Kimmi

Alessio withdrew down one of the corridors risking a glance in Nithel’s direction but not daring to actually try to talk to him again. He just needed some space, he told himself, to calm down. Although he knew what he really needed was to be able to trust someone at some point. Not that he was ever entirely good at it to begin with. A…[Read more]

@kimlikesart

Gotcha! I’ll keep those things in mind for future writing 🙂

@beth20 Thanks!

Olavir looked around the room. Everyone stopped talking and stared at him when he had walked in, which was just what he wanted.

“Well met, gentlemen.” His voice was buttery smooth.

“He- hello sir.” A young man in the corner, fingering a sling that hung from his belt, spoke up. There was fear in his voice.

Good.

Everyone here looked lost,…[Read more]

@joelle-stone I like Virtus! And hmm… I think it’d be cool for him to come out of a mirror!

@kimlikesart Thanks! I’m not sure I’ll have time right now to write another scene quite yet, but I have some ideas 😉

@beth20 🙂 Sounds good!

@kimlikesart Thank you!

@kimlikesart

Great job on your poem, Kimmi! There was a lot of strong emotion in it. It felt very raw and real and true. Keep up the good work.

@kimlikesart

NO WAY!!!! Another Irish Dancer! How long have you been doing it? Hmmm. My favorite step… I like rocks and twists. And favorite books… The Wingfeather Saga- Andrew Peterson, Lord of the Rings- J.R.R. Tolkien, Harry Potter- J.K. Rowling, Percy Jackson- Rick Riordan, Kane Chronicles- Rick Riordan, Chronicles of Narnia- C.S.…[Read more]

Jaylin’s eyes widened when he realized more mirrors were scattered on the walls, they widened further when he saw other people surrounding him.

What the heck is happening here!?

In front of him sat Nithel. He looked about as confused as Jaylin felt. At least I’m not the only one.

Nithel rubbed his back like he had had a hard landing. Nithel als…[Read more]

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Oh, just so you know, Alessio will not initiate conversations, sorry XD *glances at my surprisingly obstinate character*

@kimlikesart @beth20 @joelle-stone
Thank you so much guys!
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YOU DO SIXTEEN PERSONALITIES TOO!!! YES! I’m ENFP, btw. INFJ are like the super mystic personality-type and ENFP sometimes revert to their “inferior functions” when they’re depressed so they’ll end up testing as INFJs sometimes. You INFJs are just so layered!…[Read more]

@kimlikesart

Hi, Kimmi!  I really like your poem. 🙂 Some of my favorite lines were: “Do you not know, you rival the stars? Do you not know, who you are?”

Thanks for sharing!

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Ooh, I repeat what literally everyone else is saying: Great story and character!! Eliakim… that’s a Bible name, right? Cool! Your book sounds very complex and I’m also very tempted to ask you to tell me what those spoilers were about, but I know how hard it is for a writer to resist that temptation, so I won’t tempt you.…[Read more]

Jaylin noticed the man had no idea what a handshake was, but he held up his hand, and nodded.

“Jaylin; calm, or inner strength. I am Nithel son of Father.”

Jaylin nodded back.  “Nice to meet you Nithel…” his voice faded as the tunnel began to fill with a green looking smoke. “What’s going on?”

Nithel was looking around him with a confused look…[Read more]

@joelle-stone @kimlikesart
Heheh, in retrospect I probably shoulda posted it here first and got everyone’s opinion…so sorry and you’re welcome? And thanks! *sinking back into my socially awkward hole again*

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Ha, thank you, that was just what we needed. I’m good with it if everyone else is…

@anne_the_noob14 @kimlikesart @rusted-knight @beth20 @whoever-I’m-missing

@kimlikesart

Sorry I forgot to reply!! Working on one now!