Story Embers | Eitan | Mentions https://storyembers.org/members/eitan/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning Eitan. Tue, 14 Apr 2026 00:40:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 dc78b31371b1fa699a56fefe58364178 Beth Darlene posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/84205/#acomment-104041 Fri, 27 Jan 2023 03:10:04 -0400 @eitan hey bro! idk if you still use this site or not, but I thought I’d pop on and say hi

In reply to - Eitan posted an update @beth20 Hi Beth! How’re your friends? Did they find a house? Are you able to meet with them? ]]> fbd18bebec8374c23a98ab72b49951ea Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/lyrical-poems-are-welcome-here/page/28/#post-137175 Wed, 25 Aug 2021 17:35:44 -0400 @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan

 

WHOA!! Has it really been THREE MONTHS since I posted in this thread?!  . . .

Okay, it has.

Tell me what you all think of this poem.

Rainbow in Waterdrops

Come down…[Read more]

]]> 0 db03d8f947b46178aeba7856b8353a1d Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/lyrical-poems-are-welcome-here/page/28/#post-133872 Wed, 12 May 2021 16:14:27 -0400 @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan

This one is another very personal to me.  Critique and enjoy!

Twenty-One
Sometimes I don’t think I qualify
For twenty-one
Weighed down by the times I have to try
I’ve never…[Read more]

]]> 0 681ada9a75613946f6b45967ccbe24fb Bethany replied to the topic Coronavirus drawings! in the forum Art Critique https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/coronavirus-drawings/page/2/#post-133029 Mon, 19 Apr 2021 22:24:52 -0400 @eitan

Those are really good! I really like the first one especially. Do you know Hebrew?

]]> 0 98975600a68e3a808f1560196cea1b7f Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/lyrical-poems-are-welcome-here/page/28/#post-128703 Wed, 07 Apr 2021 18:00:51 -0400 @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan

 

Okay, I guess I’ll post in this thread when I remeber too! LOL.

Here is my latest poem. Critique and enjoy!

 

True North

It seems that all the world has lost it’s…[Read more]

]]> 0 e8d88cfb7ce531273fdf4ed321268567 Tasha Van Kesteren replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hey-everyone-4/page/6/#post-127028 Tue, 30 Mar 2021 12:50:34 -0400 @eitan

when you quote @beth20 it has a blue line that shows what she said…how do you do that? (I’m not good at computer stuff…)

]]> 0 e100ba0c48088617605dc68ef17991d2 Beth Darlene posted an update: @eitan Hey!! How have you been? https://storyembers.org/activity/p/90043/ Sat, 13 Mar 2021 19:51:32 -0400 @eitan
Hey!!
How have you been?

]]> 2 3d2083d26a557f7e383d3187e155f58a Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/lyrical-poems-are-welcome-here/page/28/#post-125245 Wed, 24 Feb 2021 17:46:29 -0400 @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan

Don’t really know what to say about this one. Any and all critiques welcome!

My Morning Song (What you will say to me)

The sunlight is dawning
And though I am still…[Read more]

]]> 0 eee207ef47f3f2035e0f78fba89c05a4 Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/lyrical-poems-are-welcome-here/page/28/#post-124763 Wed, 10 Feb 2021 19:58:05 -0400 @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan

Hope you all enjoy!

All of the Pieces
All of my pieces I’d scattered o’er
The cracks in the surface of my stone heart floor
All of my days were lost so empty
Then You came and…[Read more]

]]> 0 8dacaa816e44e5e0d48e77a86c67a109 Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/lyrical-poems-are-welcome-here/page/27/#post-123786 Wed, 13 Jan 2021 19:19:27 -0400 @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan

This one I have been trying to finish for over a year now. Critque and enjoy!

Resolutions

I wrote my list of resolutions
Not to create my own solutions
I want to live like my…[Read more]

]]> 0 a73b61cc699421dc39981c8e2e180b48 Kimmi replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/talk-room/page/7/#post-122910 Sun, 20 Dec 2020 04:44:14 -0400 Whoever sees this, it’s amazing. Please. Take the time to listen.

A Message of Hope from Shannon Scholten – YouTube

And, if you have time, would you share your thoughts?

@rusted-knight @this-is-not-an-alien @eitan @anyone <3

]]> 0 ba95e5dec5e6642f235f759d12857ed2 Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/lyrical-poems-are-welcome-here/page/27/#post-122751 Tue, 15 Dec 2020 21:33:39 -0400 @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan

 

Merry Christmas!!

