SleepwalkingMK

@sleepwalkingmk What you said about diverging from standard grammar was really neat! I find myself doing that more and more nowadays. I took AP Language and Composition last year and learned a bunch of new literary devices and it’s fun to try and turn them on their head. 🙂

Now that I’m thinking about it I guess you could omit commas and use “an…[Read more]

@law0413 I like what you said about short and long sentences. They can jolt or calm a reader depending on how they are used.

I like using paragraph breaks to emphasize certain emotions. During an intense scene of reflection, I’ll have breaks to emphasize certain thoughts, even if the rules of grammar don’t call for one. In fact, using unnecessary…[Read more]

@jenwriter17  thanks. I’m so glad I was able to contribute. Thanks go to  @sleepwalkingmk  and  @supermonkey42 for their very helpful critiques! Our guild is the best. 😉

Hey guys! We have a new Avenser. 🙂 Please welcome @fawxofthecomics !

@toklaham-veruzia @overcomer  @martina  @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson @dekreel @bonnie @melissa-g @kiraelizabeth @aislinn-mollisong @dragongeek @haviloki @sleepwalkingmk @sam-kowal @law0413 @claire @christianna-hellwig @zanzibee @libby

You guys just keep blowing me away. 😀 Congrats <span style=”background-color: #f6d5d9;”>on </span>your win, Avensers!

@toklaham-veruzia @overcomer @martina @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson @dekreel @bonnie @melissa-g @kiraelizabeth @aislinn-mollisong @dragongeek @haviloki @sleepwalkingmk @sam-kowal @law041…[Read more]

@gabriellepollack  that’s good to know because I already made the edits  @sleepwalkingmk  and @supermonkey42  recommended(thanks guys). 🙂 We’ll see what happens, I guess, just please, anybody, feel free to keep making suggestions and comments for changes! 🙂  @jenwriter17  I understand. These things happen! 😉 Thanks anyhow.

Hey, my epic Avensers!

Sorry for my absence. I thought I would have time to check on you guys, but the conference I was at was insane (and I may or may not have forgotten my password at home. 😛 )

Anyway, I’m just here to remind you that the final guild submission is due tomorrow, so if you could edit it by then, I’ll take it to the judge around…[Read more]

@sleepwalkingmk thanks! I’m so glad.

I know right? Whence has  @toklaham-veruzia  disappeared off to? I was hoping… 🙂

@supermonkey42 haha, so sorry, I did not mean to guilt trip anyone. I just got a little worried that our guild was going nowhere with this contest. I completely understand the business. For me that’s going to start come A…[Read more]

@sleepwalkingmk  why thank you. See, I don’t know how it works here either. I’m a recent member. However, I don’t see why you can’t make comments, that would be wonderful! 🙂  I just wish my story weren’t the only option to consider. 😉

@jane-maree thanks.

Guys!  @toklaham-veruzia @overcomer @martina @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson @dekreel @bonnie @melissa-g @kiraelizabeth @aislinn-mollisong @dragongeek @haviloki @sleepwalkingmk @sam-kowal @law0413 @claire @zanzibee @libby @natalie-marie

I am the only one who has submitted anything…[Read more]

@toklaham-veruzia @overcomer @martina @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson @dekreel @bonnie @melissa-g @kiraelizabeth @aislinn-mollisong @dragongeek @haviloki @sleepwalkingmk @sam-kowal @law0413 @claire @christianna-hellwig @zanzibee @libby @natalie-marie

Summoning all Avengers (or whatever you call yourselves…[Read more]