So if you&#8217;ve got any insights, I&#8217;d love to hear them.</p>
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<p>I really enjoy the works of Billy Collins, T. S.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-95754"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/95754/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>imwritehere1920 replied to the topic Why Do You Love YA? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 28 Oct 2021 20:04:34 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I&#8217;ve read Fawkes by Nadine Brandes and really enjoyed it!</p>
<p>I also hope in person-fellowship works out at your church and you find that connection.  🙂</p>
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<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a></p>
<p>No, I won&#8217;t be able to do NaNoWriMo this year either. Actually, November can get a bit busy as we get ready for the holidays (in this case, getting/making Xmas gifts&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-95695"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/95695/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Bethania Gauterius replied to the topic Why Do You Love YA? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 25 Oct 2021 20:51:53 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t think I&#8217;ll be attempting NaNo to any degree this year. I&#8217;m just too busy. How about you?</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve only read the first False Prince book. I might read the other ones eventually, but from what I&#8217;ve gathered, I might not end up liking them very much. How do they compare to the first book? Have you read The Thief by Megan Whalen Turner? It&#8217;s&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-95645"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/95645/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>imwritehere1920 replied to the topic Why Do You Love YA? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 23 Oct 2021 20:10:32 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hey, sorry it took awhile to reply.</p>
<p>Your story idea sounds cool; are you going to do NaNoWriMo this year?</p>
<p>Oh, my family loves The False Prince!  We&#8217;re reading the fifth book in the series right now, and loving it.  How far along in the series have you gotten?</p>
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<p><em>&#8220;I also don’t like the idea that what makes adult fiction adult fic&hellip;</em><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-95634"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/95634/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Noah Cochran replied to the topic Fantasy Is NOT the Same Thing As Magic in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 17 Oct 2021 01:32:20 -0400</pubDate>

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<blockquote><p>I think we’ll have to agree to disagree on this point. I don’t believe it’s anti-biblical to portray a fact of the world, be it physical or spiritual, so long as it’s done with biblical truth in mind and with care not to mislead readers.</p></blockquote>
<p>There is a huge difference between portraying a fact (showing that it exists) and having a protago&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-95512"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/95512/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>imwritehere1920 replied to the topic Why Do You Love YA? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 15 Oct 2021 20:25:16 -0400</pubDate>

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<p><em>&#8220;Reading YA is just a draining experience for me at this point more than an edifying one, and though that’s not always a bad thing if you’re aware of it, I’ve needed to take more in recently so I’ve been gravitating toward non-fiction and classics, lol.&#8221;</em></p>
<p>Ah, what&#8217;s your favorite classic or nonfiction book so far?  Are you needing&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-95504"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/95504/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>imwritehere1920 replied to the topic Why Do You Love YA? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 15 Oct 2021 02:30:22 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Oh, there&#8217;s no good or bad answer!  Actually, I like it.</p>
<p>Yeah, I also don&#8217;t feel ready to tackle adult fiction yet.  But I do hope God brings the right story for you to write when you&#8217;re ready!  Also, that&#8217;s cool that you work in a library!  Do you volunteer, or are you employed?</p>
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				<title>Noah Cochran replied to the topic Fantasy Is NOT the Same Thing As Magic in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 09 Oct 2021 21:11:40 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>The Unwavering Writer replied to the topic Howdy, y&#039;all! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 03 Oct 2021 20:13:29 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I apologize for not responding sooner! I&#8217;m here now though; so I shall now respond. XD</p>
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<p>I see that I must discover what that is soon&#8230;LOL!</p>
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<p><em>Up </em>was a Pixar movie? I thought that was a Disney movie&#8230;LOL! I&#8217;ve watched <em>Up </em>as a kid, but haven&#8217;t seen it since. I&#8217;ve seen a bit of <em>Onward, </em>but it bothered be morally; so I stopped&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-95279"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/95279/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Ashley Tegart replied to the topic How Do You Organize Your Writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 29 Sep 2021 23:20:59 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I like to print out my drafts, if I can! I find that I notice different things when I read my draft digitally vs. on paper. I don&#8217;t color-coordinate my brainstorming notes, but I do color-coordinate the notes I make in my printed draft. I tend to lose my notes because I can&#8217;t remember where in the notebook (or even which notebook) I&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-95207"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/95207/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 19 Sep 2021 16:36:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have not done a fight scene in so long, so yayyy!! XD</p>