My Christmas Prayer
All the lights are hung, twinkling
Like a million stars glittering all over the walls
By the window the tree is shining
Crowned with a…[Read more]

]]> 0 0c002a79afc0585f99e6a42f7965fdbf Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/lyrical-poems-are-welcome-here/page/27/#post-122144 Mon, 30 Nov 2020 20:00:04 -0400 @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan

Oh, wow! I keep forgetting about this. I am a bad thread-up-keeper . . . if there is such a word. . .

Anyway, this week’s is rather short. Just something I started singing to…[Read more]

]]> 0 d8c8e62dddc5bc8fd39f9538d40697f2 Beth Darlene posted an update: @thedarkninja03 @kimlikesart @claire-h @purpleturtle @olivia […] https://storyembers.org/activity/p/86611/ Thu, 26 Nov 2020 18:50:29 -0400 @thedarkninja03 @kimlikesart @claire-h @purpleturtle @olivia Happy thanksgiving to you all!! Love you!
@eitan Not sure when if/when Isreal celebrates Thanksgiving, but I thought I’d wish you a happy one anyway!!

]]> 15 67c05f87b835bc1f9d73bd127fd7ffc9 Beth Darlene replied to the topic A poem - I want to weep in the forum Poets https://storyembers.org/groups/poets/forum/topic/a-poem-i-want-to-weep/#post-121830 Fri, 20 Nov 2020 00:09:00 -0400 Nice poem @eitan!!

]]> 0 c63a39f5a5141db2a3b220b851f27a4b Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/lyrical-poems-are-welcome-here/page/27/#post-121444 Thu, 05 Nov 2020 19:45:45 -0400

Lyrical Poems are Welcome here!

@tdprince

@naiya-dyani

@eitan

@urwen-starial

@kari-karast

]]> 0 4bba8982f8f8ce88a80db4f112b73139 Hope McClellan replied to the topic Hello, fellow Narnia fans! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hello-fellow-narnia-fans/#post-121441 Thu, 05 Nov 2020 17:28:49 -0400 @eitan

It’s been awhile since I’ve read it, and I don’t have the book in front of me to refresh myself, but my initial answer would be that this is further showcasing Edmund’s fleshly rebellion to Aslan. The statue reminds him of Aslan, so he wants nothing to do with it. Perhaps also he’s fearful because he subconsciously realizes that what he’s…[Read more]

]]> 0 c6a03611b412222350ab3fec98d04420 Beth Darlene replied to the topic Renner and Erin in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/renner-and-erin/#post-121378 Mon, 02 Nov 2020 22:39:15 -0400 @eitan @claire-h @purpleturtle @olivia Let me know if you want to be tagged or untagged!

]]> 0 b9e37dc0e923821b77cb676e31df68be Sam M replied to the topic I Would Be in the forum Poets https://storyembers.org/groups/poets/forum/topic/i-would-be/#post-120985 Fri, 23 Oct 2020 03:41:25 -0400 @eitan

Thanks, Eitan! 🙂

]]> 0 22310c55e960e5acefe3e9b917ae6de4 Kimmi posted an update: @eitan “` (Hi! Um… here’s something short I wrote […] https://storyembers.org/activity/p/85649/ Sun, 18 Oct 2020 20:45:15 -0400 @eitan
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(Hi! Um… here’s something short I wrote….)
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‘A Star’

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A star. Bright, and wise. His feet have danced on the knee of the handle his whole being. A breath that has lasted thousands of years.

When, over a span of two months, he feels himself getting hotter. His body becomes brighter. His song to the Star Breather comes out stronger…[Read more]

]]> 2 7fd2c81a62e36aad49cf3beb9cc0fda4 Dakota replied to the topic A poem - I want to weep in the forum Poets https://storyembers.org/groups/poets/forum/topic/a-poem-i-want-to-weep/#post-120576 Mon, 12 Oct 2020 17:52:44 -0400 @eitan Love this poem. Thank you for posting this! 🙂

]]> 0 beb94b5b4aab764fc20d3498e8e72d5c Kimmi started the topic Unusual/Useful Words in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/unusual-useful-words/ Tue, 06 Oct 2020 17:20:53 -0400 A Word Challenge!

You give one or more, unusual, useful words, and their definitions. Then tag people (if you want).

<^>

Example:

Egad = Used as a mild exclamation. / An exclamation expressing exultation or surprise.

