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Claire replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 3 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
No problem! I’m a perfectionist. Yeah that explains a lot. 😆 I think I could be a fairly good editor if I tried, lol. I’m not so sure about that when it comes to my own work though. It’s so hard to look at it objectively!
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Claire replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 3 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
I really have been enjoying this! I think the thing I noticed the most in this chapter was redundancy. Like at the beginning, you use the word “horse” a lot in a row. So yeah, I think if you just read through and keep that in mind, you could really tighten up your words and paragraphs. Also, for some reason, I felt like there was a lot…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic Character Name Discussion in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, I think I agree. Macalester is cool. I might tweak it just a bit to make it easier like you suggested. Thanks.
If I ever have any name problems, I know where to come.😄
I totally understand about kinda “skipping over” long names in stories. Not to put anyone down, but I once read a book where one of the main characters…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 3 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Your welcome! I try to be helpful with my critiques! Hope they are lol.
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Livi Ryddle posted a new activity comment 5 years, 11 months ago
@katja-r
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Olivia Catherine replied to the topic Christian Movies in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
*walks in timidly* Can I join?
One movie I’ve seen that really impacted my life was The Apostle Paul. It was, of course, about the life of Paul, and it was when he was being held prisoner in Rome at the end of his life. One thing about it was that there were some gruesome parts of people being killed, (though there weren’t like details…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Character Name Discussion in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Oh haha!
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Beth replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 3 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Ahh, more suspense! Loving it so far! I really like Rydel’s character!
Again just a few things, nothing big! 🙂
Mother thought I need to cut it but I liked it being shoulder length.
You said need not needed.
Not wanting to see my sister but having nowhere else to go, I headed inside…..
I crossed my fingers behind my back and…[Read more]
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Christian Movies in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
I loved Midway! It was really good! And yeah I liked how they didn’t make the Japanese so heartless and stuff too!
I liked Jumanji 2 also! I liked how in the end the grandpa wasn’t all gloom and doom about his age anymore!
One of the saddest movies I have ever watched is Five Feet Apart. My dad was crying lol! I didn’t cry but I almost…[Read more]
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claire replied to the topic Hey!! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 11 months ago
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claire replied to the topic Hey!! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 11 months ago
And here’s a picture of his pins. The first is his submarine qualification dolphins, the second a WWII submarine combat pin (with stars for subsequent patrols), and the ribbons representing medals.

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Arindown replied to the topic Character Name Discussion in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Wow! I like some of those! Macalester has such a cool meaning…but so does Gowshik. I like the idea of Life of Journey.
Which one do you think sounds best with Damien?
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Arindown (Gracie) replied to the topic The Most Important Part Of My Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
Totally, you can join. I’d love to hear some of your ideas.😊
I’m flattered that you guys like my forum tag.😄 I believe my character Kyerin (my favourite character of all time😆) said it…but I’m not sure.
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claire replied to the topic Hey!! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 11 months ago
Ok, here’s the info on my grandad. (Harley Vance Co
mbs)1. What theater? Pacific.
2. What years? He served on the USS Cobia from May 6, 1944-May 6, 1945 in the area of the Bonin Islands, Muko Jima, Chichi Jima, and Iwo Jima, also some off the coast of Japan. Then he was transferred over to the USS Angler, which he served on from June…[Read more] -
Mel replied to the topic Christian Movies in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
That is very good that your family is strict on what kind of movies you watch. If everybody had good standards on movies, I doubt are world would be as “dark” as it is.
I have never seen the God’s not dead movies.
Yes, a lot of Christian movies are a cringy and some of the acting isn’t always good…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 3 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
LOVE IT!! Great story! So much suspense packed into just one chapter!
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Christian Movies in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
Thanks for tagging me to this! I’m always up for helpful discussions. But to set the tone- I’ve basically never seen anything but Christian movies. I haven’t seen Lord of the Rings or Narnia. Or any of the other ones you all are talking about as far as non-christian.
I’ve always wanted to write movies too!!!! 🙂
I’ve heard of…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Hey for some reason I can’t get to any other page but page one on any fantasy group post! 🙁 So I can’t read what you said! Sorry. Maybe you can post it on yours or my profile and just tag me so I can read it!
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Yeah I’ll post it on my intro page. I can’t get to the second page either. @daeus-lamb do you know why? Thanks!!
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Hey I was able to read it!
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Don’t post it on your intro page lol! I just commented on your actual comment like I’m doing now haha!
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Mel replied to the topic The Most Important Part Of My Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
So as you scroll through the comments you may notice that I haven’t been in this discussion but hey I am joining now! haha.
So Grace, you were saying how you have a vision to write books that subtly point people to Christ. For me, I have recently been thinking, (like Katja was saying, not all of…[Read more]
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claire replied to the topic The Most Important Part Of My Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
<p style=”text-align: left;”>@katja-r</p>
<p style=”text-align: left;”>No problem! Sounds good.</p>
Yes, option 2 is what I was thinking. I mean we could also mention some examples of what NOT to do in Christian movies, but just as a reference for what TO do. Not for the purpose of complaining. 😉 - Load More