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<p>The creatures pretty much came out of nowhere.</p>
<p>Lorcan had been in a quiet, contemplative state while Liorah and Ferran spoke to the newcomers. All these different people. From different realms to his own. How long had he been here anyway? A few hours? A&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-95014"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/95014/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 19 Sep 2021 13:44:48 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>That&#8217;s cool! Best of success with your senior year, I&#8217;m sure you&#8217;ll do brilliantly! *Gives you a big hug*</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/mischievous-thwapling/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mischievous-thwapling</a></p>
<blockquote><p>*as soon as I’ve recovered from you hug, I knock you over with one of my own spine-crushing hugs* ROOOOOSE! I HAVE MISSED YOU!</p>
<p>Oooh, that’s so cool! Whoever she is, I love her already   If you do end u&hellip;</p></blockquote>
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				<title>Rose replied to the topic Learning by reading in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 13 Sep 2021 11:44:41 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sooo&#8230; I actually replied earlier but the internet gremlins devoured it again XD</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a></p>
<p>It was really cool to hear your opinions on those books! I actually haven&#8217;t read any of them, but I want to read Oliver Twist sometime!</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/arindown/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arindown</a></p>
<blockquote><p>I haven’t been reading too much lately, unless you count school textbooks. I’ve learned a ton from my&hellip;</p></blockquote>
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				<title>Brooke replied to the topic Learning by reading in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 11 Sep 2021 17:13:46 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/rose-colored-fancy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rose-colored-fancy</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/irishcelticredflowercrown/' rel="nofollow ugc">@irishcelticredflowercrown</a>  <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/noah-cochran/' rel="nofollow ugc">@noah-cochran</a>  <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a>  <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/arindown/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arindown</a></p>
<p>I totally agree with all of you! This was a great topic idea, Rose! I don&#8217;t think I&#8217;ve read any of these books y&#8217;all have mentioned (except LOTR), but I sure know which ones to avoid now! XD</p>
<p>I haven&#8217;t really done a whole lot of reading lately since life dec&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-94914"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94914/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Rose started the topic Learning by reading in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 09 Sep 2021 09:58:22 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey, y&#8217;all!</p>
<p>The discussion on &#8220;Does reading make you a better writer?&#8221; sparked this idea.</p>
<p>Which books have you (recently) read and what did you learn from them? It doesn&#8217;t have to be super in-depth, and you don&#8217;t even have to have enjoyed the book, but if it taught you something, I&#8217;d love to hear about it!</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll go first and list a couple off&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-94889"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94889/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 02 Sep 2021 09:12:37 -0400</pubDate>

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<blockquote><p>oooh sounds good!  I just wanted to clarify: Liorah would absolutely know if a Rift had been opened… *flashback to the Shrike’s dramatic entry*</p></blockquote>
<p>LOL, sorry, misunderstanding on my side! So, a Rift is only opened when they actually switch dimensions, not when they only pass through. Got it!</p>
<blockquote><p>Also, as soon as everyone’s settled I might&hellip;</p></blockquote>
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				<title>Rose replied to the topic The trouble with titles in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 31 Aug 2021 07:49:02 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Sorry for the late reply!</p>
<p>First of all, I really like your titles! They&#8217;re really cool!</p>
<blockquote><p>Find that short key concept for a unifier and that may help.</p></blockquote>
<p>That&#8217;s a good idea, and I&#8217;ll definitely consider it! Though, I do notice it gets used more for series longer than three books. Trilogies usually have independent titles&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-94758"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94758/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Cathy replied to the topic The trouble with titles in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 31 Aug 2021 01:04:58 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>*skids in*<br />
Oh I do like those last few titles, I didn’t think you needed to change the title until I saw those, verrry nice!<br />
I see everybody’s already noted the symbolic and plot-relevant angle for titles but another thing you might consider is looking up on Amazon your niche genre and get as niche-y and niche-y can be and look at the pattern for&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-94756"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94756/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 27 Aug 2021 17:27:13 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay! Here you go:</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/this-is-not-an-alien/' rel="nofollow ugc">@this-is-not-an-alien</a> ‘s characters are Ehud and Rosario. They’re currently off on a little surrealistic adventure of their own.</p>