@zee @eitan @princessmk

<^>

Please do not talk to each other very much! This thread is to be an interesting list, of…[Read more]

]]> 0 90bf78023a04c11d3f71542a2143c695 Sam M replied to the topic A poem - Alone in the night of darkness in the forum Poets https://storyembers.org/groups/poets/forum/topic/a-poem-alone-in-the-night-of-darkness/#post-119796 Mon, 21 Sep 2020 04:18:51 -0400 @eitan I love this poem. 🙂 I specifically like, “O my Lord, heal my heart, and let your love be in me.” Thank you for sharing this!

]]> 0 709a1abcf7d177770357e95eeddf020f Beth Darlene replied to the topic Campfire (I don't really name my short stories lol) in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/campfire-i-dont-really-name-my-short-stories-lol/#post-119782 Sun, 20 Sep 2020 22:28:23 -0400 @eitan @purpleturtle @claire-h @kimlikesart Don’t have to read, just thought I’d tag you!  <3

]]> 0 cf007e3b48f266220680f99a88d32696 Kimmi posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/84104/#acomment-84397 Fri, 04 Sep 2020 05:05:10 -0400 @eitan

Computer again…

I found this poem. (It has thee’s and thou’s) But has rymne and meter.
It is true.

Approach, my soul, the mercy–seat
Where JESUS answers prayer;
There humbly fall before his feet,
For none can perish there.
Thy promise is my only plea,
With this I venture nigh;
Thou callest burdened souls to thee,
And such, O LORD, a…[Read more]

In reply to - Eitan started the topic A poem – Your love and Your faithfulness in the forum Poets So, today was hard… But in the end, God gave me hope and rest. I’m even a little cheery as I write those lines 😉 This is the tr […] ]]> f2d3c1f2ffc7b1ed49cd206b42acd538 Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Ways to glorify God in worldbuilding in the forum Research and Worldbuilding https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/ways-to-glorify-god-in-worldbuilding/#post-118921 Mon, 31 Aug 2020 13:45:38 -0400 @eitan Yeah. By “over my head” I meant it is sometimes too advanced for me to follow. I was asking if you were able to understand all his minute points any better.

]]> 0 66b68534c8974c0fabd500663be161e3 Gracie replied to the topic A poem - Your love and Your faithfulness in the forum Poets https://storyembers.org/groups/poets/forum/topic/a-poem-your-love-and-your-faithfulness/#post-118806 Fri, 28 Aug 2020 04:47:54 -0400 That was beautiful @eitan .

]]> 0 46ed734aad107106ad0b9b2fde059b4a Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic A poem - Your love is not imaginary in the forum Poets https://storyembers.org/groups/poets/forum/topic/a-poem-your-love-is-not-imaginary/#post-118780 Thu, 27 Aug 2020 18:59:46 -0400 @eitan This was beautiful, thank you. I’m sorry you went through this time, but it’s beautiful that you  have come out the other side of this with hope in your heart and new strength in Jesus.

From a grammatical standpoint, I spotted one line… “There are no cold and horror – I do not shiver” should be “There is no cold and horror – I do not…[Read more]

]]> 0 bf5d45daba2aa208bab36fd0e0dc30ca Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Ways to glorify God in worldbuilding in the forum Research and Worldbuilding https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/ways-to-glorify-god-in-worldbuilding/#post-118763 Thu, 27 Aug 2020 14:40:14 -0400 @eitan I love Artifaxian, but he’s normally over my head. 😂 Can you manage to keep up with him?

]]> 0 7cdb1142072f5df5f997263967631791 Kimmi replied to the topic Ways to glorify God in worldbuilding in the forum Research and Worldbuilding https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/ways-to-glorify-god-in-worldbuilding/#post-118738 Wed, 26 Aug 2020 15:38:18 -0400 Wow @eitan .

That was amazingly helpful. Thank you!

Mermaids

Hmm….. *at first thinks it is definitely not to happen*…*then ideas come*….*mermaids might have a rather large part now*…

I will do what you suggest! So many good pointers…

Thank you again!

]]> 0 5edc0e874fc700746c6fad1d8e1bfef3 Zee replied to the topic Ways to glorify God in worldbuilding in the forum Research and Worldbuilding https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/ways-to-glorify-god-in-worldbuilding/#post-118736 Wed, 26 Aug 2020 15:24:15 -0400 Wow, you’ve put a whole lot of thought and time into this, @eitan. I’m impressed.

]]> 0 8c3ed6c4cedf87fefe760e3172895346 Kimmi replied to the topic Ways to glorify God in worldbuilding in the forum Research and Worldbuilding https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/ways-to-glorify-god-in-worldbuilding/#post-118619 Sun, 23 Aug 2020 04:04:14 -0400 @eitan

I have my first idea for a Fantasy novel!! (Yey!)

