Laurel

@law0413 Oh no, not her stitches! I’m glad she’s being treated well by the vets and that she’s on her way to recovery. 🙂 I know how stressful it can be to take a pet to the vet, but I’m sure both of you will be doing just fine in no time. 😉

@dragongeek I know the feeling of hating one of your works. I hope it passes soon. Good luck on your edits for the contest story!

@jenwriter17 XD Nice. Homeschooling is the best.

@law0413 Bravo! 😀 *claps wildly and throws glitter*  Oh dear. Finishing Crime and Punishment would be an accomplishment indeed. 0_0 How long have you been at…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Yay! Enjoy 🙂

@law0413 Ah understood. I hope SAT studying goes well (and you can somehow squeeze a chapter in there 🙂 )!

@law0413 Yay, I’m so glad things are going okay now! 🙂

@law0413 I’m sorry they had to cut off some of her tail, but I’m glad the infection is gone! I’m happy things are working out. 🙂 Thanks for the updates!

@law0413 I like what you said about short and long sentences. They can jolt or calm a reader depending on how they are used.

I like using paragraph breaks to emphasize certain emotions. During an intense scene of reflection, I’ll have breaks to emphasize certain thoughts, even if the rules of grammar don’t call for one. In fact, using unnecessary…[Read more]

@law0413 Oh no! I’m sorry. 🙁 I’ll keep prayin’.

This is such an interesting topic, because I see a lot lacking in the quality of prose today, my own writing, included. But I’m thinking of a few techniques:

Varying sentence length is a really great tool, like @law0413 said. I’ve also found that, when in a character’s head who is experiencing a really strong emotion, like anger, short, maybe…[Read more]

@law0413 Oh no! Yes, I’ll be praying.

Hey guys! We have a new Avenser. 🙂 Please welcome @fawxofthecomics !

@toklaham-veruzia @overcomer  @martina  @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson @dekreel @bonnie @melissa-g @kiraelizabeth @aislinn-mollisong @dragongeek @haviloki @sleepwalkingmk @sam-kowal @law0413 @claire @christianna-hellwig @zanzibee @libby

@law0413 Oh, that would be scary, but I’m glad things are looking up. 🙂

You guys just keep blowing me away. 😀 Congrats <span style=”background-color: #f6d5d9;”>on </span>your win, Avensers!

@toklaham-veruzia @overcomer @martina @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson @dekreel @bonnie @melissa-g @kiraelizabeth @aislinn-mollisong @dragongeek @haviloki @sleepwalkingmk @sam-kowal @law041…[Read more]

@law0413 Oh I didn’t see your prayer request until now! Sorry to hear that about your dog, I definitely know what it feels like to worry over a sick/injured pet. I’m glad she’s doing better though, and I’ll keep praying! 🙂