<p>Ehud: Male, 16. Blond, blue eyes. Hyper and easily excited. He’s wearing a blue hoodie. He&#8217;s the most adorable precious character and I just want to give him hugs and cupcakes.</p>
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				<title>calidris replied to the topic Hey guys! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94689/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 27 Aug 2021 13:49:28 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&lt;p style=&#8221;text-align: left;&#8221;&gt;<a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a> nice!  I&#8217;ve been trying to draw from reference, but it never really works out that well.  I don&#8217;t think I&#8217;m good at realism, but I suppose I won&#8217;t know if I don&#8217;t practice lol&lt;/p&gt;<br />
<a href='https://storyembers.org/members/rose-colored-fancy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rose-colored-fancy</a> I&#8217;ve been writing since I was a kid, but I haven&#8217;t done it in over half a year now.  I&#8217;m excited to get ba&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-94689"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94689/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Rose replied to the topic The trouble with titles in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 26 Aug 2021 18:58:51 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a></p>
<blockquote><p>Yes, I’m not terribly fond of the initial ones either. Every YA fantasy book these days is named “The BLANK of BLANK and BLANK” with the same words being used over and over again. They all sound the same and confuse me. And they also don’t tend to make a lot of sense.</p></blockquote>
<p>LOL, yes! I actually used to like it but it&#8217;s an absolute pain to&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-94669"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94669/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Rose started the topic The trouble with titles in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 26 Aug 2021 15:39:39 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi everyone!</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve been <del>overthinking</del> rethinking the titles of my series. As most of y&#8217;all know, the series in question is a fantasy trilogy in a desert setting.</p>
<p>With that for context, onward to the titles.</p>
<p>The initial idea was:</p>
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<li>The Tribe of Sand and Azure</li>
<li>The Assassins of Mountains and Moonlight</li>
<li>The Crowns of Blood and Thunder</li>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Say and Think (a poem) in the forum Poets</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94641/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 25 Aug 2021 17:18:43 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a> I like this! It&#8217;s raw and honest. I don&#8217;t think I would change anything in it. Keep writing! 🙂</p>
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				<title>calidris replied to the topic Hey guys! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94603/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 22 Aug 2021 02:04:45 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a> here&#8217;s some fanart I did recently of Manwë from the Silmarillion 🙂</p>
<p><img loading="lazy" src="https://storyembers.org/wp-content/uploads/hm_bbpui/137124/i6usx42h96gl5ejejad4qn6chws8j796.jpg" alt="" /></p>
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				<title>calidris replied to the topic Hey guys! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 22 Aug 2021 01:57:26 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a> I love barn owls!  I think I saw a barn owl once in Seattle, but I was very young, so I usually don&#8217;t count it lol.  I&#8217;ve watched videos of them screaming, but I haven&#8217;t heard it in real life.  It&#8217;s amazing how such an awful sound could come from such a cute bird!  We very, very rarely get burriwing owls in our genetal area, but the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-94601"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94601/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>calidris replied to the topic Hey guys! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94591/</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 21 Aug 2021 02:59:04 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a>  hummingbirds are so cool!  I think that owls are my favorite.  So far I&#8217;ve seen great horned owls, northern pygmy owls, short eared owls, and a barred owl.  I would love to see all of the owl species in my area someday, but they&#8217;re so hard to find lol.  I also really love California condors and turkey vultures (which we also have&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-94591"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94591/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Noah Cochran started the topic Apt Words for Writing Descriptions in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 20 Aug 2021 01:34:20 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alrighty, I&#8217;m want y&#8217;all to help me extended my writing lexicon by supplying me with more apt, concise words that you use to describe things, particularly when it comes to writing descriptions of stone, wood, and cloth objects, such as: jewelry, trinkets, furniture, carvings, cutlery, medieval transportation vehicles, clothing, and any opulent&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-94572"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94572/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Noah Cochran started the topic Writing Paces and Schedules in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 09 Aug 2021 14:41:15 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay y&#8217;all, I&#8217;m curious about a couple things. First off, for those of you who aren&#8217;t total beginners (you&#8217;ve been writing consistently and with a purpose for a few months or more), approximately how many words do you writer per hour ? Or at least try to write per hour, I know it can vary greatly, and writers get faster and faster the more the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-94412"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94412/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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