Your world/galaxy/universe, I have the feeling will end up Much better than mine. (: But, do you have any basic pointers/ideas on how to start building a world?

]]> 0 d83ac5ce8f35f7fe2d707381246833a1 Sam M replied to the topic A poem - Your love is not imaginary in the forum Poets https://storyembers.org/groups/poets/forum/topic/a-poem-your-love-is-not-imaginary/#post-118501 Fri, 21 Aug 2020 06:04:04 -0400 @eitan

Hi, Eitan! I really like your poem. I love the hope and truth that you pour into your writing.

Also, (because you’re really serious about grammar), I think you meant: I can know this for sure.

I look forward to reading anything else you post. 🙂

]]> 0 61d1de0ea30ce5d3805650aa809c9661 Gracie replied to the topic A poem - Your love is not imaginary in the forum Poets https://storyembers.org/groups/poets/forum/topic/a-poem-your-love-is-not-imaginary/#post-118354 Tue, 18 Aug 2020 15:13:21 -0400 @eitan

Beautiful Eitan! Truly. Thank you for sharing.

(:

There are no cold and horror – I do not shiver

I believe, (sense you asked), grammatically it should be ‘there is no cold and horror’.

]]> 3 8a58653ee372de08d68c465b9d4a687e Kimmi replied to the topic Thoughts on Psalm 23 in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/thoughts-on-psalm-23/#post-118353 Tue, 18 Aug 2020 15:08:03 -0400 @zee

You’re welcome! Has school started for your boys yet?

@eitan

Aye, I did… (:

Wingiby-iggiby  asked me to share more of this sort of stuff on SE…so I am. (:

]]> 0 ba0f2f49441d568a563faae7d610098b Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Hello from Israel! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hello-from-israel/page/7/#post-118116 Fri, 14 Aug 2020 15:17:30 -0400 @eitan

Sounds fun! I’ve always wanted to learn other languages! Especially Greek and Chinese. I have no idea why. LOL

Eh. Not the greatest. We don’t get a lot of chances to interact. 🙁 But keep praying anyways. Hopefully I can reach them soon.

I’m glad your friends are doing well.

How is your writing? Have you been working on anything new?

]]> 0 32d31ff4907b40deddfbf2a2034aa674 Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Hello from Israel! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hello-from-israel/page/7/#post-118014 Thu, 13 Aug 2020 01:47:36 -0400 @eitan

🙂 The schools around here are opening up again soon(I think) our governor keeps changing his mind. 🙁 Of course we’re homeschooled so it doesn’t really affect us.

Arabic sounds like it would be a very confusing language to learn. I’m glad you enjoy it though.

I’ve been doing pretty good. My friends are doing okay. . . No real…[Read more]

]]> 0 f9fa55360b4afcff67d88dec3c6f023d Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic It's Me... Again :D in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/its-me-again-d/page/3/#post-117950 Wed, 12 Aug 2020 19:08:41 -0400 @eitan – When you get to it, my favorite Psalm is Psalm 96 🙂

No snow? *gasp* Well, I’m not fond of winter. It’s my least favorite season. But I do love some pretty snow now and then. 😀 It does sound very beautiful there, though. I’d love to visit some day.

Oh, my question about cities… 😀 I just meant what was the city you lived in like, or…[Read more]

]]> 0 ebd2474192ce539af4648e7167c22983 Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Hello from Israel! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hello-from-israel/page/6/#post-117917 Wed, 12 Aug 2020 12:33:13 -0400 @eitan

Hey! How have you been lately? What’s been going on? Anything new?

]]> 0 6c8c633241e69c4dcaedd1accf0a34dd Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Another translated poem (: in the forum Poets https://storyembers.org/groups/poets/forum/topic/another-translated-poem/#post-117911 Wed, 12 Aug 2020 11:53:03 -0400 @eitan

Sorry I just now saw this. This is beautiful! your poetry is so vivid and full of emotion. I love it! 🙂

]]> 0 57bacddd7a474d2aec3c4faa089dc703 Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic It's Me... Again :D in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/its-me-again-d/page/2/#post-117859 Tue, 11 Aug 2020 21:27:40 -0400 @eitan Hello and thank you again! 😉

Favorite Bible character… EstherDanielRuth. Okay okay, that was three. I suppose… Esther. It’s so hard to pick on single favorite though!!!!!

