Livi Ryddle

@cassandraia… Yes, friend. Thank you. 🙂 I understand. And I understand so well, I have an announcement to make to the rest of you wonderful people.

@anne_the_noob14
@ariella-newheart
@evelyn
@ashira
@jane-maree
*inhales* Okay… here’s my announcement. Buddy J. has had to shelve writing for a little while. Life pretty literally jumped on his…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14 Great minds think a like, I guess! 😛

That’s just what we were missing! Perfect! Many thanks. 😄 But we need to get some Apple Cider in here. *disappears*

Thanks for telling us about your story, Anne! It sounds cool!! The mystery vibe is real. 😀

*prepares to spam your inbox come November* Are you sure you want this?…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart @anne_the_noob14 @elisha-starquill @christlover

Oops, forgot to tag you guys when I did this.

Racleva had been seated for half a second when a yelp echoed from the doorway. She groaned. Could there not be one moment of peace in that place?

Caedon darted up from next to her, dashing towards the door while Theseus followed closely. She saw a flash of frightened blue eyes, not far off the floor. A child?

Then Caedon slowly extended his…[Read more]

@elisha-starquill – What was your idea for a room?

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The creature calmed slightly when Caedon spoke to it. Theseus knelt down and held out his hand. Caedon was content to let him take the lead on taming the wolf—for he saw that it was not a dog after all. “Shhh. It’s okay girl,” Theseus whispered. “Don’t worry, we’re friends. What should we…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14 @elisha-starquill Thank you! It was really fun imagining how Runawin would react to the humans. The hardest part was thinking of how she would describe the doors. xD

@christlover I really enjoyed reading the part you wrote about Runawin! I like how she said, “I just woke up and found myself in this strange place” instead of…[Read more]

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@evelyn
@ariella-newheart
@sarah-vdh
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@anne_the_noob14
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@christlover
@elis…[Read more]

@wordsmith Precisely. *thumbs-up*

@anne_the_noob14 Thanks! That input is super helpful.

@jane-maree Yes, that does answer my question. Thank you so much! I’ll have to do a little editing to separate out the omniscient sections. 🙂

@anne_the_noob14 – Lol, if you liked her I can’t imagine what you’d think of my MC. 😛 But it’s not her fault. She’s a good person, and doing what she thinks is right. Remember, her only role model for the past six years was the most evil man on the planet, who’s been lying to her and manipulating her, so…yeah. xD

The more we go on, the more I…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14… I think one of the biggest issues with the TV show is that Michael Landon seemed to handle the part more like he was a celebrity than the character in the part.

@eden-anderson Okay then. XD

@anne_the_noob14 I’ll let you know!

@anne_the_noob14 @christlover Good job, guys! I did notice that both of you (I’m sure accidentally) referred to Racleva with her actual name instead of the fake one she provided. Other than that, it was perfect.

@christlover, I like how you portrayed Caedon! He would definitely stand up for Runawin to protect her.

Sorry that Theseus looked so bad…

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@anne_the_noob14 Have all the candy you’d like. I brought enough for everyone. *grins*

@wordsmith Thank you for your observation about cohesion! I think that’s what’s been bugging me about this WIP. I still have a lot to learn about writing in third person, it seems. Now to decide whether to make this story omniscient or limited. I’ll have to…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14… *bows* I am glad to be of the service of making my point clear. I hope nothing else was to be expected. 😉

@ariella-newheart… Quite so. To expect the unexpected all the time is a losing battle. One that cannot be won, and thus must let slide be. We prepare what we can and trust God that He has us ready forefather He gives…[Read more]

@eden-anderson @anne_the_noob14

I literally just started thinking about maybe doing NaNoWriMo yesterday.

So. Um.

Do you guys think it would be a good idea or no?

Frankly, I think it’d be good for me. I’m just scared to try it.

@anne_the_noob14  If I make it to 41,000, I will be very pleased with myself. 🙃

@pookiemonster Yes, welcome! Make yourself comfortable. 😊

@eden-anderson   The-Land-Of-Shame! Thank you for the seat.😄

@anne_the_noob14   I play on Java edition, so there are no “friends”☹️. But wouldn’t it be awesome if someone made a Story Embers Minecraft server! I mean, yeah, it would just be another thing distracting people from writing……buuuttt it would be a community dis…[Read more]