Joelle Stone

@melodyjoy,

No problem! We’ve all kinda abandoned this one… *wince*

Nooooo Audra!!! (Are you on Ydubs by any chance?)

@Jasmine

I love the idea! *is still trying to keep up with this and all the other projects I’ve somehow gotten myself into*

“The end never justifies the means.”

Malvat swiveled his head in the direction of Alessio, who was speaking. Fire danced with his hair.

“You think your cause is worth it and everyone else’s choice is irrelevant. Maybe it started that if you control or manipulate someone for their own good it’s fine. It’s fine if you can save the day, if you can…[Read more]

@kylie-wingfeather,

Oops, sorry I didn’t answer your question! Erm… just have her have twins, I guess. *shrugs*

Nithel’s eyes were closed, but when he opened them, the burned with a passion older than the stars. “The Lord has given me pain,” he whispered. “Much of it. I was created for it. He saw my pain as worth it, for the good it would work in others.

He didn’t force me to obey what He wished. My brother did not.

I chose to, for I wanted to give m…[Read more]

“What has He done to you?” Nithel asked quietly, glancing first from Malvat to the girl – the Blood Mink (this is the right character, right? I keep getting Lupa and your character mixed up, @irishredcelticflowercrown XDD).

Malvat growled and lowered his head back to the turf, not letting his gaze wander away from Nithel’s sincere face. “Nothing…[Read more]

Malvat listened to the mankinds converse with disinterest. Their petty concerns were of no value to him.

Until the empowered girl asked, “Is Dewos real?”

Surprise flitted through Malvat’s body. Who was Dewos? Why would she ask the one who thought in a different language this question? Were they from the same place?

“Dewos,” she repeated, “-the…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14,

1. If you had to go on a dangerous quest, which would you bring?

c. A good friend

2. What would you rather do?

a. Save the world (even if it hurts)

3. Which weapon do you prefer?

b. Long-range

4. What are you more afraid of?

d. Physical pain (torture)

5. What would embarrass you more?

a. A personal secret being…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy,

1500 WORDS?!? CONGRATS!!

*Laughs in writer.* Oh, she totally is. Life really sucks for her right now XD Oh, goodness, I’m both proud and extremely guilty XD I’ve just started on the low point and it’s going to get way worse before it gets better. (My poor babies!)

*wishes I could cackle* *is not in Evil Writer Mode* Saaaa…[Read more]

Malvat burst through the hole after the others, showering dirt and rock down into the collapsing room. The ground beneath him held – miraculously. He attributed it to the overall strangeness of this place.

Raising his head to they sky, Malvat shook the rubble off his gleaming ebony body and sniffed the air. Clear, but somehow scented with…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy,

*wonders why I’ve not been getting emails for this*

WELL DONE!! It’s so hard to get that many words out when you feel like the best thing you can come up with is a dramatic “the”. XD

*is intrigued by that last sentence* *suddenly gets alarmed* OH NO!! IS LIORAH GIVING UP?!?! GIVE HER A PEP TALK!

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Huh. *cocks head* My siblings have always drawn, but somehow I can never get the pencil to do what I want it to, so I end up frustrated and embarrassed at my lack of artistic skills. *smiles*

Yeah I know!!! She’s drawn all of her profile pics, which are so cool!

@rose-colored-fancy,

Aww, thanks so much!!! I totally didn’t deserve that and it made my day. 🙂

(Also… very excited for this new piece you’ve posted… :))

@anne_the_noob14,

Yahoo, I can’t wait to hear from you! And best of luck on your exams. 🙂

@obrian-of-the-surface-world,

Aha! I finally have a window of time in which to critique your piece!

Scene Questions:

1. Is there anything that stood out to you as intriguing about this scene?

Yes. I’m wanting to learn more about the encounter with the Troll, plus get some more character development. Who is the “I”? And, like Cathy said, I’m…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy,

*could listen to your accent all day* *tries mimicking it* *reads your story with you with your accent* *fails miserably*

The best part about this (not including the melodic reading) is that I know who Liorah and Gavril are and I know some of the setting and worldbuilding. *cackle*

Scene Questions:

1. Is there anything…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14,

Aw, thank you!!! I honestly had no idea what I was going to do with the prompt I got. XD

(BTW… you should submit a story of your own! I’ll listen and critique it…)