Favorite Bible verse… only one??? Not fair!!! I can’t say top favorite, because it’s so hard to narrow down, but one of my favorites is Joshua 1:9 – “Have not I…[Read more]

]]> 0 97afaa80867b0249d3594367ee697ce2 Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Another translated poem (: in the forum Poets https://storyembers.org/groups/poets/forum/topic/another-translated-poem/#post-117857 Tue, 11 Aug 2020 21:16:55 -0400 @eitan That’s so cool! I really wish I could hear it in the original Hebrew. It’s a beautiful sounding language, in my opinion.

]]> 0 35f90693803a74f6ae24a98d14d136b0 Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Humanity, A Poem in the forum Poets https://storyembers.org/groups/poets/forum/topic/humanity-a-poem/#post-117856 Tue, 11 Aug 2020 21:15:44 -0400 @eitan Thank you! I understand not liking free verse. I know several people who don’t even accept it as poetry. But that’s the beauty of writing and words… everyone can choose the style they love and that works to get their words flowing into something amazing. I do love the freedom of free verse… it’s aptly named. XD

 

]]> 0 89796f00e06bff7160a12e1a046be11d claire replied to the topic Graphic Designer, At Your Service in the forum Art Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/graphic-designer-at-your-service/#post-117811 Tue, 11 Aug 2020 15:45:11 -0400 And now it won’t let me edit my post. :/ Anyway, tagging a few more people. @eitan @beth20 @anne_the_noob14

]]> 0 a9a432efd48915cb78a8d04cf9d957ba Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Another translated poem (: in the forum Poets https://storyembers.org/groups/poets/forum/topic/another-translated-poem/#post-117725 Mon, 10 Aug 2020 14:03:59 -0400 @eitan *hugs* Um, are you a hug person? I am. Sorry if you’re not. 😀 Just wanted to let you know you are not alone and never will be.

What language is this translated from? Is English not your first language? Where are you from? If you don’t mind me asking…

]]> 0 1800f540c73fd1b192b9ca99c4120299 Anne of Lothlorien started the topic Humanity, A Poem in the forum Poets https://storyembers.org/groups/poets/forum/topic/humanity-a-poem/ Mon, 10 Aug 2020 14:01:42 -0400 Hey, so I’m ‘new’ here. I was on the forum a long time ago and am just now getting back on… So I decided to join the poetry forum group and… here’s an offering for y’all. I wrote this free verse called ‘Humanity’. It’s really short and simple; any critiques and suggestions for improvement would be appreciated! Thanks y’all!  Just gonna tag…[Read more]

]]> 0 e96b020039848590c52f3108f69c2dd5 Beth Darlene started the topic Chapter Four: Door to Ninjanaria in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/chapter-four-door-to-ninjanaria/ Mon, 03 Aug 2020 00:27:58 -0400 Here is the fifth chapter of my book. Tagging peeps who might be interested. @eitan @purpleturtle @claire-h @katja-r  @kristianne-hassman @kimlikesart @melodyjoy

 

Chapter Five: Surprises

Tim had made it safely onto a piece of the floor, and now they were both jumping towards the rows of scrolls. Each row was marked by a symbol that he didn’t…[Read more]

]]> 0 24ac702681d29ceb24330c488dbbef8a Beth Darlene replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Four: Door to Ninjanaria in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/groups/fantasy-writers/forum/topic/ninjanaria-chapter-four-door-to-ninjanaria/#post-117422 Mon, 03 Aug 2020 00:03:02 -0400 @eitan Here’s the fourth chapter! And Imma post the fifth chapter!

]]> 0 71c7a23386c95a27c7256d60adefacbd Kristianne replied to the topic Coronavirus drawings! in the forum Art Critique https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/coronavirus-drawings/page/2/#post-117053 Wed, 29 Jul 2020 16:52:36 -0400 @eitan

I know I’m VERY late with this, but I just had to say, I love your drawings! You really have a talent for it. I especially love the “Living Water” one. It’s such a beautiful visual of that verse!

]]> 0 a11306ad7b094a2738bfdec601f31f20 Gracie replied to the topic Another translated poem (: in the forum Poets https://storyembers.org/groups/poets/forum/topic/another-translated-poem/#post-116784 Mon, 27 Jul 2020 19:34:13 -0400 @eitan

It is very good. Though in the desert, and feeling alone, you choose to have faith that God is near. That there will be an end to the struggle. That God has you, and will not let the dry times be wasted.

 

Thank you for sharing!!!

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