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papergirlsfb started the topic Children's section in the library v.s. YA section in the forum 6 years, 11 months ago
Do you guys find that the YA books sometimes (mostly) have bad content in them, or is it just me? Even though I’m 14 and some people say that the Children’s section is to young for me, I find they usually have good content and better plot lines. Like, YA books just throw a swear word or an inappropriate scene to make it “better” and more age…[Read more]
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Help with Good, Grabbing Plotlines in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
I find it helpful to picture what I want, and what certain characters want, and how far they will go to get said Want. Like, for instance, I have a villain, a King, and I imagine him wanting his rule to continue on, but he doesn’t think his sons are ‘evil’ enough for him, so he makes a deal with another guy so the guy will become King after he…[Read more]
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Prayer Requests (no matter how small or large) in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
Thanks!
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papergirlsfb started the topic The Good, the Bad, and the Morally Delayed in the forum 6 years, 11 months ago
Following advice here, and posting my own ‘topic’.
Sorry about that, @pendragon ! I still don’t know my way around here yet.
As you might’ve guessed, my book title is called ‘The Good, the Bad, and the Morally Delayed’. I’m hoping to get it done by the next school…[Read more]
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Prayer Requests (no matter how small or large) in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
I have a surgery coming up soon, which takes time to heal from ( is 4-8 weeks a long recovery time?). Can anyone pray for me for that, please?
-Sylvie
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Prayer Requests (no matter how small or large) in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
Totally! I will write you in…. How old are you? Just wondering, not to be creepy or anything….
-Sylvie
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Our Annual Theme? in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
No idea…. I don’t even know what that is….
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Welcome to Apprentice Island! in the forum Announcements 6 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, I did, but I was kind of confused on how to use it…. is it just for one month, or what? Maybe we should move this conversation to another part of the guild, so as to not fill this one too much….?
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Welcome to Apprentice Island! in the forum Announcements 6 years, 11 months ago
Another person asked the same question before on page one or two… for everyone who has already answered, maybe read those pages…. some people are long-winded : )
-Sylvie
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Welcome to Apprentice Island! in the forum Announcements 6 years, 11 months ago
I wrote a trilogy when I was younger, but it wasn’t very well written. I had a good story line, but it was kind of… bleh. I’ve been working on this one book since September, using the One Year Adventure Novel curriculum, and I have multiple one or two chapter beginnings of books, and a few worlds and maps and characters written…[Read more]
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Written by an enemy in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
My friend told me to read the Lunar Chronicles in the YA section in the library, which I loved, and the author, Marissa Meyer, published a book about the villain/antagonist of the story, which I liked. It was about this girl who was second in line for the throne on the moon. She thought that she would make a better queen than her sister, and so…[Read more]
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Welcome to Apprentice Island! in the forum Announcements 6 years, 11 months ago
How old are you all, and how long have you all been writing for, and have you gotten anything published?
I’m in grade 9 (14), I’ve been writing for at least 5 years, although not very well, and so far I haven’t gotten anything published. I am hoping that by the end of grade 10 I will have published something, although my friends think that I am…[Read more]
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Welcome to Apprentice Island! in the forum Announcements 6 years, 11 months ago
Not at all! I would love that! I put it on a board in critiques somewhere…..
Fantasy, I think… I like to think that I write what I read, in the sense of genres, but I read a lot, so…..
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Poem In Progress in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
I would critique this, but I am not very good at poetry. Like, at all. It confuses me. Good job though, as far as I can tell : )
-Sylvie
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Written by an enemy in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
I find that writing a chapter in their point of view is a great way to get their feelings out, even if you don’t actually use it in your book. And create different reasons that the villain does things. Put her/him past regular reasoning.
Like, for example, let’s say the villain has a daughter, and that daughter gets rushed to the hospital. The…[Read more]
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papergirlsfb started the topic Prayer Requests (no matter how small or large) in the forum 6 years, 12 months ago
Hi its me again. This page looked lonely. Anyone have prayer requests?
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papergirlsfb started the topic Written by an enemy in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
I’ve tried writing in the villains Point Of View, and it is so fun trying to rationalize the reasons of why they do things. I recently wrote something like this and I really like that sometimes, although the villains do bad stuff, sometimes they’re for good reasons.
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Dear Diary in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 6 years, 12 months ago
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Dear Diary in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 7 years ago
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Dear Diary in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 7 years ago
Hi everyone!
My name is Sylvie! I’m new, as you may’ve surmised. I put this in the announcements page by accident… oops! I still haven’t explored this website long enough 🙂
I’m in grade 9, and my goal is to have a published book by the end of grade 10. I’m doing half days at the highschool, because I was homeschooled since Jk. For english…[Read more]
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