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Banana Peacock Warrior started the topic WIP In Need of Critiques: The Clefs in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
Hi, Story Embers people! So, I love critiques and I currently have a WIP that is in the editing stage if there’s anyone out there who loves critiquing! This is a Google Docs thingy and I’ll add more as I edit along. I hope you like it, so far!
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic The Art of Telling True Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@bama-rose, @emberynus-the-dragonslayer, @evelyn: Thanks! Yeah… it WAS crazy…
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Azeline's Poetry in Need of Critique in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@w-o-holmes: LOL not really… I like peacocks, but not ecstatic about them, and the same with bananas. I got stuck with the nickname in dance class about 4 years ago. It’s a long story. π
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years, 10 months ago
Hi, everybody! Wow, I’ve been off of here for way too long… 😬 Let’s see if I can answer the questions I missed without being overwhelming…? 😂 (a few minutes later…) OKAY…. I just put all the new questions I’ve missed in the past week on here and… I’m gonna pick and choose and alternate between my two WIP’s ’cause this is a lot. 😁
Hieee…[Read more]
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic The Art of Telling True Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
Hi ‘people on this forum’! Wow, there are so many interesting stories on here! And holy cow, those family trees are cool- how in the world do you find the time to go so far back?!
I don’t have any super interesting stories (except for some awesome stories from my mom when she was a kid- oh boy, did she get in trouble often!) But I saw at the…[Read more]
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Azeline's Poetry in Need of Critique in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
Hi, @azeline-d! I’ll admit that I don’t specialize in free-verse, but I think that these are really good! I especially liked Self-Consciousness in how true it really is! I liked this verse…
Which keeps you from caring outwardly
Since too occupied you are with βmeβI don’t know about you, but I know that whenever I ask for critiques and act…[Read more]
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic *Insert Good Writing Quotes* in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@k-a-grey @bama-rose @valtmy @olivia @kari-karast
These are all awesome! I especially love that one from David Schlosser- I’ve never heard of him, before! And LOL I like a lot of your signature quotes too… 😏😂
I randomly found these ones online…
“You can always edit a bad page. You can’t edit a blank page.” -Jodi Picoult
“The best books…[Read more]
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years, 10 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer: WOAH! I just looked at that link for Hector’s backstory, and… POOR HECTOR!!!!!!!!!!!!! My goodness, the poor kid! And his poor sister! And his poor life! Oh, he must have so many mental scars… but he sounds really developed. I love him so much now! *finds Hector, reaches over, and pats his hand- then squeezes…[Read more]
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Hello from somewere few can imagine in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 10 months ago
Hi, @candide! It’s awesome to meet you and welcome to Story Embers!
That’s really cool that you’re from Brazil and speak Portuguese as your first language… I have friends who study Portuguese for their foreign language in school and my old dance teacher went to Brazil to do some professional stuff. From what she says, it seems great!
I had the…[Read more]
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Psalm Illustration Thread in the forum Art Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
Hi, everyone on here! I know that it’s been, like, months since anyone has commented on this thread, and I’m not really a super incredible artist myself and just a copyartist, and I’m not going to tag EVERYONE on this thread, but I just wanted to comment in case anyone sees it that I really enjoyed all these Psalm illustrations! They were all so…[Read more]
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Banana Peacock Warrior started the topic *Insert Good Writing Quotes* in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
Hey! Got good quotes from authors/editors/other people you wanna share? I do! π Go ahead and add on if you wish. π
“Writing can become a career or remain a fun hobby. What matters most is that your writing brings hope and light to the world.” -Robin Jones Gunn (author of The Christy Miller series)
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Combining Character Flaws with Theme: How? in the forum Characters 6 years, 10 months ago
@thewirelessblade: I can’t say I’m totally sure what you mean. Is the problem giving your character a believable character arc that flows with the plot/theme? (I love character arcs… :D)
With ‘combining character flaws with theme’, I mean- a character flaw is one of the best things you can use, I think, to express a theme. Example (I guess): In…[Read more]
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Music And Writing…Are You Musical? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer: How cool! Yes, I’ve heard of them; that’s super awesome! And your first autograph?! That’s so cool! (LOL, more cool than my first autograph… I was, like, 6 and I got an autograph from the lead in my cousin’s school play…)
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years, 10 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer: No prob! π XD
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Abortion Poetry in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer: π Hahaha ik! *dramatically looks around with caution* …there are so many stalkers nowadays… XD XD XD Here… email me at kenziejoy1224@gmail.com π
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Music And Writing…Are You Musical? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer: LOL and about the chocolate- well, it’s good that you can still eat it in small amounts and – I mean – I guess dark chocolate isn’t the WORST! But yeah. I get you on the ‘can’t eat much of things that taste good’ thing. I have an intolerance to vanilla! (Of course, I still eat it, though. π XD)
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Abortion Poetry in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer: Right?! LOL we should just get each other’s contact info. or something; we’re probably taking up so much space on these forums… XD XD XD
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years, 10 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer: Cool! Thanks! Can’t wait to check it out…
@francis: Again, sorry, buddy! Thanks for accepting my apology! π
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Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Abortion Poetry in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 10 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer: LOL I feel like we’re racing to respond to each other on so many forums… XD
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