@beth20
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Gracie started the topic Chena’s Story Chpt. 3 in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years ago
a time to kill, and a time to heal; a time to break down, and a time to build up
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Eight years later…
Caesar Augustas declared a census that stated everyone had to return to the land of their ancestors to be counted with 12 Roman months to do so. Bethlehem was never particularly bustling with people traveling for the c…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
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@mayacat Hey! *waves*
For Enan:
1. What would your dream house be like?
A big house, walking distance from the ocean, with a roaring fireplace in the living-room, and the smell of Lime Pie in the…[Read more]
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PurpleTurtle posted a new activity comment 6 years ago
Yes, pretty much, @beth20
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@mayacat Hi and welcome! Why did you name him Ruby?
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For Lawrence:
1. ‘Uh, mythical creature? The only one I know is a jackalope… And I don’t like the idea of them so much.’
2. His fatal flaw is…[Read more]
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Mayacat replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @arindown @anne_the_noob14 @kayla-skywriter @beth20 @writergirl101 @naiya-dyani @winter_rose @mayajoelle @candide
I think I’ll join if you guys don’t mind! 🙂
These are for Ruby
1. What’s the best piece of advice you’ve ever been given?
Hmm, I think that it would be to live life to the fullest each…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years ago
Would you rather be told an uncomfortable truth or a comforting lie?
Teagen: ‘Uh, depends on the lie. If, I’m like, gonna die… I’d want to know so I could go do crazy stunts I’ve been too scared to do. Other than that, let their tongues fly.’
Lawrence: *His brows lift as his eyes stare at Teagen’s face. Then he clears his throat,* ‘Generally I…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
For Teagen:
1. Fight; for sure. Both now and in future, though he hopefully fights differently later.
2. Athletically; for sure, again…
3. ‘Wait, wait, wait… Exiled? Geez… With someone? How about a monkey? Or, geez…’ *Thoughts about every person he knows and semi-knows. Every one of them is annoying and/or a woman.* ”Kay, uh, how about…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
Teagen glanced to the girl, Really? She’d acted so high and mighty, and now... “Yeah, we’re together.” He straightened, the metal felt good in his hand. He gave her an imperceptible nod, dark eyes meeting hers.
He then looked back to the newcomers as Libby picked up her glasses and stuck them on her face. He repeated his question, tone not as…[Read more]
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Ella replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
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For Athena
No, but if she wanted to, it’d be the viola or cello because of the deep, rich sounds.
The balcony. Her room leads out to a big veranda-type thing that looks over her city, which is…[Read more]
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Arindown replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
Libby looked from Teagan to the stranger, and back again. This was definitely not what she had expected. <i>What did I expect </i><i>anyway?</i> Not guns and explosives.
The man stepped through the gaping hole in the wall, gun still drawn. There were people behind him. Libby didn’t recognize any of them.
“You know,” She said, trying to sound co…[Read more]
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Ella replied to the topic Character Building Game in the forum Characters 6 years ago
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For Athena:
1) yep, two shoes.
2) she cooks a lot, if you count that as handmade, but she’s not the crafty type.
3) Yes, she fights this constant impulse/conscience battle inside her head. Nope, no one…[Read more]
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Kristianne Hassman replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria 😉 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
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Kristianne Hassman replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
Yes, I think that works! It sounds more natural. Good job! 🙂
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
Libby glared again, and she took a step toward the strange man, rolling her eyes and putting her small hands on her hips. “What do you want to do sir?”
Only the man’s head was visible through the hatch, he glanced down a moment before looking up and through to Teagen and Libby again, “You guys mind moving to one of the corners of this wal…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Four: Door to Ninjanaria in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
Wow Beth, really good! You built suspense in so many different places, and now I have to keep reading to find out, well done. (: I really, really liked it…And I have no real critiques.
Jered laughed “I’ve only been here a minute and it’s obvious to me,” he said.
Did you forget a *** here? If not, it might make it easier to read if…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
Isaac has been talking to other people through a small hatch in the wall. Now he just told Jaylin that he’s using plastique to blow a hole to make a larger opening in the wall. Jaylin has been told to “Get to a corner and stay there. And build any kind of barricade you can.” and “Everyone, cover your ears. Close your eyes and shield y…[Read more]
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Eitan replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
Yup!
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PurpleTurtle replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria 😉 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
@beth20
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Gracie replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years ago
Would you rather be thrown fifty years into the future (and stuck there) or instantly age fifty years (with no way to reverse it)?
Teagen: ‘Duh, I’m not going to be sixty-five in one second, sorry. Fifty years in the future.’
Lawrence: ‘Fifty years in the future. Who knows all the discoveries that have been made!? Then again, I won’t be able to…[Read more]
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PurpleTurtle replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria 😉 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
@beth20
Keep up the good work! Really enjoyed reading it and I am looking forward to the next chapter! - Load More












