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Jane Maree replied to the topic PROMPT GUILD WAR – Original and Unique Prose! in the forum Announcements 8 years, 1 month ago
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@dakota Ahhh I loved it!
The only thing that threw me off was the line “Evβry joy and each sorrow of my soul” — it seemed really long in comparison to the others. That said, if put to music it can still work fine, so it’s not necessarily an issue. π
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Throne Warden of Emberia replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@dakota, your first poem is amazing, and your second is so beautiful. Wow! You have talent!
@jane-maree I just wish I could hear the tune for that. Its really good as a poem, that’s for sure!
@libby your song is beautiful. Once again, I wish I could hear the tune. I love the ocean, and this song is just…wow. -
J.A.Penrose replied to the topic PROMPT GUILD WAR – Original and Unique Prose! in the forum Announcements 8 years, 1 month ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@dakota, oh, nice! I like it! π
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Jenwriter17 replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@dakota Lovely! π
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Evelyn replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@dakota Aww, that was really sweet.Β <3 I love it!
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic PROMPT GUILD WAR – Original and Unique Prose! in the forum Announcements 8 years, 1 month ago
Hey guys! I’ve submitted the entry, and hopefully we’ll hear back soon about how stellar you were! *hi-fives everyone* Loved getting to hang out with you guys. You’re all geniuses. The lot of…[Read more]
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Jane Maree started the topic {2018 – Week 16} Your Turn! in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 1 month ago
Okay, I’m not going to lie, I had a bit of a mental scream when I realised it was almost 6 pm (in my timezone) and I hadn’t written the week’s topic yet. I brainstormed ideas and came up with a whole lot of nothing much.
And so here I am. And this week I’m
being lazyasking you guys for some feedback!– Am I doing okay with our weekly topics?
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic PROMPT GUILD WAR – Original and Unique Prose! in the forum Announcements 8 years, 1 month ago
ATTENTION ALL MEERKATS!
See what you can add to the doc in the next day and a bit to make this story amazing! You have some brilliant ideas, we just need to work on getting it all there. I’ll be going over it again to tweak things at the end, but I want this to be as much of your own independent work as possible.
So go for it guys! Make Jane…[Read more]
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Serenity replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@libby, that’s gorgeous!
I really like how it is just talking about water, which is something we all know… I haven’t heard the music, but I bet its really nice!
Yours is really inspirational, too, @jane-maree! and I really love the poetry that you’ve posted, @dakota. Its really beautiful and… I don’t know… sparkly. (= just really fun and a…[Read more]
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Serenity replied to the topic Prayer Requests #1 in the forum Prayer Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
thanks, @libby. Things are still hard, but I can see God working. I am so blessed by your prayers, and I will definitely be praying for the situation in Japan.
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Evelyn replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dakota Haha… thanks. I’ll keep that in mind. πΒ But I’m glad to be of encouragement to you!
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Parker Hankins replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dakota, it did encourage me!!
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Jane Maree started the topic {2018 – Week 15} Why Everyone Should Read Their Old Writing in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 2 months ago
Writers are (or certainly should be) constantly growing in their craft. We work on it every week, every month, every year, and as time goes on we learn how to make our stories better, stronger, deeper.
As we grow to be better writers than we were before, itβs very easy to look back on old writing, cringe, hide it in a deepest corner of d…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic PROMPT GUILD WAR – Original and Unique Prose! in the forum Announcements 8 years, 2 months ago
Okay guys! Looking like we’re set to write this stellar story on the dieter vs cake! Let’s get writing. *cheers*
Here is a DOC if we want to start writing. Remember to all pitch in with editing and generally throwing ideas at the piece of paper like those rebellious marshmallows I mentioned earlier. I’ll help you guys as much as you seem to need…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic PROMPT GUILD WAR – Original and Unique Prose! in the forum Announcements 8 years, 2 months ago
@esther-sears Sounds like a plan!
Okay guys, just over one week left, and we need to get a character, plot, theme, etc. AND GET IT WRITTEN AND AHHHH IT NEEDS TO BE AWESOME. Or Jane may well kill me… XD
So guys, let’s look at answering some basic questions:
- Who are the characters? (develop)
- What is the genre?
- What is the theme/arc?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Warning: History Geek and Literature Nerd Ahead π in the forum Introduce Yourself 8 years, 2 months ago
Corrie ten Boom and Jim Elliot are both very cool! I’ve read books on both of them and I’ve really enjoyed them π
What sort of genres do you enjoy writing in?
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EricaWordsmith replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Great job @dakota!!! I love it!!! I’m not very good with poetry or songwriting, but my books require some, so I have to give it my best shot! I’m itching to put down my favorite piece of mine, but I don’t want to reveal much about my first book right now. Eventually I might put it up here and tag you to see if you’ve got any critics.
Great job…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic PROMPT GUILD WAR – Original and Unique Prose! in the forum Announcements 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey guys!
Just a heads up, try not to tag Jane into anything on this thread. All of the tags appear in her inbox and she’s having to glance at them and then delete them and stuff. So avoid tagging her for now.
These ideas are all sounding great guys! And yes, it is totally fine to start offering plot ideas. That will mean more ideas in…[Read more]
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