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Bethania Gauterius started the topic Say and Think (a poem) in the forum Poets 4 years, 8 months ago
Rough draft of a poem I just wrote today. Probably the rawest thing I’ve written, which isn’t saying much lol.
by B. Gauterius
I cannot say what I think
And I cannot think of what to say.
When my better judgment restricts
What my heart begs to convey–
I’ll pretend I didn’t hear you.
But I wish that I could tell you
And hear what you would…
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Bethania Gauterius replied to the topic Writing Is Like Dancing in the forum Poets 4 years, 8 months ago
I like it! There are a couple lines though that throw off the meter though. But otherwise, it’s great!
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Kylie S. Pierce started the topic Writing Is Like Dancing in the forum Poets 4 years, 8 months ago
My latest poem.
<p style=”text-align: center;”>Writing is like dancing.</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>My words flowing on a page.</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>Each powerful emotion</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>Fitting in itβs place.</p>
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Joy Calle Martinez joined the group Poets 4 years, 9 months ago
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Dakota replied to the topic Lonely Sonnet in the forum Poets 4 years, 11 months ago
@omi Cool! I look forward to it.
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omi replied to the topic Lonely Sonnet in the forum Poets 4 years, 11 months ago
@dakota Thank you!! I’ll try to post more of my other works here as much as I can π
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Dakota replied to the topic Lonely Sonnet in the forum Poets 4 years, 11 months ago
@omi This is just lovely!! I don’t see anything I would change in it. Good work. π
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omi replied to the topic Lonely Sonnet in the forum Poets 4 years, 11 months ago
Thanks so much!! Is there anything I can do to improve more? I’m willing to learn anything to improve in my craft. π @kimlikesart
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Kimmi replied to the topic Lonely Sonnet in the forum Poets 4 years, 11 months ago
That was beautiful @omi .
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omi started the topic Lonely Sonnet in the forum Poets 4 years, 11 months ago
Hello! I’ve been writing some poems and it’s my first time to share some of them. Here’s one that I’d love to share. This is my first time and attempt to write a sonnet and I hope I can learn and improve in the future. π
Lonely Sonnet
The moonlight brushed up across his pale face
As his trembling soul could not recover
He dreamt about…[Read more]
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omi joined the group Poets 4 years, 11 months ago
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sparrowhawke replied to the topic Poetry Critique Wanted in the forum Poets 5 years ago
Thank you @Dakota!
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Dakota replied to the topic Poetry Critique Wanted in the forum Poets 5 years ago
@sparrowhawke I really enjoyed reading them all! Hope you win the contest. π
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sparrowhawke started the topic Poetry Critique Wanted in the forum Poets 5 years ago
Hi guys,
I just finished a mini collection of five poems inspired by The Scarlet Letter. I am submitting it to a young authors contest for my homeschool group, but the contest isn’t that intense or anything (as far as I know, only a few other people have signed up). Still, I would like to get some feedback on it. I mainly want to know if the…[Read more]
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Catholic Creed joined the group Poets 5 years ago
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Kylie S. Pierce replied to the topic The Party Tree in the forum Poets 5 years ago
That was really good! I enjoyed it a lot, and I say that you have a knack for writing poetry. The fact that it was based on something on LotR helped too. π
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Thank you, Kylie! That means a lot! I actually got it published on Kingdom Pen last month: https://kingdompen.org/the-party-tree-a-poem/
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Katherine Baker joined the group Poets 5 years, 1 month ago
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Kimmi replied to the topic Silent in the forum Poets 5 years, 1 month ago
Thank you Ms. @sam-m . <3
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Kylie Wingfeather replied to the topic The Throne Warden in the forum Poets 5 years, 2 months ago
Oops, forgot that I had written a poem for my book and posted it on my profile. Sorry!
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