Livi Ryddle

“Brendin,” the man said, clasping Virtus’ offered hand in a strong grip. When he relaxed his hold, he scanned the room, as if searching for viable threats. This man was either trained as a bodyguard or soldier, something warrior-like. Or Virtus didn’t realize that normal people did that.

Virtus also did a quick assessment. All of the occupants…[Read more]

Alessio jumped to his feet, Nithel’s brows quirking in small confusion. He wasn’t going to run.

That didn’t feel normal, but… I just met him.

Nithel stayed low, watching as the new men stood, holding out his hand to the other, as Jaylin had him. Jaylin… Nithel cast his eyes about, where was he? Nothing. Maybe in the rows of shelves.

“My n…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14

Okay! Well, I don’t mind still talking to Dharin! Just for the rest of the castle, I needed to replace him.

I will bring in someone new soon!

Jaylin watched as the boy in the corner and the new man argued. He really didn’t care anymore. He just wanted to go home. Dharin was gone and everyone was being replaced by strangers. He remembered what Dharin had said about fading. It didn’t hurt. He wanted to fade. To go back to Brarlock to his brother and Marrill. He knew where he…[Read more]

The youth stared up at Nithel, his eyes starved. The ache in Nithel grew deeper, and tightened. There was a fight inside him. Choosing something. Nithel waited, silent.

Then like a veil, the Alessio’s eyes were closed. “Doubtless I have a certain distinction for being a walking tragedy and that certainly accents hope since there’s nothing els…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14

I’ve been laughing out loud at y’all’s characters’ thoughts about Vulferym XD Especially Nithel, figuring out what the names mean

I’m glad Nithel’s translation made you laugh!!! (:

How are you Livi?

Nithel brought a hand to his bare chin, rubbing it. His eyes lowered some in thought.

Then his chin jerked to the side, hands coming down. Alessio. Bowing to the man.

“Respectfully, sir, you are a ignominious liar.” Was spoken before Nithel could think further.

Nithel stood stunned a moment. Face stoic, watching Alessio for a time, before dra…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

Ok, your villain sounds AMAZING!!!! I’d love to hear about it, especially since I have a hard time with that sort of stuff and I love villains (well, certain villains).

Thanks for the advice! I took it and got some great answers! If you want to read more about Hakan, (my main villain), you can check out the topic, since I r…[Read more]

Okay, this is getting kinda confusing, but here we go.  Out of order part with Jaylin and Dharin. @anne_the_noob14

Jaylin nodded his head slowly. “I don’t know…Maybe we should try.” He stood up. “I’ll go get a piece of the mirror you broke, stay here.”

Dharin put his hand on Jaylin’s arm. “Are…are you sure that’s a good idea?”

Jaylin smi…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien @anne_the_noob14 @rusted-knight @joelle-stone @beth20

@anne_the_noob14

Oh! That’s a good idea!!

@anne_the_noob14

Sorry that was kind of abrupt there at the end

You’re fine!

And hopefully I wrote everyone ok!

Pretty good. But Nithel doesn’t stutter… he hasn’t yet at least. Not even when terribly afraid. The use of sir was good though, he would have done it. (:

I also have a hard time seeing him hiding in the shadows, but I can make it…[Read more]

@mischievous-thwapling

haha, thanks. I suppose that’s part of my “job,” being a writer and all.

Well, now you know you’re doing something right, lol

OH OHH!!! That’s so cool! *glances at Wylo, new respect for him welling up inside*

Ha ha! Thank you! I like coming up with quotes for each of my characters; something that defines what they believe…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14 So what happens if someone has no hate

The mirrors are so interesting!!

Nithel only saw himself. As he is, and all see him. Because he is open, and honest, about all but one thing. And that one thing is why he was slowly covered with fire.

I really should do a mirror like this for all my characters…. 🤔

But, anyways, well done…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14

Lol! Yeah, maybe we can do that. In my response I didn’t write the part where Dharin faded…so yeah, we can do that!

Thanks! *drinks tea gratefully*

I guess I’ll start with the out of context part lol!

Nithel turned around and stared at Jaylin. Apparently, he didn’t…

Suddenly Dharin yelled. Jaylin spun around and stared at his friend in shock. What is he doing? He slowly walked toward him.

“Hey, uh… are you okay?”

Dharin still stared at the mirror. “No. No, I’m not.”

Jaylin didn’t know what to say. “Um. I’m, uh, I’m sorry?” He tried.

Dhar…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14,

And yes, feel free to have him keep the feather (and/or mention her name, whatever). It’ll be so exhilarating if one day we open a book and see that in there. 🙂